Everything Starts from Fighting Against the Sky

I've read dozens of chapters! The author may have some parts that are directly copied from the original work, but he is a genius at copying and pasting! So I teased him that he was copying the original work! There was an error in one of them, and it was immediately obvious. It was obviously selling Dou Zhe Dan, but the receptionist at the back said it was spiritual liquid. The other thing is this setting, which is contrary to the original work! In my impression, Xiao Yan still has feelings for the Xiao family! Even though he has traveled through time, his mother is indeed his biological mother. The only relic left to him that could calm him down was replaced? Someone explained to him that he wanted to recover with strength and was under great pressure because of the rumors outside, in order to go further! Okay, I'll accept it for now. In addition, the author seems to have made a mistake about Yaolao's realm. In my impression, there should be no ninth grade when it is in the ring! Finally, you flirt with Xiao Xun'er. Xiao Xun'er still seems interested in you. In my opinion it shouldn't exist. Because in the original work, Xiao Xun'er cares about Xiao Yan! There should be no interest in other people. I haven't read the rest of what the author wrote. But I have noticed that you want to take Xiao Xun'er into your harem. The plot is really awkward, and I also want to say nc, so I can't wait to complain about it. I will continue to look at it. If the author writes like this: (The protagonist is "Xiao Yan", but he has changed his name to Xiao Xie, added some new things and re-read the plot, then I will say goodbye). Let's take a look now. I hope your worship system can break out of the framework of Doupo and bring a new feeling. 🤓

After reading Chapter 28, the meeting with Ya Fei and the Little Medical Fairy was just to take advantage and create some ambiguity. Why not just take them into the harem? Then I traveled back in time to "A Little Smile Is Alluring". What's so good about this bad drama starring a young actor? Very discouraging

The plot is childish, a lot of embarrassing words are used in the article, the author is brainless in writing, and it is so forced that you can't continue after reading it for a while.

Are you keeping a running account? What the hell did you write?

I want to know, everything starts from Fighting to Break the Sky, and the one at the end gives Qianying Canguang a game life system. I am looking forward to that one. I hope to start with Everything from Fighting to Break the Sky, and see if it can be connected in series, or written separately. And also the author, Da Da, write all your novels or several novels in series at the end. I think it will be great, but it will definitely be difficult to write. Please give me a reply from the author.

A good book is a good book, but there are still a lot of loopholes, and I always feel that the book was finished hastily.

1. Hello everyone, I am Gu Yuan. I have lived for thousands of years, but I am not married yet. Recently, I feel that the protagonist is about to appear, so I plan to get married and have a daughter to be a sugar daddy. Sure enough, my wife gave birth to a girl. When my daughter was two years old, I calculated that the protagonist was in the Xiao family, so I decided to give my two-year-old daughter a task to steal the Xiao family. The ancient jade, in fact, I just want to ask my daughter to seduce the protagonist, otherwise I can go to the Xiao family to exchange for the ancient jade with a book of mysterious skills, and our ancient clan is very powerful, so I sent a Douhuang to protect my precious daughter, 2, Hello everyone, I am Xun'er's mother, don't ask me what my name is, I don't know , I feel like I have reached the pinnacle of my life recently. I married the patriarch of the ancient tribe, and then gave birth to a daughter. Well, she is very talented and beautiful. I originally thought that I should be richer than the daughter, but I don't seem to have any sense of existence. Others may think that I will die after giving birth to my daughter, but I can marry the patriarch, and my cultivation is also very strong. Give birth to a child. I feel like I can't die. 3 Hello everyone, I am Mr. Ling. The ancient clan sent me, an old man at the peak of fighting emperors, to protect Xun'er, the eldest daughter that the family regards as a treasure. And recently, Xiao Yan always comes to take advantage of our eldest daughter, but I still pretend not to see it. Don't ask me why, the clan leader ordered, 4 I am Xun'er. My father doesn't want me anymore and lets me steal things. And I am only a few years old. When I was a child, I felt a little brother coming to my room, but I pretended not to know because he was like this to me. It was also very comfortable. When I grew up, I fell in love with him. I was still devoted to him. Later, he opened a harem. , I am definitely the protagonist, but I have been disabled for several years, and my engagement was annulled today, but I am not afraid, I fought back very hard, and sure enough, my golden finger arrived, I got Fen Jue, and there was a powerful teacher, my teacher It is said that every time you practice Fen Jue, you will swallow a lot of different fires and you will die. Fen Jue has to swallow a lot of different fires to be awesome. There are only 24 different fires in the Continent, and some of them are not known yet. They are very precious. There are a lot of fighting saints from those ancient tribes, but they are only available to the ancient tribes and the soul tribe. There are strange fires, but I'm not afraid. I'm the protagonist. As long as I need them, I believe there will be news about the strange fires. And I'm a fighting master, so I'll fight the Douzong and Douhuang to force the strange fires. But I'm not afraid. Am I the protagonist? Sure enough, I Finally I got it, they are all useless, 6, Hello everyone, I am passerby A, my family's strongest Kung Fu is the Xuan level and intermediate level. After I stole it, I copied more than a dozen books, and I also copied some fighting skills. I ran away secretly. Every time I went to a city, I hid my identity and took a copy to sell. I have traveled to many places and bought a lot of money. Today I met a local martial arts method. I bought it. I plan to go home. I feel that although I I sold the exercises passed down from my family, but I bought better ones. When I returned to my family, I dedicated the exercises to the clan leader. Then the clan leader thought that my business was dishonest and that the ones passed down from my ancestors were better than anything else, so he locked me up. 7. Hello everyone, I am Hun Qianmo. Thousands of years ago, I used the strength of a one-star Dou Sheng to surround Xiao Xuan, who was at the top of the Dou Sheng. He forced him to explode three kinds of strange fire! I escaped completely! And within a thousand years, my skill increased greatly and only reached six stars! In my eyes, Xiao Yan's leapfrogging battles are all a p. 8 Hello everyone, I am a heaven-level fighting skill, and I feel that there is a lot of pressure. As long as you take one xy glance at the divine horse, you will be able to practice it to a small degree, and the power will be greatly increased. If you take two glances, you have reached the level of proficiency, and you can kill people across levels without pressure. This makes our creator feel embarrassed. 9Hello everyone, I am Old Devil, an old devil. I used my strength to make a palm print on the Xuanzhong Ruler used by Douzong at his peak.                                                              11Hello everyone, I am Han Feng. I said back then that if I swallowed the Fallen Heart Flame with my peak Douhuang strength, I wouldn't be afraid of the half-saint's rogue Heavenly Ruler! 12 Hello everyone, I was the one who invited Han to the Space Fair on behalf of the ancient clan to the powerful people in Zhongzhou. I invited Xingshu Pavilion because there was a semi-saint in Xingshu Pavilion, but I had no idea that there were Dou Sages in the first tower, two sects, and three valleys, so I didn't invite them. 13 Hello everyone, I am the leader of the Sky Demon Phoenix Clan. After receiving the news about the Dragon and Phoenix Origin Fruit, I actually just sent the 5-star Dou Zun.

Stallion text, if it's a female, just do it

I hope the next world will be a Douluo. Add one to those who feel the same way.

In another dozen chapters, the protagonist will go to other worlds to show off. There are now three world options, namely "Legend of Sword and Fairy 1", "Naruto" and "Pacific Rim". You can leave a message in the comment area and choose the world you want to go to. Canguang will read your messages and finally decide which world to go to.

Chapter 11 is too awkward, with no foreshadowing at all. The protagonist is just a stranger to Xiao Xun'er, and then directly teases Xiao Xun'er in front of Xiao Yan. To put it bluntly, he is acting like a gangster. I don't know how I finished reading it a few years ago.

Other authors are fine if they don't destroy Japan, but this author is better. He still has the heart of the Holy Mother to overflow to save Japan. Are you Japanese?

I don't understand. Isn't it good to help reduce inflammation and become an emperor? After all, it is a world-dominating combat power. As for women, I think Yunyun is enough.

Overestimated his poison resistance and eventually died in Chapter 46

This is the first two-dimensional fan fiction I have read. I thought it was good before, but now I realize that it is a mindless pretense of harem thieves and their motherfuckers.

I feel that selling Yao Lao at the beginning is the biggest highlight of this book. I have read that many fans think that Yao Lao trained Xiaoyan just to test Burning Techniques and facilitate body seizing. Otherwise, why, as a ninth-level alchemist of the Yao Clan, would he choose local level skills and Burning Techniques for Xiaoyan at the beginning, and the fighting skills given also focus on body training. I feel sick when I look at those fans who kneel down and lick Yao Lao. They have just been tricked by their disciples. Now, you are a stranger kneeling and licking, and it is a good thing if you don't get silenced. As for those who are seizing the opportunity to eliminate anti-inflammatory, they are simply speechless. If you don't find an opportunity to secretly extinguish anti-inflammation, you have a correct outlook on life. The world is too small to accommodate two time travelers, and anti-inflammation is not a good person. If you are the mainstay of the human race like Fengyun Wuji, there is no problem in licking, but like anti-inflammation. Let's forget about the Long Aotian-style protagonist who is a warlock, burns, loots, and confiscates homes and families. If he doesn't kill him secretly, he will definitely have no chance 🤫

It's considered a trick, and it was quite enjoyable when I first watched it. Now...

Fighting through the sky and soaring to the level of Coiling Dragon made me spurt out a mouthful of tea! Is this the wrong frequency? Shouldn't it be a copy of the Great Overlord? It seems like when playing The Elder Scrolls, the next map suddenly changes to Fallout 4. There must be a limit to adaptation, right?

What should I say, I just read a few chapters and it feels very poisonous. The protagonist's temperament changed drastically after time travel. Don't tell me that it was affected by Xiao Xie's memory. It clearly stated that it will not affect the protagonist. Don't say that the protagonist's original personality is like that. I don't think a nerd can do what the protagonist did to trick Xiao Yan for his own benefit and even sold Yao Lao. And The protagonist still has a system, and you already have a system, why are you trying to grab Yao Lao's ring? Just grab it, squeeze out Yao Lao's value in an instant, let the system recycle the ring, and directly kill Yao Lao... This is really cruel and ruthless. If I travel through time like this, I can't do it, at least as an ordinary person, I can't do it. Then the plot is not rigorous, and I don't know if the author has seen Doupo. Xiao Yan's ring is not worn on his hand, but is hung around his neck, and the ring is very important to Xiao Yan, which is not shown here at all. Yao Lao was an eighth-level peak alchemist at the beginning, and here he is directly at the ninth level, and the ring is not only Yao Lao's. The soul still has a lot of Yao Lao's collection, but it doesn't matter. Anyway, the protagonist has recycled the ring, and I have been successfully persuaded by these operations. I hope the author can read the original work before writing, and don't go to Baidu and start writing on a whim. This is not only irresponsible to the readers, but also irresponsible to his own work. I wish the author can write a satisfactory work. I apologize that I really don't appreciate this book, so I will say goodbye.

Rubbish articles, everything is sent out, and what you get is a mess.

He sent Xiao Yan away to go through the road of fighting again. . . . . .

For the worlds he has been to before, Can Guang will choose to refine them carefully or write them roughly based on the final actual situation, but the final ending will definitely be perfect. After all, the purpose of this book is to see the protagonist show off, not to abuse the master. The protagonist's cultivation level will be almost restored in three or four worlds. However, when the protagonist's cultivation level is restored, it is estimated that the finale will not be far away. Can Guang has already begun to conceive of the final finale. The imagination will be very big and it will definitely not disappoint everyone.

Author, you copied too much from the original text, and the development is directly the same as the original text. Have you forgotten the butterfly effect, and it feels like the protagonist has completely forgotten about the original work.

It doesn't matter if you go to Doupo to rob other women, but you rob Xiao Xun'er? It has been conquered by Xiao Yan since he was a child. If Xiao Yan doesn't die, others will have no chance! How can this book of yours be regarded as fan fiction? Will it kill you if you respect the original work?

The Dou Po fanfic can only be read by the Elemental Gods.

This writing is so rubbish, it contains all sorts of nonsense.

Yes, I have a great evaluation of this book. I am very optimistic about this book.

Fighting through the sky - Smiling is charming - Sword and Fairy III - Love Apartment - Qin Shi Mingyue - One Piece - Breaking through the Dou Emperor's Ascension to the Coiling Dragon World - Hua Qiangu - Super Seminary - Marvel Universe - Three Lives, Three Lives and Ten Miles of Peach Blossom - Painting Rivers and Lakes - Legend of Sword and Fairy III - Journey to the West - Saint Seiya - Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty - Pacific Rim - Covering the Sky

The moment Yaolao was sold, the entire Doupo worldview collapsed.

Not bad, not bad, self-recommended, Samsara Eye of All Heavens, multiple female protagonists, and has now entered the world of Inuyasha. There are some pictures to see