
Mortals, Start by Getting Qingtian Gourd
凡人,从获得青田葫芦开始
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- Ongoing
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- 374k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The seven factions who joined the arena, you told me that they don't have foundation-building pills? If you have to go to the Bloody Forbidden Land, why don't you find another reason? Forcibly changing the setting of the original work The cheats given to the protagonist are not as big as those in the original work. The protagonist planned for a long time to get the towering fortune dew, but the result cannot be copied, then you have written a lonely story
You are a god who writes based on anime. Since you write a novel, you must at least follow the setting of the original novel. Let's not talk about how many details are left out in the anime. How many chapters can you write based on the plot of the anime that only reaches Nascent Soul?
Perception
It's a big hang-up, but the author deliberately ignored many things in order to follow the plot. The way to obtain the Foundation Establishment Pill is not only to enter the Bloody Forbidden Land, but to participate in it in order to follow the plot. It seems that after the latest chapter, you should take a ride to Chaos Xinghai, which is very boring. The Jade Gourd is obviously a trick with unlimited resources. If it is like this, then just don't use this trick.
Why are mortal fandoms mainly based on comics these days? Could it be that Li Huayuan is secretly in love with Hong Fu? Dong Xuan'er is Hong Fu's daughter again, right?
Ah, I have never seen such a rubbish Golden Finger slip away, so I will next read it directly
Poison Point 1: It cannot replicate the Towering Fortune Dew, which is far inferior to Han Li's Little Green Bottle.
The protagonist gets the Foundation Establishment Pill and starts to use it to build the foundation. Han Li wants to cultivate the elixir, refine the elixir, and then build the foundation. If the foundation is successful, he will be a rich man.
I have tried reading the Qi-training NPC explosive magic technique, licking Han Li, and nanny flow. I haven't seen any emotional lines so far. I only saw the emotional line about Han Li being gay (the reason is that the protagonist is so good that Han Li was so moved that he believed in him)
It's awesome. The author's mortal fan fiction is that middle-grade spiritual stones are worthless. All the things he buys are traded in medium-grade spiritual stones. He is simply too rich.
The first three chapters and the gourd elixir make people think that it is a good book, and then the author slowly plays a good hand to pieces.
I read a few of this, and then looked at the comment area, and all the good guys were scolding the author 😎😎 It turned out that the author didn't care that he was single-player all the time, and there was nothing wrong with it. In fact, the author has said that this is a work for practice, and it's normal to not write well. I've been poisoned to death after reading more than 20 pieces. ಥ_ಥThe author may really think that his writing is pretty good. , Look at the current data, which is only 300,000 words, and the monthly ticket is just that. I feel that even if the author writes more in the future, it will be too much. The first few pictures are too dissuasive, so it is better to cut off and write a new one. Now I know that the data of this book is much less than other fans without looking at the backend. The author is really immersed in his own world. I feel that it would be better to cut off and start a new one.
I wrote this after watching an anime and my brain got hot.
Run quickly, don't look back, keep running
The carvings on the shit have been completed.
The favorite thing that fan authors like to do is to carve patterns on shit or carve it over and over again, either to steal the opportunity of the protagonist or to steal the protagonist's woman. He either licks or steps on the protagonist, and even the shit is not hot enough to eat. Look at the scientific cultivation of immortality that talks about the logic of cultivation, the spiritual treasures of the heavens talk about mythical magic weapons, the Amap directly connects science and technology seamlessly, and the portable world has a very high intention and talks about the laws of the great road. Even if it's shit, it's still warm.
There is no combat power, and the plot has been changed to pieces. You go back and look at the copy of the Yue Kingdom Palace, and you relied on the mechanical deity to save your life. You have written more than 70 chapters. What is the role of your plug-in?
Are you really convinced by this introduction, are you just a follower?
There is no need to read this book in detail. Just look at the title and you can probably understand the plot.
Depending on what plot you write, do these 13 sects have to go back? You obviously said you were going to run away every time, but in the end you ended up back where you started, writing a lot and finally returning to the sect. Didn't you take off your pants and fart?
Let me ask you, what are you doing during the showdown? Dong Xuan'er can be tricked by her charm skills? She should just commit suicide if she's such a loser.
Test Poison The author suppresses the fighting power
Why are you awesome? How do you write it?
I really don't know what you're thinking about. How do you think about how to write? You have a gourd that can barely write, and then you create a palm-sized teleportation array that can teleport thousands of miles in an instant? ? Then how do you write about the main character running away, who can catch up to him and make him invincible? Okay, then what else do you write about making him invincible?
Let's wait for Fallen Demon Valley to collect the scorpions.
Anyway, water can be copied at will, and a large amount of poison can be used to directly maintain the scorpion group 😁😁
When Jie Ying comes back, don't you kill Linghu? Can you bear this?
The protagonist's body is suitable for practicing magic skills, and blood is also liquid.
I just said it was designated to be cut off, and it was sprayed all over. The author was still there at the time and thought that his writing was very good. I laughed to death. Isn't it enough to write a good article about ordinary people and make a living? I have to deal with such disgusting things 😎
Fortunately he doesn't update anymore, it's all nonsense
Spiritual water is a consumable, and there will be no inflation no matter how much you buy. Is the protagonist selling it by the ton, or what? Get inflation? Have you ever seen oil inflation? Anyway, I can still read it after reaching chapter 16. I say you guys are awesome.