Gu Aotian Starting from Douluo Continent

The reason why Can Guang keeps writing more and more is because he loves to be influenced by book reviews. He has to care about the thoughts of this and the thoughts of that, which makes both parties unhappy and his writing rhythm is also messed up.

Why is it pretending to be the way instead of forcing the way? It's so hard to guess 🙂

Douluo Dalu 2 Peerless Tang Sect also has Ten Thousand Soul Flags and Martial Spirits, but they are called Holy Spirit Flags... It's a pity that Can Guang can't read Douluo 2

Writing the Condor as the Land of the Undead... Isn't it a good idea?

It still looks good since Doupo, very pleasing to the eye!

No, when you publish a new book, why don't you promote the previous books? After waiting for a long time, you still go to the author's homepage and find out that there is a new book.

Don't ask gods to do operations. Those who are close to Mo will be black.

I've read all of Chikage's books. The first and middle stages are okay. Often pulls the crotch later. You can't fill the hole you buried. Write about so many worlds. Neither has a suitable ending. Also, I change worlds so frequently. I felt a bit immersive when I just watched it. The world suddenly changed. I feel so uncomfortable watching it. This feeling of separation is too serious. You can't finish one world plot and then write the next one. Even if you want to write about several worlds at the same time. But you should write a few less worlds first. At least this way the plot won't change so frequently. And it's easy to fill holes

Afterglow. Your writing style is quite good when it comes to astronomy. But when can you stop writing so many worlds at once. It is enough to write one or two at the same time. After I finish writing, I will write about the same situation in other worlds. This also makes it easy to fill holes. The plot doesn't have to jump directly to the finale. This way the plot will advance more smoothly. It won't affect the look and feel. Changing the worldview every few chapters is too bad. For example, the first ten chapters are about Douluo. In the tenth chapter, sketching biochemistry. The last ten chapters are about the destruction of ghosts. Then came another Zhan Chitong and Dou Po. I really can't tell the difference 🔪🔪

A clan that accepts subordinates. What a concept. You might as well be reasonable as the Packing Blacksmiths Guild.

You might as well say that the Substitution Technique is a conceptual version of the Substitution Technique after the system has been enhanced. Naruto's Substitution Jutsu is a very rubbish ninjutsu. All three techniques are only deceptive. The Substitution Technique does not replace oneself and objects, it is the power of the sky. The Substitute Technique is to draw the prepared wooden board and run away to deceive the opponent's hit target. It is not used to avoid attacks, but can be avoided in the first place. This is a very rubbish ninjutsu, no different from a trick

Can Can Guang write about eternal life this time? There are also Genshin Impact, Mingchao, Zhanshuang, and Xingtie

To be honest, these pictures are not as good as the last one, a bit hard to read.

What anime will you write about? Spell Attack, Kimetsu no Yaiba, Full-time Hunter, Dragon Maid, Jobless Reincarnation, Reincarnated Slime, Shield Yong, Shen Yong, Earth Mistake, JOJO, Violet, Zero, Noragami, God Killer, Seven Sin, game life, battle, Kamen Rider, Pokémon, Inuyasha, Naruto, One Piece, Bleach, OVERLORD, Sword Art Online, Buried Frilian, Doraemon, Sentai, Demon Card Girl Sakura, Problem Child, Black Clover, Seraph of the End, Magic Forbidden, Yu-Gi-Oh, Labyrinth Rice, Ultraman, Fate, Nano Core, Shadow Power, Spy Play House, Saiki Kusuo's Disaster, Welcome to the Classroom of Supremacy of Strength, Tutor, EVA, Charlotte, Tokyo Ghoul, Shokaku no Sakai, To the Immortal You, Witch's Journey, School Apocalypse! Academy City, Fantasy World Uncle, Fictional Mystery, Danganronpa, Bungou Stray Dogs, The Hero Story of the Fallen Knight, Everyday Life, Animal Rhapsody, Guilty Crown, Unknown Flower Name, The Invisible Girl, Cell at Work, The Prince of Tennis, Fantasy Front, Dragon Clan, Persona, Natsume's Book of Friends, the American TV series "Heroes" , Fake Love, Chinese Little Boss, Another World Diner, Kuroko's Basketball, Black Butler, Girls' Last Journey, The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya, Steins; Gate, Macross, Rurouni Kenshin, The Grandson of the Slicker, Scarlet Bullet's Aria, Demon King Brave, Shakugan Shana, Iron Armored Treasure, Chuunibyou Also Fall in Love, Light Sound Girl, Under One Person, Under Sakamoto, Kino's Journey, Spirit Cage, Douluo, Dou Po, Stealing Stars in September, Nezha Series, Fox Demon Matchmaker, Three-Body Problem, Luo Xiaohei's War Diary, Star Travels, Super Beast Arms, Chinese Boy, Wu Liuqi, Young Song Xing, Myth, Legend of Sword and Fairy, White Snake, Qin Shi Mingyue, Monster List, Legend of the Seven Heroes of Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit, Wu Gengji, Once Upon a Time there was a Spirit Sword Mountain, Super Seminary, The Supreme Being, Lord of Mysteries, Go Boy, Magic Sword Life and Death Chess, Nano Core, Calabash Baby, Kuiba, Armored Warrior, Magic Soldier, Dragon Nest, Lotus Lantern, Seven Fairies of Happy Land, Zhu Bajie Series, Romance of the Three Kingdoms

I always feel that the author's writing skills are still at the same level. This book sounds like the last two books, not counting the Doomsday one. Change the soup but not the medicine

I would like to write about Honkai Impact, Genshin Impact, Ming Tide, and Zero Zone Zero...

Why do you feel so messed up? How could Douluo have Huang Rong? Xuanbing Longxiang?

The protagonist has an IQ problem, and there is no one left with a thousand-year-old soul ring. Even if the system can replenish it, it will still cost more than 90,000 system coins. I don't know how many good things I can get with this coin.

Judging from the complaints from book friends and the author's response, there is indeed a plot contradiction of **"high combat power but low profit"** - the protagonist **Gu Aotian** is set against the sky (6-year-old twin martial souls, full hundred thousand year soul rings), but in the selection of key soul rings **forced wisdom**, giving up top resources (Ice Emperor, Snow Girl, Tianmeng), instead chose **Three Jun Ant Emperor brothers (not even one hundred thousand years old)** As the second martial soul's high-level soul rings (seventh, eighth, and ninth rings), this is obviously illogical and a waste of the protagonist's cheating settings. --- ### **Core Analysis of the Problem** 1. **[Combat Power Collapse]** - The protagonist's first spirit has **full hundred thousand year spirit rings + titled Douluo**, and the second spirit's **seventh, eighth, and ninth rings** should pursue **million years (Tianmeng), 700,000 years (Snow Emperor), 400,000 years (Ice Emperor)** This level, instead of catching the Fifteen Ant Emperor who is not even 100,000 years old. - **Reader Expectation**: The cheating protagonist should **maximize the use of resources** and directly conquer the top soul beasts instead of "picking up garbage". 2. **[Lack of plot plausibility]** - The author explained **"Other soul beasts are not that stupid"**, but: - Tianmeng Iceworm took the initiative to seek sacrifice from Huo Yuhao in "Douluo 2", and the Ice Emperor also compromised for becoming a god - **High-level soul beasts may be moved by benefits**. - The protagonist is titled Douluo + Twin Spirits at the age of 6. He is much stronger than Huo Yuhao at the beginning. There is no reason why he cannot defeat the Ice Emperor and Snow Girl. - **The forced selection of the Giant Ant Emperor** can only be explained as **the author deliberately suppresses the protagonist**, but this conflicts with the cheating setting, causing readers to be dissatisfied. 3. **Splendid Destruction** - When readers watch Zhutianliu/Wudiliu, they just want to see **"The protagonist uses the advantages reasonably and sweeps everything"**, not **"It is obvious that he can crush it, but he has to take detours"**. - Choosing a **"low-cost-effective soul beast"** like the Thousand Ton Ant Emperor can neither improve combat power nor be necessary for the plot. It is simply a waste of martial arts skills**. --- ### **Solution (How should the author change it?)** #### **Option 1: Directly conquer the top soul beasts (in line with cheating settings)** - **Ice Emperor, Snow Emperor**: The protagonist can suppress them by force, or negotiate on the condition of **"helping them break through to the god level"**. - **Brother Tianmeng**: A million-year-old soul beast with spiritual power can definitely actively seek cooperation with the protagonist (refer to the plot of Douluo 2). - **Silver Dragon King**: The protagonist already has god-level combat power, so we can directly talk about **"joining forces to conquer the God Realm"**. **Result**: The plot is more compact, the combat power is not wasted, and readers enjoy watching it. #### **Option 2: Set reasonable restrictions (if the author does not want the protagonist to be too invincible)** - **Divinity intervention**: When the protagonist wants to capture the Ice Emperor, the gods send law enforcers to obstruct it (for example, the God of Thunder sends a divine punishment). - **Soul Beast Conditions**: Tianmeng requires the protagonist to help it regain its strength before willing to sacrifice it. - **Silver Dragon King Test**: Gu Yuena asked the protagonist to prove his worth (such as single-handedly challenging a god-level clone) before deciding whether to cooperate. **Result**: Maintain a sense of tension, but still allow the protagonist to obtain high-end resources. #### **Option 3: Completely rewrite the plot of the Giant Ant Emperor (if you must keep it)** - **Special settings for the Giant Ant Emperor**: For example, they are actually **hidden million-year soul beasts**, just disguised as ten thousand years, and the protagonist sees through them and subdues them. - **Conspiracy Theory**: The God Realm has manipulated the Giant Ant Emperor, and the protagonist triggers divine punishment after absorbing it, and is forced to fight against the God Realm in advance. **Result**: Even if you choose the Giant Ant Emperor, you can still write a high-value plot. --- ### **Why is the author not handling it well at the moment? ** 1. **The combat power setting is out of touch with the plot**: The protagonist is given invincible equipment, but he is not allowed to use it reasonably. 2. **Over-reliance on the original routine**: In Douluo 1, Tang San chose the Thousand Ton Ant Emperor because he had no choice, but **Gu Aotian had a better choice**, so forcibly copying it would be against the law. 3. **Afraid that the plot will get out of control**: You may be worried that the protagonist is too strong and will make it difficult to write later, but the **suppression method is too blunt** (choose a garbage soul ring), which will ruin the perception even more. --- ### **Final conclusion** - **Book friends are right**: The protagonist has such a strong configuration, but choosing the Giant Ant King is a **"intelligence reduction operation"**, and a complete waste of settings. - **The author should adjust**: - **Either let the protagonist reasonably conquer the Ice Emperor, Tianmeng, and Silver Dragon King** (in line with the cool points of the world); - **Or add high-value settings** to the Giant Ant King (such as hiding the potential of millions of years). - **Otherwise**: This kind of **"cheating but pretending to be weak"** writing style will only make readers feel that **"the author is forcing the plot"**, and ultimately the reputation will collapse. It is recommended that the author **face the contradiction in the setting** and either completely let go and write the invincible flow, or plan the restrictions in advance and stop letting the protagonist do **"confused behavior"**.

They have been offering sacrifices for three hundred thousand years. Go to the far north to find the Ice Emperor Snow Girl. One is 400,000 years and the other is 700,000 years. Brother Tianmeng is one million years old, and the Silver Dragon King is the God King...

1. The author himself did not introduce the protagonist of the novel, and pretended to be unreasonable in consumption, and a lot of it was wasted. (In reality, you have to think about how to spend and save money?) The author is completely immersed in the vision of God and goes to waste. ""First of all, the reader must feel it is reasonable."" 2. The limit of martial souls is too high, and the soul ring skills are inconsistent (it may be that the performance of this book is not good. The soul ring skills are not designed at all. And it relies solely on this word count.) 3. Don't have any more souls that have tens of millions of years or hundreds of millions of years. After the god level, there are god level realm classifications. (Priest...) The original work divided the levels of god-level soul masters, which is relatively clear and can be used. <The soul beast is not given, and it is still quite chaotic. Just use the god-level classification. 4. Try not to write too much about what happened during this period of time for a child who is over 6 years old. Most books rarely deal with children. "The author has several books written by little brats? But which one has good results?" 5. The inability to upgrade without a soul ring is restricted by the rules of the Douluo world. When the protagonist travels through the world of vultures and bad guys, he can upgrade even if there are no world rules to suppress the soul ring. (This book said that there is a thunder tribulation in the soul beast's breakthrough, which is not a problem in itself. But you were not in Douluo at that time, and it can't control it.) Also in the later period, the protagonist is obviously level 99. In fact, he can break through level 100 by just going to any world to get rid of the restrictions of Douluo Star. In the end, he forced himself to level 99. If there is no god in the Douluo Universe worldview, it can be upgraded later. Douluo Star is difficult to break through to level 100 due to plane restrictions.

I remember that this author was not the one who tortured Xiao Yan, worshiped the master, licked Tang San, and drugged Bibi Dong Liu Erlong Yu Xiaogang five or six years ago?

Secondly, Can Guang's colleagues are gods, and other literature has a strange smell.

Hey hey hey, here I come again! ! ! Blood is like ink stains! ! !

{The courage to be hated} * Hantengu: His core is extreme cowardice and selfishness, an extreme manifestation of "fear of being hurt", which is completely opposite to "having the courage to face being hated". * Yutsubo: He is addicted to distorted "art" and longs to be "appreciated" (although his understanding is distorted). When he is denied (such as when Muichiro Tokiro said Tsutsubo is ugly), he will become furious. What he lacks is the courage to "accept criticism", but the breadth and depth of being "hated" is far less than that of the prostitute Taro. * Fallen Princess: As the sister of the prostitute Taro, she also experienced being "hated" due to her disfigurement, but she was more protected by her brother and externalized her resentment into arrogance and vanity. Her core is not as profound as her brother's, more like a resentment and anger caused by the loss of beauty.

There were some bad points before more than 70 chapters, which looked uncomfortable, but the level improved significantly after that, which was very good, as was the original version. Canguang was a problem at the beginning, but it got better later on. Didn't get into the state when you first started writing? But the toxic points will affect the reading experience and reader retention.

When does Can Guang plan to publish a new book?

Afterglow. Why haven't you finished it yet? I can't use all the coupons I received from q-reading. Click to finish it

Come on, write better in the next book and restore your food and grass. Don't let your readers down again.

Come to Conan. How about the Card Master Drizzt template or the One Piece Hawkins template?