Romance Options for the Girls of Tokyo

Soul Chuan has been riddled with thunderbolts. The current environment is not very welcoming to Soul Chuan. Why are you still playing in the minefield of Soul Chuan? There are many people who write about Soul Chuan, but they still go around these minefields and can still write. You are really on your way. It's dark, soul travel is originally taboo on interpersonal relationships and the original owner's emotional line, but here is the ex-girlfriend, the childhood sweetheart, and the childhood sweetheart obviously also has the original owner's emotional line. The ex-girlfriend doesn't say that this identity itself means that she has close contact with the original owner. The key characters are not likable yet. They are the kind of descriptions that are meant to make people hateful, but they also insist on the protagonist being violently entangled with this person. Either it is written specifically to make people uncomfortable, or it is simply not thought of. I suspect that I have drained my brain by writing 4 books at once. This kind of The basic tone has not been set yet. Either it is casting a wide net without thinking about the setting at all, or it may be that I am very confident in my own ability. But with all due respect, I don't see any potential in this book. If nothing else, it should be written off quickly Run first

I feel good after reading it so far. Please vote for it

Don't you think that every sentence needs to be described with a lot of metaphors and psychological analysis from multiple angles? Isn't this too much for the author? It's like adding two pounds of lard to stir-fry vegetables. Lard is very fragrant, but if you add too much, it will become greasy.

Is the writing style better than the previous one? I haven't finished the previous one and I feel the writing style is not as good as this one.

When I read Chapter 6, it was well written, but the time-travel setting was uncomfortable, especially after the original owner's childhood friend appeared, and the original owner's ten years of interpersonal relationships and a part of his life were replaced 😭

If we want to design it like this, the protagonist must at least be talented and even have strong learning ability, otherwise it will become a background version later, right?

Come on, I've read a little bit of the new Hogwarts book, but it didn't attract me, even though I didn't finish the last one 🤭

But I'm a bit worried if it's dual-open.

This introduction is so weird. If I hadn't read the previous book, I wouldn't even have the desire to read it.

Is this book original or fanfiction?