Treasure-Gathering Immortal Lord for Mortals

However, there are a few depressing points. First, the female cultivator Xin Ruyin seizes the ice spirit root of the body to solve the body of the Dragon Roar. The arrangement is okay. Second, the Red Dust Tribulation has written all the Mo sisters to death. In fact, it can be solved by taking it away in one stroke or bringing it back from the past in the finale. The third is Tiannan, Luan Xinghai, and Dajin. The three maps are passed around.

This book depicts a person in front of your eyes. He (Xiao Haozi) is looking for the eternal reward: You will see where he comes from and where he goes; What he leaves behind does not do, and what does he do: You see how he keeps rushing forward, until he gets there Finally, let's describe others who are lost in the mortal world from the negative side —because we can learn lessons from fellow Taoists.

Can Guang doesn't understand why there are always people who want to recruit Nangong Wan without thinking? Anyway, in the original work, Han Li accepted Nangong Wan's various misfortunes, except for a Six-Ding Tianjia Talisman, which basically brought no benefits. With the strength of the pig's feet in the foundation-building stage, even if Nangong Wan is put to sleep, Nangong Wan will not be able to go to Huang Maple Valley with him. If Nangong Wan is willing to follow Pigfoot in the early stage, and can be his bodyguard for a period of time, it will be of some use! However, it is impossible for Nangong Wan to follow Pig's Foot in the early stage. Only after Pig's Foot breaks through to the Dan Dan stage can she become a Taoist couple with Pig's Foot. But when Pig's Knuckle's cultivation reaches the Core Formation stage, Nangong Wan at the Core Formation stage will be just like Xiaomei and Chen Qiaoqian to him, a complete pendant. Instead of taking the risk of recruiting Nangong Wan, it is better to directly intercept the opportunity left by the powerful Hu Huashen!

Your book is creative, but the problem is that the plot is bland and boring, and the protagonist's character is too boring. I don't care whether your protagonist has Nangong Wan or not, but seeing you accept Nangong Wan or not, and then accept a bunch of female cultivators who are not as talented as the backstage, is simply funny, and it really made everyone laugh. No matter how ugly or talented your protagonist is, it will make Nangong Wan kill him 🤔 In the original work, Han Li was treated poorly because Han Li was too ugly and there was no reason for Nangong Wan to convince him. Didn't Han Li also fail to build the foundation? Nangong Wan is scheming but not a bad person. When you say you are worried about being killed, I can only think that your protagonist is too ugly and too talented. 😅 You don't need to care about the setting of the fairy world. You are unlikely to write about the fairy world. Even if you consider it, don't worry. It's not Han Li in reincarnation. Han Li, you don't have to worry anymore. Da Luo can't do anything to your protagonist. If you really want to make good friends, just send more resources to Han Li. Women are not important to Han Li. His favorite thing is Zi Ling. If you want to give it to him, you might as well give it to this girl. 🤭

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I think everyone has made a mistake. The original intention of taking Xin Ruyin in with pig's feet was just because of her talents in formations, not because of how deeply she loves her! Pig's feet themselves are quite selfish. It's like he had time to go back and save Zhang Tie after killing Master Jin Guang in the early stage, but he didn't! It's not that Pig's Feet is incapable of saving Zhang Tie, but that he doesn't want to take risks to save Zhang Tie, even if the chance of him being killed by Doctor Mo is very small. The same goes for Xin Ruyin. There are many ways to cure the Dragon Roar Body with pig's feet, such as using thousand-year elixir to suppress it, or taking the risk of asking Lei Wanhe to introduce Linghu Ancestor for help. In Zhushan's eyes, he and Xin Ruyin didn't have a deep relationship at first. At least the relationship between them was not as deep as the relationship between Zhushan and Zhang Tie. Therefore, Pig Knuckle is definitely not willing to waste too many cultivation resources or take too many risks for Xin Ruyin. To put it bluntly, even if Xin Ruyin died, there would not be much loss to the pig's feet. After all, Xin Ruyin is not the only array mage in the world of immortality. Xin Ruyin is just talented, and it does not mean that she is the only one who can repair the ancient teleportation array. After Xin Ruyin's death, Pig's Feet only needs to use a thousand-year elixir at most, and then he can ask a senior array master to help repair the ancient teleportation array. It would be even better if Xin Ruyin succeeds in seizing the body. He has obtained the maximum benefit at the minimum cost. Anyway, as long as Xin Ruyin takes over her body, her formation talent will not be affected. As for whether her body has been changed or not, it will have no impact on the pig's feet. When it comes to the issue of Little Green Bottle and Nangong Wan, Pig's Feet also has the same attitude, that is, how can we do more profit? If there were no cheats on the pig's feet, he would definitely take the risk to grab the Sky Vase, but with the cheats, there is no need to take the risk. The pig's feet can cut off Hu Nangong Wan, but you must first suppress your own cultivation, and then enter the Bloody Forbidden Land with Han Li. You can't let your external avatar sleep with Nangong Wan, right? If pig trotters really did this, there would definitely be more people scolding them! The most important thing is that even if the pig's feet sleep with Nangong Wan, except for the initial pleasure, there will be no benefits later! Moreover, there is a very small chance that Pig's Foot will be killed by the angry Nangong Wan. Although this chance is very small, there is no need for Pig's Foot to take this risk! On the contrary, Pig's Feet allowed himself to be transformed into the Bloody Forbidden Land, kill the Mo Jiao in advance, and also get the inheritance left by the powerful god-transformer. Isn't it more cost-effective than sleeping with Nangong Wan without thinking? In fact, Pig's Foot's character has always been like this. He can do good things without harming his own interests, but don't let him pay too much for others, or even risk his life. From the moment Zhu Tiao gave up cutting off the Hu Zhang Tian Ping, and later failed to save Zhang Tie, his character design was already established. Whether he is asked to save Xin Ruyin at all costs or sleep with Nangong Wan without thinking, it will lead to the collapse of Pigfoot's character and inconsistent or even contradictory behavior.

Can Guang really can't understand why so many people are against the heroine seizing the body? If Xin Ruyin took someone else's body to improve her cultivation qualifications, some people would be disgusted, that's normal, but the heroine took someone else's body to save her life! If the male protagonist seizes the body, some people will definitely worry about whether the male protagonist's descendants are still the male protagonist's children? But after the heroine seizes the body, it will not affect the blood relationship between the child and the hero. What is unacceptable? Anyway, I don't believe that someone suffering from a terminal illness would give up the chance of resurrection just because they care that it's not their own body, knowing that they can survive by changing their body. If there really is such a person, he is either a true Holy Mother or a mouth-crazy monster!

Accepting so many is completely a stud novel, but not accepting Nangong Wan, rejecting most of the harem readers

Anyway, I can't stand it if Nangong is not accepted as long as the harem is written.

Say you are a breeding pig, Nangong Wan will confiscate it. It's not a breeding pig. Even Xin Ruyin and the maid have taken it. It's harder to stretch and even harder to criticize😅

Turtles are really everywhere. If someone wants to be a stallion, turtles come out and ask others not to take them. They are really castrated mentally and want others to be castrated as well. I was puzzled. There are also many works written by single women and multiple women. If you have the time, why don't you read them instead of reading a few words from other authors? This book is due to the fact that Nangong Wanhe confiscated Xin Ruyin and failed to handle it, which led to readers not buying it. It is not because of overcharging. Overcharging is the core selling point of the book. It is recommended that you look for books in whatever genre you want to read, and don't go gibbering in other genres. Just act like a turtle, and don't let others act like a turtle all the time. Crying like a turtle will only make the author and other readers laugh.

Why don't you just say that you don't want to accept Nangong Wan in this book? You don't like Nangong Wan. I just read what you said below, saying that if you accept Nangong Wan, don't think about ascending to the immortal world. Are you afraid that Samsara Han Li will jump out of the book and beat you? If you don't want to accept it, just say so. If you still make a fuss, then I will tell you what I think of Samsara Han Li. Law Bar Reincarnation Han Li Reincarnation Han Li is so awesome, why didn't he jump out of the book and hit me? Sometimes I really want to say, these people who have always been afraid of reincarnation Han Li, who is the protagonist? Originally, I didn't have any bad feelings towards Han Li, but it turned out that nine out of ten books were there. Here, I took some chances, and there were a bunch of people below, saying what Han Li, the Taoist Patriarch of Samsara, Han Li, is fucked up! They made me hate even Han Li. It was so awesome. So, Lord of Samsara Hall? Taoist Master Han Li? Closed Loop? There are not many people who can write about the spirit world. They are here right from the beginning. Why are they afraid of Han Li? , Then I say, he is a Ji!!! I'm afraid, you let him jump out of the book and hit me, and what you said, Nangong Wan and Han Li had nothing to do with each other in the early stage, damn, everyone said to give it up, and Han Li will be targeted again, I said no, he is a Ji!!!!!!

It is recommended to have more female protagonists. Recommended collection: Nangong Wan, Xin Ruyin and Xiaomei, Dong Xuan'er, Chen Qiaoqian, Hong Fu, Zhong Weiniang and her master Jiang Yun, Nishang Fairy, Zi Ling and her mother Wang Menzhu, Fan Jingmei, Zhuo Ruting, Yuan Yao, Yanli, Wen Madam, Ling Yuling and her mother Wen Qing, Yinyue, Bingfeng, Han Zhixian, Mei Ning, Wen Siyue, Liu Yu, Gongsun Xing, Shidie Fairy, Xiao Cui'er, Nie Ying, Yan Ruyan, Bingpo Fairy, Song Yu, Tianlan Saint Lin Yin Ping, Mulan Prairie Saint Music Master, Feng Bing, Mu Peiling, Bai Yaoyi, Saint Ancestor Yuancha, Saint Ancestor Baohua, Dai'er, Fairy Black Phoenix, Jin Yue, Xianxian, Liu Leer, Bai Suyuan, Mo Caihuan, Mo Yuzhu, Mo Fengwu, The four wives of the Mohist family (Yan, Li, Liu, Wang)

The biggest flaw of this book is that there are too many female protagonists. According to the author, there are close to 30 in the Human World chapter! After all, 2 or 3 articles on cultivating immortals are enough. You want to cultivate immortality, not sow seeds! Why do you want so much! ! ! !

Regarding the issue of body snatching: First: If you write it like this, it will make the article feel uncomfortable, and it will feel aggrieved when compared with other fans; Second: After the body snatching, it is not the original one, the body is completely replaced, and the appearance has changed directly. Readers will feel uncomfortable, not the kind of "pure or pure love" kind of reaction, but simply the feeling of "is she still the same person?" There is no need for the author to say that the soul is still the same. People already have both body and soul, and the spiritual cage is set up well. If the body is changed, it will definitely be affected by the original owner of the body. After the body is taken away, some readers will feel strange and confused when they see this character, and they will subconsciously feel that it is not the same person; Third: Have you ever seen a heroine in a novel who takes someone else's body? How can such a heroine be popular; Fourth: In readers' stereotypes, seizing one's body means flaws and there will be hidden dangers. Immortal cultivation emphasizes the gathering of the three flowers of essence, energy, and spirit. If the body is taken from someone else's body, it will be difficult to achieve great success. Some people with residual souls are even more hidden dangers. The author writes like this to create anxiety for readers all the time.

Is this the level 5 author? There is too much water🥵🥵

The further you go, the more it becomes like a running account. I spent 60 years to deal with the tribulation of the mortal world, and then switched to the Qingyuan Sword Technique. I am really speechless.

I suggest the author not to kill the little Ma Ge in the lower world like other fans. Because there is no injustice or enmity. The benefits are completely disproportionate. Killing him can only yield a few True Soul Pills and an immortal weapon of the same level as the Xuantian Treasure. Purely thankless. They are looking for the little green bottle in the lower world. The little green bottle is not with the protagonist. There is no need to support model workers. The most important thing is that he is the direct descendant of Jiuyuanguan Taoist ancestor. Killing him would offend Daozu. Moreover, Brother Xiao Ma sacrifices blood to many foreign races in the spiritual world in the lower realm. Killed so many Mahayana. Purely to expand the living space for human beings. This is a good thing. The harder he kills. The protagonist will ascend in the future. Wives and concubines are safer. And maybe Brother Ma did it on purpose. Because the human race dominates the fairy world. It's just that the human race in the lower world is so unsatisfactory. Not to mention dominating the spiritual world. Not even a wealthy family. Reduced to keeping warm with the spirit beasts. It's really embarrassing

Stallion novels were all rejected by Han Paopao. Fortunately, Xin Ruyin at least has the heart to seek truth. Apart from her family background, Chen Ruyin has nothing but a waste of resources on her.

If you have a mustache. Extremely yin. Catch it and collect it from Yunlu. Plus good fortune elixir. Everyone is talking about whether Yunlu can break through the Yuan Dynasty 😏

There are so many poisonous points that I can't even read the free chapters. It feels like the author is taking things for granted, and many details cannot stand up to scrutiny, and there is no sense of immersion.

It's rare for someone to write about the fairy world. I thought it was going to be finished. Come on, author.

What kind of article are you writing? I don't understand... Opening a harem but not accepting popular female protagonists, and choosing roadside female partners to make up the numbers. Firstly, it cannot attract popular female protagonists in anime, secondly, it cannot attract high-quality harem parties, and thirdly, it rejects single-female career parties. I want to ask, who are your target readers?

Can Guang, you actually update 30,000 every day. One million updates per month. Such an evil and lazy Jiedushi envoy. It is simply outrageous. You join me in calling for mutiny. Cut off the residual light. I was recommended to be the governor of Jieduli. I spent all my wealth on military supplies. After becoming a Jiedushi, I can also take out loans and give rewards. Share wealth and honor with all the kings. Isn't it beautiful?

Mortals are rich and their modeling is exquisite

I originally thought that if Nangong Wan was not accepted, the protagonist would have a normal mind. Collect purple spirits? Isn't Zi Ling a Han Li woman?

It's tied, which feels pretty good. I remember that the author used to have copies of mortals in One World, and the mortal animation was not yet popular at that time.

There's nothing wrong with it, it's just too rough. To put it simply, the details are too poor. There are basically no details. It doesn't matter if it's watery at all. But the key is that it doesn't have a good sense of immersion. Some of the plots are there in a vague way, and it just passes.

"Mortal: Competing with Han Li, winning in learning and cultivating immortality"

Some of the plots are inexplicable. I read several chapters several times and it came out out of nowhere. I read it several times before I was sure that I didn't miss it. It was too rough.