Little Goku’s Great Adventure, Starting in the World of One Piece

Are you Sun Wukong? Some of these things are just random thoughts and assumptions.

Hopefully, they won't involve any joining the Navy later on; it's better if they form their own faction. Right now, the Navy in One Piece is purely a puppet regime. They bombard civilians during the Buster Call, they hold island-siege games to force the Celestial Dragons to participate in killing contests, they're the ones collecting Celestial Gold, they protect the Celestial Dragons' slave trade…

It's wonderfully written! It doesn't drastically alter Goku's personality but respects the original work, which is truly commendable! Not to mention, most One Piece fanfiction authors write too violently, so it's rare to see a One Piece fanfiction that focuses on a genuine adventure, giving it a feel reminiscent of reading the Dragon Ball manga back in the day. Keep it up, author!

The Dragon Ball series lost its flavor after Goku met Garp. Goku would have been better off meeting Whitebeard, Shanks, or Rayleigh than Garp, that dog of the Celestial Dragons.

If Goku trained for a year, he'd be invincible, unless the author suppressed the power levels.

It's not really fair to blame Goku for his slow growth in the early stages, because according to the original Dragon Ball Goku character design, his growth rate was indeed slow in the early stages. Goku and Krillin trained together with Master Roshi for eight months in the first stage of their training. After eight months, they were able to move a boulder the size of a small villa.

Dragon Ball has a power level of over 100 that can destroy the moon, and they even wrote One Piece.

It's all a one-man show for Goku... Finding crewmates is pointless... Nami becomes a mere decorative figure... Sanji barely gets any screen time except for clearing out grunts; he'd be better off with a compass or something and adventuring on his own... Goku's personality is completely unsuitable for being a captain; Usopp is far more qualified... He's too self-centered and carefree.

The authors of Qidian all chuckle. Once I read a novel where the protagonist was already 30 and still chuckled, laughing more than ten times in one page. I felt he was really weird. What kind of mental illness is this? Chuckling at 30? Can't he write something more hearty and cheerful? Chuckling at 7 or 8 is one thing, chuckle at 15 or 16 is sick, but chuckle at 30 is really weird.

I think we should give Wukong a transmigrator's soul or change his personality. Otherwise, Wukong's saintly nature won't be popular in fanfiction.