Hunter: Start with the Breath of the Sun

I have read it and saw Chapter 94. I cannot agree with not killing Pari. From the previous dozens of pictures, I feel that the protagonist knows how to kill and should kill. I can read what I wrote earlier, but I can't stand it here. Then I read the comments and became more determined not to read the rest.

I remember that the gates of Beat the Enemy Hakka are calculated based on tonnage.... Is this the important protagonist being killed by the Beat Enemy Hakka (the killer family will be killed if they are too weak)....

Several places related to numerical values ​​in the early stage are full of loopholes, and the protagonist's occasional behavior is also very awkward. To be honest, can this be Sanjiang? Full-time Hunter is popular?

Hay, the plot is mediocre. It can be seen that the author's protagonist has a bad temper and beats up enemies. The Hakka family actually cherishes their family very much. The author is wrong in writing. In terms of telekinesis, the manga says that the operation system and the materialization system are more likely to become trait systems in the later period. Tanjiro's family sells charcoal.

I came to see Hunter and found that I had been writing about other worlds.

Let's not talk about how well written it is. He has sincerity in the name of the protagonist. Don't worry about how he calls it in Japanese. It's fine if you can connect it in Chinese. There was a previous book where he beat up the boss of the enemy. Call him Sean. I told the author, and the author even asked me what was wrong. He didn't even have the most basic sincerity.

It's too poisonous. The plot is amazing. Asking a child who is no more than ten years old to kill ghosts, the key point is that he has no training. A child who has not even learned to chop down trees learns to kill ghosts first. Then the author has no common sense and thinks that the carbon Tanjiro sells is coal, and he goes to dig coal in the mountains. Secondly, the author also likes to engage in dramas about family ethics and palace battles.

The hunter doesn't know much about it, but Demon Slayer Tanjiro is definitely not an Asashi who can't kill him. No matter how pitiful a demon is, he can only use the loving rain of the sky to kill him gently. The author has made Tanjiro into a useless Asashi with the heart of a virgin.

Personally, I feel that there are three reasons why I read it overnight: 1. The protagonist's personality suddenly changes. Before and after turning on Goldfinger, before the Demon Slayer, the protagonist is determined and cautious, and strives to make progress. After the Demon Slayer, the protagonist becomes like an exhibitionist, so Kamado Eiichiro is... Embarrassing 2. The skills acquired by the protagonist through the world are not guaranteed, and they can be learned at will. If the protagonist learns dust escape through Naruto in the future, passers-by will observe the flow of the protagonist's energy. I also learned it, and the protagonist became a money-splitting boy 3. The author wrote about the male protagonist Asasi in Japanese comics, Nan Beng, which I am not accustomed to reading. I still like the character of the protagonist of Chinese online novels. I must avenge my enemies and repay my kindness. I will not offend others unless they offend me. I can clearly distinguish my grudges and grudges. There is no exhibitionism.

Chapter 1: Persuading to Quit, Ten Times the Physical Fitness and Various Skills, Running Ten Kilometers with My Hands on My Hips, Panting, and Drenched in Sweat

The person who wrote ✍️ seemed to have suffered a lot of grievances? There are many people in the hunter world who are countless times worse off than you. Your happiness index exceeds at least 90% of the people in the Hunter World. 😥It feels like a bitter and powerful hatred. I didn't expect to understand a literary youth👅

To be honest, I felt that the story of Demon Slayer was a bit boring. I skipped reading it, and I really couldn't understand why I had to put so much emotion into my false experiences, because the author said that none of these are true, and none of them are true. Did you spend so much time writing these false emotions just to reduce the word count?

The plot progress is slow, I like to play with sensationalism, the food is superior, the protagonist has no distinctive character, the things learned in Goldfinger can be taken away, I want to see the hunter is not a demon slayer

Overall, I think the pacing and plot are pretty good, but I made mistakes in some small details, and they didn't correct them even after readers pointed them out. The world is destroyed by ghosts. The protagonist kills ghosts near his home. The ghosts are about to run away. The protagonist cuts the opponent in half with Rihu. Before the opponent loses consciousness, he clearly says that he is using Rihu and reveals his identity by name and surname. Some readers questioned whether Wu Pei would be noticed by Wu Pei, and the author explained that "Wu Pei does not pay attention to all his subordinates at all times. His main energy is focused on powerful or key individual ghosts"... Regardless of whether Wu Pei will notice the protagonist because of the keywords, what is the protagonist's motivation for doing this? Why would he reveal a secret to a ghost that had no need to be revealed, and then bet that Muzan wouldn't notice? Is it possible that Cheng Cheng is trying to be cool so that the other party will "know it even if he dies"? Doesn't this increase the potential danger? Later, the protagonist went down the mountain to learn skills from Lintaki. After seeing that the protagonist had a good foundation, Lintaki's thought was to the general idea: "Maybe he can really kill it (that is, the hand ghost)." Some readers pointed out that Lintaki did not know that all his disciples died in the hands of the same ghost. The author retorted, "How could Lintaki not know that his disciples died in the assessment"... Isn't this the opposite of the other? "Knowing that his disciples died in the assessment" and "knowing that almost all of his disciples died at the hands of the same ghost because of him" are completely different things. He always thought that his disciples were unlucky or weak, and never thought that there was a ghost who was completely beyond the difficulty of the assessment and was deliberately targeting them. The author replied below and explained to him that there were more than ten comments, but the author insisted on not replying to a single one and not changing it at all... These two problems are not problems that will affect the direction of the plot if they are changed. They are just very trivial and low-level problems. Why are they not changed?

To be honest, Demon Slayer is really unattractive. I don't really like the style of the characters. They all look short.

I don't understand why I like to write about demon slayer when I'm writing comics or comprehensive comics now? The world level is low and there are no highlights. The breathing method is of no use. Apart from adding some damage to the knife, there is nothing else.

Are you that hungry? You can eat all this. The author came to write the novel after finishing the short video, right? Is this the world's number one killer family? You can run ten kilometers with ten times your physique and still be out of breath. Your physique is even better than Captain America², and you are still out of breath.

The name says Hunter, and he should use Demon Slayer's ability to grow, but in the end, Demon Slayer is also written. There are the same plots in both worlds, and the plot is too dull, and the pace is also very slow. If it is put on the shelf, it will be even more dull.

To be honest, the character of the protagonist is only suitable for supporting roles, just like Nizuke and Vegeta. When I saw him slap Tanjiro away and thought something like "I'll kill you if you do this", I didn't want to watch it😣

Fan authors should read the original work. The author doesn't understand the original work well enough, and likes to combine the settings of the original work with shorthand routines and come up with some abstract plots. For example, the protagonist awakens and his eyes evolve into bright flashlights, blinding the butler's eyes. What a pure funny novel. Author, you are so gentle. Modern people are under great pressure. Are you here to massage the tired atria of readers? So great! I love you so much, the author😘😘

I don't object to fan creations. After all, the hunter is not finished, but seeing One Hundred Six and One Hundred Six One is a bit out of character. They somehow show off in front of Demon Slayer's group of pillars, and then suddenly give the flame pillars a thought stamp. The level is really too low. They keep shaping the protagonist to be the sun, but Demon Slayer has to make his first belief by himself? It's still Yanzhu that I had no relationship with before. According to the previous shaping of the protagonist, it is normal to kill ghosts and save people, and others will naturally follow their beliefs. The sun, whether you believe in it or not, is there, shining and heating. For people in Demon Slayer, the sun is the natural enemy of ghosts. I can only say that these two chapters are finished immediately. No matter how gorgeous your words are, they are two chapters that directly collapse the character. Regardless of the protagonist or the supporting role, these two chapters are finished.

There are too many flaws. First of all, there is a problem with the name of the protagonist. The names of Hakka people of this generation actually have three syllables. Killua is actually ki ru a. The scumbag translator didn't translate "ル" out. Anyone who has watched the original soundtrack of the anime will know the problem. Roy, Roy? What the hell name. In addition, the ability to read can increase physical fitness, lock in Qi and prevent it from being lost, and extend life. Demon Slayer Breathing Technique not only does not increase physical fitness, but may also cause death. I went to Demon Slayer to learn breathing techniques. Have you ever thought about passing on your telekinesis skills to Demon Slayers? At the beginning, he has ten times the physique of an ordinary person. What the hell, Leorio is an ordinary person. After training, he also has tens of tons of wrist strength. The average person in the Hunter World is special. If you are ten times stronger, you will not be able to go to heaven. I guess the author has never read the original work, but only watched dozens of minutes of commentary. I came here to write novels. Therefore, the family relationship and hunter setting of Beat the Enemy Guest were written in a mess. Can't even tell the difference between Matoi and Zetsu.

I can't stand it when I see that Breath of the Sun can absorb sunlight and strengthen the body

Maybe they are aliens, and the time is different from ours. One day = many days.

Yes, Grain Plus. At the moment, Hunter + Demon Slayer is okay, but I don't know if the world will collapse if other worlds are added later. I hope I won't go to a world that's too outrageous in the future.

I can watch it, but the male protagonist's character is really unlikable? After living for three lifetimes, he still lacks love. As long as someone gives him a candy to eat, he fantasizes about living in the world of Demon Slayer every day.

Don't you want to give me some sperm?

I have been injured for a hundred days. How is the author's recovery progress? You can send a message to let readers care about you👀

The setting of the telekinesis ability in the early stage is really attractive, and the battle rhythm is good, and the plot is also very good But Goldfinger is becoming more and more abnormal. I want to say that there are many systems, but without integration, it is a hodgepodge. I personally feel that the ability that most dissuades me is that the protagonist is too complex and needs everything, but Maybe I don't like this It may be that the author didn't control this setting well and I can't stand it Finally: I hope the author can work hard. This kind of setting really attracted me in the early stage. I hope I will be lucky enough to read your book in the future. It makes me want to keep reading.

Brother, can you be a eunuch? ? Just tell me, eunuch, and I will remove the book from the bookshelf! ! It looks uncomfortable! ! 🤫🤫