Kyoto: I Just Want to Be a Gentleman

Very good, very good, the male protagonist is not a loser with impotence, he looks great.

It's okay if the mother and daughter don't dare, but the sisters actually don't dare either 🙂 What do you think you are writing! You must show the professionalism of the imperial uncle!

Is it because the divorce rate is so high that writing about used cars is now popular? There are more used cars than Guazi.

The heroine is a witch who supports her younger brother? She will do anything for her brother. When his brother grows up and wants this or that, will the heroine want to suck the male protagonist dry?

I wanted to see it, so I walked through it gently, and there were a lot of details.

Is the protagonist being controlled by the system? Is there any forced execution if the option is not selected?

Rimi Nishii

This kind of template is too unfinished. I have to wait and see for a while.

There are two things that make me uncomfortable at the moment. One is that I couldn't tell who Chiaki Kitano and Chiharu were before Chiaki Kitano applied to join the Classics Department. The other point is that the four words boy, girl, man, and woman appear very frequently, which makes me uncomfortable. I didn't originally dislike these four words, but some other authors used them indiscriminately and abused them, making me super disgusted with these four words now. If they appear less frequently, it's okay, but if they appear more frequently, I'm physically and psychologically disgusted at the same time. Everything else is pretty good, the plot is interesting, the girl selection is decisive, fast and not slow.

After school tutoring

Choose a class system. If the protagonist does not choose to enforce it, you can make your own judgment.

There are some plots where I can't tell whether it's Kitano Chiaki or Chiharu. It's not written clearly at all. I thought I understood it at first, but from the beginning of tutoring to the date being blocked by the underworld, to the two sisters talking at the end of the date, I can't tell who is who and whose plot it is.

What is the name of the author and moderator? 😏

Guys, please tell me how many chapters there are in the extra group welfare article. If there are more chapters, go in earlier. If not, I will read more and then go in.

In reality, there are no good-looking people who want to be stars. The novel is just a delusion!

I actually did a lot of dancing before it was put on the shelf. The reason is that you did not write the dream scene in Chiharu Kitano well. The inner motivation and psychological emotions of the male protagonist were not well described at the beginning of the plot. Because the beginning is not good, the dreaming female protagonist in your novel realizes that the male protagonist has entered her dream inexplicably (that is, the explanation is not clear). What's so bad about this point? If it is a Japanese drama and there is this paragraph in the script, it can basically be said that no matter how the director shoots, she must be the heroine. Other characters who appear and do not appear are best supporting roles, and they will never have as many scenes as this heroine. The female protagonist - Kitano Chiharu, a big bear with no brains, a strong family background, and twin sisters. The younger sister is poor and yandere. For unknown reasons, she will remain loyal to the male protagonist until death (the plot later explains that it is caused by time travel). It's actually quite good to extract these elements and put them in Japanese dramas. If the twin sisters Xiong are not easy to solve, then they are not twins. That is to say, extracting all the heroine elements from Kitano Chiharu's book, the author, is completely suitable for a Japanese drama script, which can be a movie script or a Japanese drama script of 6 to 10 episodes. In other words, there is no systematic flow of the novel. The setting of time travel alone can explain everything and establish the interesting point of the yandere daughter. I say this just to tell the author, put forward your messy setting points, and the points you designed are all excellent points. But the arrangement in your book is so messy... I skipped all the free chapters. The reason for skipping chapters is that you wrote in a mess. After reading it, my memory felt that it was all branch plots and no main plot. Kyoto Gentleman was all slogans without real facts to support it, and it was very false. The line from the male protagonist's perspective is very short and does not run through the entire text, and the sense of immersion is not enough. In conclusion, from the author's design point of view, the creativity is interesting (it's already very good). It can be said that writing about pure love has the potential to be a "serious drama". In the end, I chose to write a "love romance" drama, but because of the review, there was nothing to watch. I did search for your book from other book friends because you can drive a black car, but after I came here, I read it carefully in the early stage, and I don't think the writing of the three golden chapters is too bad. It's a pity... The rhythm of the writing, the main line... These are not grasped. To be honest, I found the plot about you not driving a car really interesting, but the plot about you not going down to the lower level and developing a traditional Japanese entertainment business empire was really interesting to me. The result... How about you open a new book, write about serious Japanese entertainment, write the character names as the names of Japanese entertainment stars, and change the butter novel to the rebirth novel.

I wanted to read that extra novel, which seemed even more interesting than the main text, but why did it suddenly stop? 😭

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Monthly votes have been cast. Come on, author

Why should I take the exam at Waseda University? Isn't it good to take the exam at the University of Tokyo?

Make the group account public. Those who log in with their mobile phone number cannot join the group.

Another book to support to death, how come there are no updates after more than 100 updates?

Don't write too much about the heroine, otherwise it will be difficult to write and it will easily break down, and the story will turn from a harem story to a stallion story. As for other things that are easy to enter the dark room, you can use mimic scenes to modify them, and the effect may be better.