Hunter X Hunter: The Zoldyck Family's Legendary Item Maker

I feel that your setting makes the protagonist seem very brainless. He wants to become stronger and does not work harder to draw, draw more books or more, especially things like shadow clones. He relies on himself to become stronger. It is impossible to describe the stupidity of losing the watermelon and picking up sesame seeds. And in your setting, you can completely draw a prop or ability in the comic, and directly extract the memory in the mind into a better comic such as comics, instead of letting the protagonist draw a pitiful amount of updates by himself, which makes the protagonist very stupid.

Playing the power of other Japanese comics in Hunter World is equivalent to abandoning the most interesting telekinesis ability in Hunter World, which is not fun. Drawing comics (writing novels, making movies, etc.) To gain attention, and then extracting props and powers from them is an old trick, but is it really suitable in the Hunter World... With such a plug-in, why not just draw Dragon Balls? Incarnate as Super Saiyan Goku, and send out a Qigong wave to blow up the Hunter World... If you are afraid of the rule-based power of the Hunter World, then just draw Marvel... In short, what the hell is it to draw Naruto... The author is Do you think the popularity and sales of comics such as Dragon Ball and Marvel are lower than those of Naruto... In short, if a normal person travels to the Hunter World, does not specialize in Nen ability, and can draw attention by drawing comics to exchange for the power of comics - he doesn't even have to think about it, Dragon Ball comes first, and then Marvel. Dare I ask a Super Sailor protagonist wearing a six-god suit of Infinity Stones - why should a full-time hunter fight with the protagonist, the Dark Continent, just snap his fingers and win... Don't say that the Infinity Stones can't be used in worlds other than Marvel... Can the Sharingan be used in worlds other than Naruto? Is there chakra? Have you ever been burned by the Sage of Six Paths? Can you use the Sharingan right after you come up? With this plug-in, instead of drawing Dragon Ball or Marvel, I went to draw Naruto... What do you think... There are many logical loopholes, in the final analysis, one sentence: overwhelming combat power, bad article...

Damn, the Hakka people who beat the enemy have rules for naming. If you name the protagonist Sean, what does that mean?

There are so many skills. No desire to pursue books

The telekinesis ability in Hunter World is already brain-burning enough. It has to be stitched together in all kinds of weird ways. It puts the cart before the horse. As soon as I saw the introduction, I was too lazy to click on it. If you are not capable enough, how do you set up the balance mechanism of your book? The strong are strong in basic skills. The unreasonable wishing machine has a balancing mechanism. Brainless writing is not suitable for the Hunter World!

I've always believed that you can't complete a book with just gags and wit. This kind of thing is okay as a spice occasionally, but filling the book with it, or even using it to advance the plot, will only ruin a good book. What a pity such a good idea

You have been writing about the same content in the past and have already finished a whole book. Why do you still come to Qidian and write another useless book? It's a bit unnatural.

I don't quite understand what the author is doing by always writing a bunch of obscene and embarrassing conversations and interactions. The characters are not likable but instead they cause disgust.

It's cool enough. I just couldn't stand the story of beating up the enemy and the Hakka family to save people in Meteor Street. Especially what Maha said, Siba will not ignore the girls who were caught. The whole family relies on killing people for a living. It feels magical to save people without giving them any money.

Didn't this kind of Wenqigong-type novel consider "acclimatization"? It's like you moved thirty years from Hedong to Hexi to the present.