This Shoujo Manga Artist Is a Real Problem

The protagonist lacks any real agency. He's just being pushed around by the other characters. And you're a manga artist, how can you write a protagonist like this? If you write a protagonist like this, then what about the background information: an orphan who completed three manga series? Is that true?

Actually, you could replace the dress-up doll with a Grand Blue character; that would definitely improve the art style.

Great! The writing and plot have both improved! I hope you can maintain this level of quality and not get like your previous two books, which focused too much on building a harem towards the end.

Is my Aine-chan finally going to stand up?

What is this? Is it original? But why is there a sea dream in it?

So disappointed

Wow, the author recognizes quite a few classic anime! "Ao Haru Ride" reminds me of "Ao Haru Chronicle." I bought the entire Tianwen Kadokawa manga set back then, but they're all out of print now. And then there's "Shakugan no Shana," "Zero no Tsukaima," and "Aria the Scarlet Ammo."

The title and content are completely unrelated!

Is he no longer updating his previous book? He's starting a new one.

Aside from Kaimu Kitagawa, I don't recognize any of the others. What anime are these from?