A Crossover Immortal Journey, Beginning with The Ethereal Journey

What does the author think? The protagonist has been cultivating immortality for so many years and once he attains enlightenment and breaks through to the Dao Yuan Ying stage, Fu Shan also said that the protagonist has a clear mind and his nature, and then what does the protagonist do? First, he grabbed a bunch of money (mainly because he was about to leave and wouldn't need it), then he went to show off in front of the protagonist's ex-girlfriend, and then without any foreshadowing, he passed on the skills to a woman he didn't know before on the train, and even had a little ambiguity? Is this a clear understanding of one's nature? The character of the co-author is just to grab money and pretend to be cool and pick up girls?

Actually found a book written by Zhu Tian Liu Miao? Good guy, even if it's shit, I have to taste it first before talking about it. It was my first online article.

I saw Journey to Piaomiao in the introduction and clicked in. The author knows about Journey to Piaomiao and must be an old bookworm like me. Journey to Piaomiao was one of the first online novels I read when I was a teenager. At that time, there were no computers at home, and access to information was not as easy as it is now. This book simply opened up a new world for me. The first book was missing from the bookstore, so I started reading it from the second one, The Magic Wand of Khotan. The different names and strange magic weapons on Tambang left a deep impression on me. It turns out that in the novel, people can also control magic weapons to fly, shine, and attack. The book also spends a lot of pen and ink describing ordinary people like "What's the Daddy?" I was deeply moved by Li Qiang's joy after going through many difficulties and reuniting with his father. The ocean is full of dangers and can be said to be a no-go for mortals. Those low-level merchants have to overcome the odds and make a living, and each of the characters is lifelike. Having said so much, I am a bit verbose. I'm just sharing what attracted me to Piaomiao Journey, and I hope the author can reproduce it. Cultivation, magic weapons, weapon refining, fairy stones bring a sense of freshness; the shops on the cliffs, the Tianlai City in the dangerous ocean, there is a cave in the dark prison, crystal stones everywhere, the wilderness underground ruins are dangerous and full of magic weapons, all kinds of mysterious places are fascinating; the ordinary people in Tambang Continent, the ancient-style society on Tianting Star, the mortals in the War Circle Continent are kept in captivity, and the people on earth will also be big in the future Different, these are all attractive to me; separation and reunion are unforgettable under poor traffic conditions. I met my nephew in Tambang Continent, met people from the same world in Tianlai City, met fellow student Wu Ai in the ruins, met Fu Shan in the black prison and was very excited. I was trapped in the War Circle Continent and missed my friends very much. Lin Mingxing met his fellow disciples in the Mahayana period, people in a certain place went fishing in the snow moon, and practiced the tradition of asceticism in a certain place. It was too long ago and there are some memory errors. The author's current chapter is too fast-paced. It focuses on fighting and showing off, which is exactly not the characteristic of Piaomiao Journey. The combat power expanded too quickly and there was no sense of urgency. The protagonist doesn't stay in one place for long, doesn't interact deeply with people, and doesn't feel deeply.

I really want to support writing Piaomiao Journey, but the first chapter is too awkward. It was clearly stated before that the protagonist's girlfriend left him because he insisted on cultivating immortality, but after the protagonist really cultivates immortality, he still goes to his girlfriend to show off? I just want to ask what kind of dog-licking mentality would lead to such a thing?

Alas, the reputation of Piaomiao Journey has been wasted.

Big cheers for the author! Misty journey, memories of youth!

What is written here? Teaching others to cultivate immortality and open their mouths is fate. He has fate but he has no fate. What is fate? It's impossible to tell what fate the protagonist teaches and the cultivators have, it's all based on the protagonist's own wishful thinking. The first three chapters are baffling to read.

The plot of the first chapter persuades you to quit. Fuck you, how obsessed you are with your ex-girlfriend.

It's really written like shit. He was abandoned by his ex-girlfriend and he went back to teach her how to become an immortal 😰😰

It makes me feel speechless😥