Chinese Showbiz 2006: I Came from the Primordial Sacred Demon Sect

A place where one feels personally deficient. First, the exciting points of the protagonist's film and television endorsements and other achievements were not written down. Secondly, the protagonist pursues too much concreteness and spirituality, and always feels that the methods used are a bit vulgar and not grand enough. Thirdly, the protagonist goes around grabbing concrete objects and music spirits. After grabbing them, he doesn't find them to be of much use. They are all used for small actions. Fourthly, female celebrities feel a bit crazy when meeting the protagonist, and they are a bit homogeneous. Fifth, there are many places where the protagonist pretends to be cool, but I feel that the writing is not convincing. A few suggestions. First, add a long-term goal, such as the protagonist's goal of becoming a Taoist master and transcendence. Second, concreteness can be regarded as Tao seed. What the protagonist condenses himself can have characteristics, and he can plunder other people's to feed, and gradually change in quality. Third, you can add characteristics to the image. For example, the character of the male protagonist, the policeman, can be condensed. The temperament can be changed, so that all police officers will have a certain initial favorable impression of the protagonist when they see it. Those who have watched the movie will have more favorable impressions. Only what you condense on your own has this use. Fourth, the protagonist can be more generous in doing things. It does not necessarily have to arouse emotions to plunder. It can also be a favor and repayment. Fifth, female celebrities suggest breaking down the situation, supporting those who are lovers, and just having fun with those who are romantically involved. . . My personal opinion may not be correct!

The author's writing skills are good, the career line is also good, and the storyline is well put together. The only disconnect is the emotional line. Among the women who have slept with each other, they are all attracted to the protagonist at the beginning. The author has laid the groundwork and everything comes naturally. Then, there was nothing more. He disappeared after sleeping. There was no explanation or follow-up. Choo Ja Hyun, Xu Qing, Liu Tao, Dong Jie, Lin Chiling, all of them are left to fend for themselves. You yourself say that the entertainment industry is a Hehuan sect. If you don't arrange them well, aren't they waiting for green grass to grow on their heads and become green hair🐢? You are all on your own, and you are still afraid of starting a harem. If you have a one-night stand, what are you doing to pave the way for those women to fall in love with you? They are all concrete tools, and they will be thrown away after use.

Okay, okay, but can you continue to strengthen the protagonist's holy character˶o̴̶̷᷄‸o̴̶̷̥᷅˶? Modern novels tend to bias the protagonist's personality, which would be wrong.

The plot is very flat and I have no memory at all. After watching it, I only remember that the protagonist is a very useful stand-in. The magic monk is reborn like an ordinary wage earner. There is also a bit of a holy mother. The rest is gone. I wrote thirty or forty chapters for a bad movie. Who wants to watch it? Na

I don't want to ask for money when I am building a foundation. Come to the entertainment industry.

Author, hurry up and write. I guess in the next year, all Chinese entertainment articles will be about you.

I'll build a foundation-building real person to bravely enter the entertainment industry. I can sit at the same table with Doomsday, learn Wing Chun, and Pangu play basketball.

Mo Xiu is also doing traffic-style patriotic rice writing, I can't stand it anymore

Entertainment Feng Shui is good and helpful for spiritual practice😏

I found it on QReading and read it in one go. I couldn't help but come over and write a review. In my teenage years, Liu Yifei and Shu Chang had a special star status: 1. They were the youngest stars I knew from the beginning, only a gold brick older than me. This is important. For example, I met Pang Bing in "Huan Zhu" too early. At that time, I was not at the age of "knowing lust and admiring Shao Ai", and I had no special thoughts. "Literary Times" is so powerful that it almost reshaped my sense of Pang Bing, but only almost. Yifei Shuchang's status is unshakable. 2. Almost all of them filmed all their representative roles before they reached adulthood (Shu Chang's Sha Niu was a little later, but she was still no more than 20 years old), so my best memories of them will always be fixed at the peak of their appearance. Even though their appearance has declined in recent years, and even body management is not very professional, "I only have one kind of heroism, which is to see her 35+ birth chart and still like her." 3. Everyone has a window period for star chasing. When I saw Deng Ziqi in Singer 2 in 2014 when she was one year younger than me, I suddenly lost interest in all film and television entertainment. From then on, I only followed the gossip in Huayu novels and complaints videos. Until some time ago, I saw "Korean City, I Have a Door in the Future" and quit after watching a few pictures (I am not familiar with Korean entertainment), but the time span of 13-25 really shocked me. So when I think about myself, I think of them again. 4. I went to Baidu again, and I also saw that Shu Chang released an album when he was 10 years old. I clicked on the theme song, and it turned out to be "Half a Home Without Mom". I really listened to it! It turns out that I had seen Shu Chang a long time ago. It was not "The Secret History of Xiaozhuang" as I thought, but "A Single-Parent Home"! That's why I got so involved when I saw the author's chapter 30 breaking Shu Chang's defenses! Because I've already had this kind of obscenity (see the attached picture for proof)!