Wizard: Beginning with a Data Panel

Well, you can have female companions; if the female lead isn't written well, it can be very toxic. You can also take in two maids who are slightly qualified. These are the kinds of minor things, and the protagonist doesn't even need to appear. They're basically like a head butler. Knowledge is the most important thing.

It happened too frequently, wave after wave of pursuit. And I don't know how to put it. Saying the woman was just a running buddy felt strange. It wasn't decisive enough, and it lacked the emotionless demeanor of wizards like Grimm, Anglie, and Adir.

I was interested in the premise, but unfortunately the writing was mediocre and quite weak.

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The scene involving the Great Sun Breathing Technique was incredibly disgusting and abrupt. Several people abandoned the book at this point. The protagonist really lacked any class.

He ran away after just one chapter; truly befitting a Level 1 writer.

Hurry up and update, who are you trying to fool with these few words?

I've been following this book since it started, and I thought it was pretty good until the protagonist became a full-fledged wizard. It was the kind of calm, experienced, decisive, knowledge-seeking, and power-hungry wizarding novel I was looking for. But then, right after he became a full-fledged wizard, ancient gods and blood angels appeared—it felt so forced and abrupt.

Also, the plot and conflicts should be more precise in their conception. Think more about the loopholes and avoid writing too blandly, which would make readers unable to continue reading.

Leaving aside other points, let me just mention one: don't be hypocritical, especially when it's unnecessary. Hypocrisy is a posture adopted when facing powerful machines, formidable enemies, or special purposes; it's not a normal behavior. If you're strong, write about strength; if you're weak, write about weakness; if you have desires, write about desires. Don't write in a roundabout way.