The Road to Becoming a God in Another World

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Anchor, can your work still accompany us in 2026?

It's written like shit, and it looks like traditional Western fantasy at first glance. It's really shit. No wonder I couldn't sign the contract. The title of this book is terrible. Who is still using the title format of "XXX" in Another World? Looking at your writing, you should be a young author. Only us old guys have experienced this so-and-so book title format. How come you are still using this outdated format? It's really not possible to call a god of Dao Dao, a god of martial arts, a god of ten thousand martial arts, a god of slaying by Tianwu, which is better than you. Even better, it is called the road of slaying gods. I am the sword, and the road of slaying gods is my priority. To keep up with the times, the format is called - becoming a god: starting from the time when the assessment is approaching. Or another world: starting from the time when the exam is approaching, you will become a god. Two Chapter One Chapter Two Shit, since you want fantasy, do you know what fantasy is? One of the things about fantasy settings is that they need to be grand and majestic. When you write about training skin, flesh, and bones, you will feel petty and have no sense of expectations. If you look at the well-known old traditional fantasy works, which realm level is not majestic? The physical body/supernatural power/immortality of "Eternal Life", the Great Wall of Sword Qi played by the beacon fire of the princes, and Chen Dong's transcendence on the other side, these terms can make people feel unclear and powerful, and arouse a sense of expectation. Editors don't sign contracts with you because they have to review so many books every day. They don't call them reviewers, they just scan them, and the number of places is limited. The title of your book is outdated. One chapter and two chapters are written like shit. Any one of them will stump you. You are not even a novice in online writing. You are just a layman. Who dares to read it for you? Suggestions - 1 Change the title of the book. Modify Chapter 2 1 and 2. For example, if the protagonist here is a low-level disciple, then pull out his golden finger and give him any object without writing the system, such as Qi and Blood Beads or Battle Soul Rings. Because the protagonist is a low-level disciple and his family is poor, he has suffered a lot. Bullying and humiliation, this assessment is for a selection, and there will be rewards if you pass the assessment. The protagonist's mother is seriously ill, and he wants this reward to extend his life . The protagonist has to fight hard to get the assessment reward, and the protagonist has a golden finger, so he needs to show off his momentum. Hey, I'm tired of writing so much. Think about it and revise it. Your writing style is fine, but you don't understand Internet writing at all, and you can't even be considered a novice.