The Elden Lord of Baldur’s Gate

The author has never played DND at all. Level 18 mages in DND start their battles by triggering the chain accident spell. They don't need to recite a spell, but just have a bunch of golden bells, stone skin spells, immune magic weapons, etc. On their bodies. It won't hurt at all if you just stand there and cut as you please. Then the spell sequence is used to instantly cast three fifth-level spells such as Death Trap. Ignores saving throws and stacks up damage. Fireball can only be used against a bunch of weak chickens to clear the field, otherwise it will be useless. The higher the mage level is, the starting time will stop, and more than a dozen instant spells will hit your face before you recover. To be more traditional, put a protection against evil and then recruit the Abyss Demon. Watch you fight to the death with the big baby. Or with the finger of death, there is a chance that you will die directly without looking at the blood volume. You have no DND flavor at all

I feel that combat skills can be similar to the warrior skills of DND. You can increase your mastery through learning and leveling, and then you can do it. After getting a type of weapon, you can use all the combat skills it can support. After that, the sharpening knife can be used as a weapon qualitative change and weapon repair (after all, the crispy weapons of Soul 2 and the hard weapons of Soul 3 directly led to the repair system being too useful and useless, so the ring directly canceled it). After all, the concept of repair in the real world still exists, and it can even support the superposition of qualitative changes and enchantments in Soul 2 (do you like the ice stabbing sword enchanted by my Thunder Transformation and Miracle Sunshine Sword? Even the boss's weapon can be qualitatively transformed). Most adventurers in Faerûn still have to rely on equipment and themselves. The magic table even lifespan is very stingy. Either change the race (lich, dragonborn, demon, devil, etc.), Or become a druid. The noble magician can make young people but it is very expensive. The increase in the killing attribute of the magic ring is basically on the road to becoming a god.

There is no culture in the Ring of Law at all, and it is too gamified. This is not an online game article.

How about this look? I found it online and it looks pretty good

The content is okay, but the author is too Hyun Ah Yi. She starts to get sick when she sees a woman, which makes the main character act like a fool in most of the scenes with women.

Last night I had a sudden inspiration in my dream. I thought of a new title, called: "Baldur's Gate Launches!" Target the King of Elden! In this way, my novel can be called "Bo Qi Lao Deng Wang" for short. Well... Even the word "" can be removed. "Bo Qi Laodeng"

Well, if you have to throw the protagonist to hell, it is still the plot before it is released. The author is a real warrior. In an instant, he lost all desire to read it. I can imagine that you are just forcing the plot to Baldur's Gate 3. What's the point? The good thing about the Baldur's Gate game is that every player is the creator of the story. The focus is still on the setting of DND. What if the protagonist destroys the original plot? I have worked hard to save my family, but once I returned to the pre-liberation period, there was a female character who lost her memory. I don't know if the data is good or not, but you stepped on two poisonous points, or you put poison before it was put on the shelves, I don't know what to say!

My personal suggestion is to pay attention to the balance between both sides. Most people who know how to read this book like Baldur's Gate and Elden's Circle, and half of them will be disgusted by it. It's understandable that the game will attract people in the early stage and engage in magic ring explosions, but if it continues to be one-sided later, the readers who came to Baldur's Gate will soon be lost.

I feel like the main character is portrayed in a very vulgar way.

Do you think you have too many readers for doing this before it goes on the shelves? How can people trust you if you post an outline before putting it on the shelves? It seems you don't have any previous works. Not even adding 10 updates. Then let others see the strength.