All Heavens: Beginning with the Legend of Lu Xiaofeng

Now I don't even know the main character's purpose. Can't you say invincible? But it can't be considered weak. Logically speaking, shouldn't it be to expand your reputation and collect source energy? I feel like the main character is very naughty. I don't want him to be like the guy from Magnetic Field, but he should at least have one main purpose.

To be honest, there is a problem with your main plot. You are preparing to dominate the world, but I see that your protagonist is now invincible. Is it really necessary to create a unified world in Gu Long? You might as well start a new historical novel like this. People who read Zhutian and Gu Long basically want to see the protagonist upgrade and show off. If you do this, I might as well read a historical novel to feel more immersed. I believe most people have the same idea as me. Unless you end this process quickly, no one likes to watch a person who creates great harmony in the martial arts world. If I don't say I am disgusted, I can only say that I am indifferent.

Isn't this a fantasy of the heavens? How do you make the protagonist want the world to be unified? 😥. It won't be written as a historical novel later. You can write it as "I am the only one who can become an immortal by myself".

If you write about the cultivation of all heavens, you should practice well; if you write about the great unity of the world, you should strive for historical hegemony. Moreover, if the rebellion is to establish a feudal dynasty, then there will be no great harmony in the world. Predation and oppression are not only the attributes of the feudal dynasty, but also the attributes of spiritual practice. If you want to establish red, conditions do not allow it, productivity does not allow it, and you will fail if you ignore objective facts. It is red now because of the germination of ideas from foreign countries and the assistance from the north. It also includes the fall of the old system, warlords' melee, foreign oppression, class struggle, and countless ancestors who are advancing for the red goal. To propagate reforms, this cannot be accomplished by one person. If you rely on one person's force to dominate the world, then you will still establish an oppressive feudal dynasty, which is essentially the same as before. It is another reincarnation. When you leave this world, the problems of the previous court will still appear in your new system. I suggest that the author should continue to practice the law alone.

If you have an advantage, don't use it. Thirty thousand versus ten thousand can easily win. The protagonist is so stupid that he can't bear to part with it. He's kind and won't fight. He knows he won't fight. It's all based on imagination. He even makes up his own teaching materials. The protagonist is too abstract.

The author is severely oppressed in the real world. Writing a book releases his own pressure. Let me tell you this: Where there are people, there are rivers and lakes. What you cannot change will only be changed by the rivers and lakes.

I find it quite interesting, relying on golden fingers to pursue breaking through the upper limit of martial arts while preparing to transform the world. Everyone talks about pursuing a harmonious society as if it is a heinous crime. As a Chinese, isn't it right to pursue socialism? If you can't do it, if you don't do it, you will never succeed. Besides, the protagonist also has a cheat trick. There are also magical martial arts. Whenever we pursue a harmonious society and pursue communism, we should be proud of it. Long live the People's Republic of China and long live the great unity of the people of the world hang on Tiananmen Square.

What everyone said is quite right. If you write about Datong in martial arts novels, why don't you write about history? Ah? Have you forgotten that you have been writing martial arts?

Today's movies and TV dramas should not be involved in the plot. The male channel should be an iron horse, a man of power, a man who wakes up to take power in the world, gets drunk and lies in the lap of a beautiful woman, and strives to be the emperor!

There are also many people in Zhutianwen who have traveled through time and rebelled to become emperors!

Well written, cheers!

It's nothing to look at, and even if you have a golden finger, you can't use it. It says it's to get rid of evil, but it turns out it's indifferent even if evil is around you. Moreover, even though he is already very powerful in martial arts, he still rides on a horse to be an ordinary policeman, without even touching the six-door transformation.

Why can eunuch books be recommended in my daily guide? Opening it a little, what comes into view is the discussion of the eunuchs in the comment area...

Is it really okay that one person rushes into the formation and then the excitement is interrupted? 😡The author's character is very bad! 😡

I'm really tired of being third-rate, second-rate, and first-rate.

The writing is pretty good, just reorganize the main plot. Is there a need for a eunuch?

It's a pity that three days ago, it was already a eunuch.

I knew you would definitely be a eunuch. As soon as I read a dozen chapters, I knew there was something wrong with your outline.

I guess it's a pity