Mobile City: Flesh Evolution

To be honest, if your introduction was a game on steam, I would definitely want to play it 😁

To be honest, the word "sir" always feels a bit awkward. It is better to just call the city lord.

The plot of the novel should not be too game-like. It is a poisonous point in the novel that the corresponding enemy appears just after upgrading the equipment. For example, when you first use ant tentacles to make detection equipment, a monster comes to escape within a few minutes. When you first write that monster meat can be used as fuel, the next paragraph mentions the lack of fuel. This is a small poisonous point. It is best to separate the two plots and advance or postpone them by three or five chapters. For example, you are already short of fuel before you meet the ants, and the monster is only met after catching ants in the ant nest for several days.

It's too embarrassing to write about loyalty. It would be better to write about the lord directly controlling the life and death of his subjects.

The setting of the moving city is very interesting. Next, we have to fight against the villain. I hope the author can write it wonderfully with his writing skills. The best thing about it is that the fighting here is not boring. It's more of a battle of wits, which is obviously better in terms of perception than having one shot at a time. Of course, it's not that firepower and bombardment cannot be written. When both sides have exhausted all their strategies, only firepower and bombardment will be left. In short, I am very optimistic about this book. Good luck to the author! PS: Are the aliens more orcish? If it's an orc, can you write a few more sentences about its appearance? I asked it for my friend.

I have read several books on the mechanical genre, and finally saw the flesh-and-blood genre. I feel that the biggest problem is the handling of aliens. The setting is okay, but I really don't understand why I would want to protect the ecology when I can't protect myself. .

The dialogue between the characters needs to be improved, and it should not shock one or the other. It is almost becoming a mindless and entertaining story. It can be entertaining but it doesn't have to be too mindless, otherwise it won't look good.

The game is too systematic. Can it be more realistic when talking about technology? It violates human rights ethics and is too restrictive.

What looks like evolution is actually degeneration! The correct thing should be to analyze the genetic ability composition of flesh and blood, and use machinery to evolve the same ability to make it more efficient and energy-saving. An ability is a module, and ability modules can be called on-the-fly instead of being unable to coexist with each other like flesh and blood. The most precious things in the wasteland world are resources and technology. The higher the utilization rate of limited resources, the more powerful they are. Therefore, we should evolve towards eternal energy, city in the sky, city in the universe, plane cave, and multi-dimensional fortress!

Seedlings, yes, it has a full sense of wasteland. It is not the kind of mindless and cool article covered in wasteland skin. Please write more!