The Man in the Web

I read these thirty chapters twice in one breath, and the biggest feeling is that it is real. It is as real as picking up the cracks in the door and watching the daily life of a group of "great people" who worked hard to build their careers in technology companies more than 20 years ago. What this book tells is, to put it bluntly, the story of a group of young people with online IQs working hard in the Wei Xun Company. The protagonist Jiang Huhai is a typical "other people's kid", with great skills and a unique way of leading a team. All the brothers admire him. Following him, it seems that no matter how difficult the project is, you can accomplish it. But here's the problem. He puts almost all his attention on work. For him, home is more like a hotel where he occasionally goes back to recharge his batteries. Then there is the heroine Xia Jiezhen, this girl is so extraordinary. Carrying a secret that no one knew, he fought his way through a technical circle filled with men. The feeling between her and Jiang Hu Hai is very interestingly written. It's not a greasy emotion, it's more like two masters fighting each other, admiring each other, and having a tacit understanding. Look at the two of them on the bank of the Yellow River, fighting all night over a technical problem. That kind of tacit understanding is more useful than any love talk. Wada Masuzaki's love is so natural, not heartbreaking but mutual appreciation and trust. Of course, there are also the brothers around Jiang Huhai, Zhen Cankun and Tian Zengqi, none of whom are fuel-efficient. Together, they are the most typical "entrepreneurial partners" template. They have a sense of loyalty when they drink together and brag, but sometimes they get into trouble because of projects and interests. This makes the entire workplace part seem particularly interesting. It is not the kind of business war suspended in the sky, but the real office politics and project problems that may happen around you and me. Let's talk about the villain Liang Mingzhe. This guy makes people feel chills down their backs as soon as he appears. He is not the kind of bad guy who makes a fuss, but is smart to the core and plays tricks. What happened in the past between him and Xia Jiezhen has become the biggest hook in the first half of the book, making people want to read on. But in these 33 chapters, what worries me the most is actually the "family affairs" of the protagonists. The relationship between Jiang Huhai and his wife Ying Ning simply describes the helplessness of a certain kind of marriage. One is working hard outside, and the other is watching over the children at home. The two of them are saying "you have worked hard" and "you are too" across the phone line, but their hearts are getting farther and farther apart. Especially in 33 "Embracing and Crying", Jiang Huhai finally returned home, and the two hugged each other and cried. You can feel that there is a deep relationship between them, but the gap caused by long-term separation and inability to understand each other is as thick as a wall. This intimate scene ended hastily, which makes people feel more sad than any fierce quarrel. In general, these first thirty chapters have done three major things: 1. Establish the characters: A group of "great people" with flesh and blood, advantages and obvious disadvantages, making you feel like they are living beside you. 2. Bury the suspense: What is Xia Jiezhen's past? How does Liang Mingzhe want to take revenge? How to choose between career and family in Jianghuhai? These questions make you unable to put down the book. 3. Full of "realism": Whether it's the intrigue in the workplace or the trivial matters at home, the writing is very realistic and relatable. To put it bluntly, this is a story about "choice". Career and family, ideals and reality, brotherhood and husband-wife love... The protagonists struggle among these choices, which makes people anxious to watch, but it is precisely because of this struggle that makes this story so powerful. What a great start!

I haven't read a realistic novel for a long time. If this novel hadn't been selected as an audio novel, I probably wouldn't have read it. After reading it, it felt very real, like a knife piercing my life, so I voted all the 17 chapters I saved this month for the author. This is a very good work, but the results are not up to par with his quality. I hope the author can become a hit.

The protagonists all appear in Chapter 8, and the two heroines show more exciting stories in Chapters 35 and 40 respectively

Let me make a few suggestions, which the author can look at critically. If they can help you, that would of course be the best. First of all, this book gave me the feeling that it was too complicated. It contains many real details, but for some details you will find that you can continue to advance the plot by deleting certain parts. When there are too many such details, the compactness of the plot itself will be diluted. Secondly, there is the issue of paragraph division. Books with a physical style like this are actually not suitable for being separated sentence by sentence like the current online articles. In addition, there is the problem of description, which is a bit dull. Literary rhetorical techniques can be used in many ways. For example, when expressing emotions, you cannot just describe the actions of the male and female protagonists, which will not give readers a strong sense of involvement. You must learn to render an emotion through the description of the environment, psychological description and other techniques, rather than just expressing it through action language. Then there is the problem of narrative. The narrative jumps too fast. The reader may not have entered the state yet, and the next moment the content has jumped to memories and narrations. After the memories and narrations are over, the plot returns to the repetitive description of reality. The last thing is the question of intention. The author should think about it when writing, who is your book for, why are you writing this book, and what do you want to express? Every book has a main line and a branch line. The main line of the book must be described with emphasis. For example, if struggle is the main line and love is written as a branch line, or vice versa, the length of each book must be controlled well.

For some friends, 2002 is already history, while for others it is full of memories. It was a year that took off and is worth looking back on.

How far is the gap between ideal and reality?

All kinds of things are woven together, and things from many years ago are entangled with the present, just like fish struggling in a fishing net. This is probably the so-called cycle of cause and effect. Climb up and escape from the sea of ​​suffering.

The workplace atmosphere is very immersive, the plot is full of suspense, and the plot is full of twists and turns. It is very attractive to watch and I look forward to the follow-up.

The writing is so wonderful, especially about the overt and covert struggles in the workplace. It can be said that you can see the deja vu in reality. You and I are all people on the Internet.

Quick update, quick update, by the way, can you please read my book? What kind of immortal can you become if you stay in the Demon Sect?

I have a question, what are the novels written in this reality category?

Recommend this book

Watch the behind-the-scenes first, I feel sincere, take a look

The beginning of the story is well written and the author's creativity is good.

The author writes very well, the writing style is also great, the plot is smoothly connected, and the characters are three-dimensional. I like this book very much.

This made me happy for a moment, thinking it was the adventure diary of someone on the Internet. It was really a waste of Nangong Hen's time.

It's better to come back and write about reality.