Douluo: the Peerless Positive Douluo

Let me talk about the progress first. When I read it, there were 26 chapters in total. After reading 26 chapters, I finished it. The evaluation is quite satisfactory, with no extra work and no big bugs. The protagonist is a standard protagonist template, and various opportunities are given to him in turn. There will be opportunities when he goes out to find the soul ring. The plot is also quite satisfactory. He was born in Shrek City to Shrek parents. After awakening, he entered Shrek and began to develop. And the protagonist is over level 20 at the beginning (awakened to level 10, absorbed two soul rings, one attached soul bone, golden tree novice gift package), has dual extreme attributes, and has the soul mentor talent, and his combat power will definitely expand later. In addition, the character of the protagonist feels a bit Schrödinger. When he first awakens the martial spirit, he will be like a little white flower. His parents have no idea about his cultivation level. Once he obtains the spirit ring, he will be able to speak well and have all the plans at once. It feels like a time traveler wearing an indigenous skin. (PS: The following is nonsense, just because I am bored and complaining.) By the way, why didn't the author set the protagonist to be born in the Sun and Moon Empire? Considering the various conditions of the protagonist's birth, setting it on the sun and moon is much more reasonable, and it also brings more fun. Like some kind of golden tree orthodox in the sun and moon. In addition, the plot later is easier to develop.

As for the original work, Ma Xiaotao is really hard to watch, 😐

I thought it was the golden tree in Elden's Circle I thought too much

Why do you have to get a soul guide? I haven't watched Dou San so I can't comment. Dou Er is better from the Wuhun sect.

I saw a reader asked about the heroine issue, and I was actually struggling with it, so I just asked directly. Can you tell me the heroine you want and the number of heroines? I will try my best to arrange the plot.

Why do you guys who write Dou Er always like the whole soul guide? What is the use of Douer soul guide? Not to mention both, what if we directly give you a technology tree that will rapidly increase 10,000 years later, or give you a four-character Doukai? Your Ultimate Douluo plus the Four-Character Doukai can't beat level 100. Even if I give you a little more ferocity, I'll give you a technological starship 20,000 years in the future, which will only have the power of a first-level god with a giant cannon. Under Tang San's bright and clear gaze, can you develop it? I feel that the current Dou Er authors are really weird. They seem to have fallen into a dead end. They have no idea what to write about. They are just fixed soul guides. As for the use of soul guides, I don't even know what the use is in the later period. I only use the number of words in front of them.

The first soul ring of ten thousand years in Chapter 12, the second soul ring of forty thousand years in Chapter 16, this expansion speed is enough to make the emperor and heaven choke the protagonist's soul ring. Qian Renxue's Seraph Angel's god-level martial soul is really an angel god. I didn't look at the three or four battles. Which god is directly involved in the golden tree? It can also reach the dual ultimate ➕ semi-god level.

The writing style is a bit like Tang's Son of Light (to put it bluntly, it's a bit childish)

I hope the author will give Orange a good ending. Orange's hard work and talent should not be lost in the relationship. I hope Huo Yuhao will not meet Orange, and Orange will not like Huo Yuhao. Orange and the prince should have a pair of pure hatred CPs, which is so touching. Moreover, the CPs of Huo Yuhao and Wang Dong are also very good. I don't want Rui Beast to be hurt for no reason. Rui Beast itself is an independent individual and her success or failure should not be tied to Huo Yuhao.

Isn't it the awakened past life memory? Why do you act like you don't understand anything again?

Good soul skills are not ordinary rubbish. The first soul skill is about taking root. The golden tree absorbs the power of the earth to restore its own state. This is as clear as Tang San's entanglement. It is the characteristic that it should have. You have made it into a soul skill, and then what about the third soul skill? Golden Tribulation? I might as well just use the amplifying soul skill directly. This soul skill shocked everyone. Is this all 70,000 years ago? Moreover, Shrek's people are like a group of fools, especially Munn. When the protagonist says that he wants to be a support system and has a firm attitude, it does not mean that there is no value in training, but it is absolutely impossible to devote all his efforts to training, because the strongest person in a force must not be a support, because in Douluo Continent, people generally recognize that even this support No matter how strong he is, he is just an auxiliary, and has no cost-effectiveness and right to cultivate. But those Shrek people are like demons. They are brainless and blow three soul rings. In addition to the color bluffing, the second soul skill is useful. There are a lot of introductions to the other two soul skills, but they are simple and clear. Just two things are to increase the recovery speed and increase. Only these two things can be done in the blue silver field.

Not knowing the plot is a failure.

How to say it! If you want to become a god in Dou Er, then your biggest obstacle is you Tang Buddha! Under the control of Tang Buddha, people in Douluo Continent will never be able to obtain the inheritance of gods unless Tang Buddha agrees.

Um, I saw someone in the comment area said that the Ice Emperor was given to Huo Yuhao, and then the protagonist developed feelings for the Ice Emperor. There are so many lies, but if it is true, is it just to fit in with the plot? Ask Shen Nong

The protagonist's abilities are too many and too complex, and nothing can be done too much. The protagonist's own talents and opportunities are already very good. He should try to be as simple and pure as possible and go his own way. There is no need to possess all the powerful attributes. The more settings there are, the more likely it is to collapse in the middle and later stages of writing, especially for a new author.

It was written as if the outline was posted directly, without any emotion at all, and it was very well done.

Douluo fan, you write about indigenous people. You are simply lawless. Don't you take me, the Buddha, seriously?

I hope Beibei will soon learn to rule the world and the Dragon Emperor to break evil and the Dragon Emperor to shake the world. I hope that Beibei's sixth spirit ring can absorb 100,000-year-old spirit beasts.

The person who hates Ma Xiaotao is watching the anime. I think the manga is okay.

You can go to the Star Dou Forest to treat the Silver Dragon King. Because Tang San might confront the God Realm, the male protagonist can make an ally and earn a wife.

Lexuan Zhang's age is wrong. The protagonist is 8 years old and he is 20? Lexuan Zhang came to Shrek when he was 11 years old. Beibei is the same age as the protagonist, so Beibei wasn't born yet? Make a marriage contract to someone who doesn't exist? Now Zhang Lexuan is at most 18, he has cultivated to the level of Soul Saint, and he cannot be the senior sister of the inner academy. The older batch of students in the inner academy haven't graduated yet

No, the protagonist likes reading, and Han Ruoruo also likes reading. Why not make Han Ruoruo the heroine?

It's beautiful. It surpasses many fanfics. It's really well written.

A good fanfic of Legend of the Dragon King, worth reading (don't read this one, no need to read, no need to read, just read the chapter "Statement 2", see the way to read the sequel, the chapter "Statement 2" is available, just read the sequel)

Dear book friends, the author would like to ask if this book has a single heroine or multiple heroines and who the heroine is. Thank you🙏🙏

I wrote it a bit fast, and I don't think this book will be very long, but it is indeed a book that can be used as my daily bread. It is fully ordered now, so please update more 🙂

If you want to read a purely mindless and exciting article, you can go. The male protagonist is smarter than some people and has brains.