Mythology: The White Snake

Isn't the incense offering too overpowered? The protagonist only had to be worshipped by a poor village for a few years to summon a lucky cloud, so shouldn't the city god of a city who has been worshipped for at least 50 years be able to easily defeat a few demons? Why is he portrayed as so weak?

I'd walk away from any novel where the main character is named Changsheng (meaning "immortality") or Ping An (meaning "peaceful"). They can't even come up with a proper title.

Have you ever been a snake? Some of this is just random writing and assumptions.

1. The writing style is acceptable, and the plot progression is also quite solid. 2. Excessive reference to, or even outright plagiarism of, the Legend of the White Snake, fails to capture the essence of the celestial being, and cannot balance the human and serpentine aspects, ultimately resulting in a hodgepodge.

When you become a demon, your stance changes. You occasionally show kindness and save someone—can't you understand?

How did the author know that God would respond to believers? It wouldn't be so bad if it happened occasionally, but it happened all the time?

The setting itself is flawed; the author definitely couldn't control the cultivation realms.

I'm out. The writing is neither truly human nor truly demonic, wavering between the two, incredibly awkward.

Yeah, I read a chapter or two, and it felt a bit uncomfortable to read. The protagonist's name appears far too often. Just take the first chapter, the first page—the protagonist's name appears three times in the first five paragraphs alone. Personally, I felt it read strangely.

He's been castrated? 😐