After Practicing for Thirteen Years, He Received the Inheritance of Erlang Zhenjun

It's okay. I watched it all at once, but it's really embarrassing to watch Breath of Mountains, Breath of Rivers, and Breath of Mountains and Rivers. Mountains and rivers means mountains and rivers. It can be a little more confrontational, like rivers versus mountains. I suggest changing it to something similar to Breath of Mountains and Breath of Rivers, which sounds better.

Why are so many of the protagonists in novels nowadays being Lao Deng? Is it because more Lao Deng are reading books?

Tell me why you don't want to read it. The writing of this bad heroine is too nonsensical. The daughter of a wealthy family was saved by a big-headed soldier like you and fell in love with you! ! ! ! ! You don't have to write about the heroine

Didn't the protagonist go home injured? The protagonist should be arranged to be a small military attache in the village or county, leading troops or training young warriors, etc. Later, he will become a general who guards one side or leads troops to fight. This writing method is also good. I have never seen this writing method.

He used poison at the beginning, but didn't eliminate the root cause in the competition. He also talked about taking the long term to catch the big fish. Don't you know what the protagonist's situation is now? Doesn't it take some time to develop now? How do you get the confidence to be a prostitute when you are not even a martial artist? Are you still catching big fish and not afraid of capsizing?

There's nothing wrong with the writing, plot, etc. It's just that the cultivation experience was painful to watch. With the name Erlang Zhenjun, he is actually just sitting at home and relying on taking drugs and treasure materials to build up his cultivation. Training hawks and dogs is just a decoration. Searching mountains and slaying demons has basically no effect. It is all a man-made disaster. In addition, it is okay to start as a seventh-level casual official without delaying the reincarnation of the true king. Later, it is very difficult to go from the sixth-level general to an official directly. When you become a general, you have to open a martial arts school. It seems that you have to intervene in everything.

Embarrassing is my only evaluation of this book, it belongs to the general category

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Is this martial artist awesome? It hasn't been done in 13 years. It's unlikely that the second one or the following ones will become a mass product. If that's the case, it's better not to watch it.

There are too many analyses, ideas, explanations, and descriptions, and it seems very watery!

It doesn't matter if you give me any inheritance, the Eight-nine Mysterious Techniques are unique in heaven and earth! Thirteen years is just a hair, shouldn't it be 1.3 Billion Yuan Hui, tens of billions billions of generations? This is the inheritance of the saints!

Overall it's okay. Some problems: The performance of the imperial court does not match the background. It is said that it is trying to pacify the world, but no information can be found on its own territory. The clues require the protagonist to bring a dog to find all the clues. The writing is unreasonable. There are also many words that are too casual and look very dramatic.

The long-winded Che Lulu said back and forth that Chapter 10 of making up for the foundation of martial arts is not over yet. You don't even dare to think about whether it will be enough to break through Chapter 20 in the future.

Dududu, others want to kill you, but you don't kill them.

Erlangshen's template is so outrageous that it feels inappropriate even when I look at it.

Alas, every time I break through, I calculate how many times I can fight the enemy across realms. Let's see how talented the protagonist is.

Erlangshen's fundamental method, the Eighty-nine Mysterious Techniques, the Seventy-three Transformations, and the method of cultivating the Heavenly Eye

Looking at the results of this book, they are terrible. No monthly passes, no rewards, not even comments 🙂‍↔️ Let me see what's going on. . . . . . . . . . . .

Friends who are familiar with Erlang Shen should know that his fundamental skill is the Eight-Nine Mysterious Skill. Why is the author still practicing the original Qi and Blood martial arts after receiving the inheritance?

According to the standard, no force at the Grandmaster level should have too much combat power. It should be mid-level and high-level. But now I see five, six, seven or eight Grandmaster peaks being dispatched to assassinate the protagonist at every turn, just like dead soldiers.

I don't have much of a main story, it's just bullshit that others bring trouble to.

Suddenly I couldn't watch anymore. I felt that the timeline was unclear and the plot was unremarkable.

After reading a few chapters, I am no longer interested. The data is very messy.

I've read Chapter 62 and the plot seems a bit familiar. It's very similar to following Water Monkey to become a god. They all have martial arts halls, imperial courts, remnants, Zhanjiao, Erlang Shen... Even this breath has a very similar effect to other people's water essence. If someone can control water animals, he will keep pets. There are too many similar elements. Maybe they are all the same after reading too many novels.

Why are there so few updates? I can't stand it anymore.

The plot is good, but I need to practice my writing. It's very hard to read.

Got a pigeon? If you can't double-blade, then don't double-blade.