Hunter X Hunter: The Zoldyck Family's Legendary Item Maker

Your character design makes the protagonist seem incredibly brainless. He wants to become stronger, but instead of putting in the effort to draw more books or releasing more chapters, especially with something like shadow clones, he tries to become stronger on his own. This is beyond foolish; he's throwing away the big picture for a small gain.

Playing with the powers of other Japanese manga in the Hunter x Hunter world is equivalent to abandoning the most interesting Nen abilities in the Hunter x Hunter world, which makes it less fun. Drawing comics (or writing novels, making movies, etc.) To gain attention, and then extracting items and powers from them, is it really a good trope in the Hunter x Hunter world...?

Dude, the Zoldyck family has a naming convention. What kind of name is Sean for the protagonist?

There are too many skills. I have no desire to keep reading.

The Nen abilities in the Hunter x Hunter world are already complex enough; to have to haphazardly combine all sorts of bizarre and outlandish elements is putting the cart before the horse. I didn't even bother clicking on it after reading the synopsis. If you're not skilled enough, how do you even establish a balance mechanism in your book?

I've always believed that a book can't be completed solely through slapstick humor and clever jokes. Such things are fine occasionally as a diversion, but filling a book with them, or even using them to drive the plot, will only ruin a good book. What a waste of such a great idea!

You've already written almost a complete waste of a book, and you're actually coming to Qidian to write another one that's also wasted? That's a bit too much.

I don't quite understand the author's purpose in writing so many vulgar and awkward conversations and interactions; the characters are not only unlikable but also evoke disgust.

It was definitely exhilarating. The only problem was the part about the Zoldyck family rescuing people in Meteor City. Especially Maha's line, "Silva won't abandon those captured girls." The whole family makes a living by killing, and then they go and rescue people without being paid—it just felt surreal.

Didn't these plagiarized novels consider the possibility of cultural incompatibility? It's like trying to transplant the concept of "thirty years east of the river and thirty years west of the river" to the present day.