Martial Arts Longevity Begins with Inner Alchemy

As an upgrading online novel, there is a big problem, that is, in the early stage, the path of seclusion and upgrading lasted for a hundred chapters, and the upgrading speed was very fast, similar to the top-notch luck of Let Me Laugh, so it attracted a wave of readers who liked this type of writing, and also discouraged some readers who did not like this aspect. However, after a hundred chapters, the author began to level up, and the protagonist no longer lived in seclusion.

The plot is good, but it's a pity that you ruined it. The first part was good, but the second part was almost ruined by you.

To the little emperor When your relatives abandon you When you watch your mother commit suicide You are alone Come into this world Only 8 years The splendor of the world has not yet caught your eyes The filth of the world will drown you Hold on to that ray of light Although it is not purely well-intentioned , it can achieve its purpose Isn't it Burn this body No regrets

The concept is good, but the writing is only at the level of a middle school student, so I was persuaded to give up.

When will it be available? The writing is okay. If the rest is good, I will read it. Don't just do it for love.

After reading it in one go, I felt good about the golden finger = optimization and God's reward for hard work. Overall, I felt good. The advantages are that the basic logic is fine, the setup by the steady farmers is good, and it suits my personal taste. One suggestion I would like to make is that planting skills can be expanded to include food. In addition, it is up to the author to make arrangements for blacksmithing and elixir making. Also, the word count is too short, so take your time and say no to eunuchs.

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Generally speaking, the author is not very good at writing stories and prefers to write settings.

Come on, author, I like to see such self-sufficient and stable ones.

Like this kind of golden finger, no matter whether it is true or not, you can succeed in anything you practice. You have practiced this😒 and you don't need any local secrets? It all depends on "I am thinking" about some things that I don't know whether they are useful or useless before traveling? Still successful? With such a big skill, what kind of martial arts can you practice? You can get it right in one step. Not to mention the Eight-nine Mysterious Skills and Tiangang Disha, just practice swords and Qi to become a swordsman. In the future, you can fly with a sword and take people's heads from thousands of miles away. Why bother to use the skin of inner alchemy? In fact, "I'm thinking"

Update time post, one chapter at 12 noon, two chapters in the afternoon

The practice and golden fingers of this book are really amazing, and the various foreshadowings and worldview are also eye-catching. It can be said that the biggest elements of an excellent work are already fully present. But a good hand cannot play cards, and the upper limit is strictly limited by the author's own ability. cheats can add a progress bar to any thing/skill and can break through the limitations of the skill itself. Generally speaking, as long as there is theory, it can be practiced! The practice system is the inner alchemy method with infinite possibilities. The source of the golden elixir avenue is more original than the qi-building foundation elixir Yuan Ying. And all steps have detailed breakthrough training. The key is that the protagonist is a man of his own, and he also perfectly integrates the Qi, blood and martial arts of this world, which is very enjoyable. But! What did the author write? Character description - very little, except for the protagonist, there is basically no description of the appearance of the characters; Environment description - none, there are no characteristics of each country and region, all are mentioned in one stroke; Language dialogue - slow, the first two are actually okay, not important, but this character dialogue is an AI question and answer, two emotionless robots are talking to each other, and the various dialogues are basically without any nutrition, "What should we do?" Really, you call that fighting? In the battle where the protagonist is crushed, he just shoots and punches. In the middle period, when the B block is blocked, it is a movement of his mind. In evenly matched battles, he still punches. In the middle period, the description is "a spear thrust, various magical powers, and flying sword thrusts." The author wrote a battle to destroy a country in two lines. It is extremely unsatisfactory. Let alone the special effects of skills, a little sound effect can be said to be a huge scene. Emotional description - Taishang Wangqing, the author emphasized time and time again in the early stage that becoming stronger is for better enjoyment! You can never be an emotionless person! Then what does the actual description make people feel? The character in the book said it very well, "Sometimes it feels like you are not a heartless person, but in fact you won't feel anything even if everyone else is dead." The protagonist's actual performance is that he has no emotional communication with others. His expression does not change at all in dozens of chapters, and there is no entertainment activities. He is not too sad when his elders die. When communicating with friends, he only exchanges information and practice. He does not talk about his own affairs at all. He is always doing things and practicing, and leaves the house once a year. Family, friendship, and love are inseparable. The author writes that what the protagonist hates the most is the Riddler. In fact, it was the boss who said it and was blocked, and the protagonist is the biggest Riddler. The protagonist has become a big boss. He doesn't say a word to his subordinates and relatives. He just sends a message: "You do it. You don't need to know anything. I'm not sure about it." So this book is divided into two parts: cultivation and others. A novel reads like an expository text. Except for the Golden Finger and the Cultivation System, which are a little bit of meat, the rest are all steamed buns. When encountering a scene where you are pretending to be B, you can barely drink it like water and take a few bites. The only thing left is to look forward to seeing the meat in the middle of the steamed buns...

This book. First, I'm too nervous, I'm busy all the time, and I'm too tired. Second, the golden finger is broken. You have so many martial arts skills. How can you remember them in time? Third, I feel that the enemy is very smart and my own people are very stupid. Is this to highlight the protagonist? I personally don't like watching it, but I hope others enjoy watching it.

The subject matter is okay, but the writing is terrible. Reading these after seeing good writing is simply a pain.

Although it is a criticism, it is rare to see a good book in the early stage and I still express my opinion: Although the early stage is relatively boring to most people, in my case it is grass jelly, and the hermit's routine of hanging up and upgrading is very good. . It doesn't work anymore later on. I think it was written too fast and it collapsed. I just did a good hermit upgrade flow to solve the case, and then added various irrelevant skills. . Just brush up the inner alchemy book and make it invincible. Why don't you need so many useless treasures, skills, and characters to solve crimes? Of course, the author may consider making the article longer. That's easier. It's still the hermit upgrade stream. I just don't come out of the mountain. I train the people in Qingshan Village until they come out of the mountain and push them. It's enough for decades. . That's it, this early-stage book of fairy grass is considered useless.

Brother, please let that village go. The old man who was farming today is an unparalleled genius. Tomorrow, with the help of pig's feet, a large number of top masters will emerge in the village. It makes me sick.

There is indeed too much moving drama, in my opinion. After the protagonist and the others see the machine beast, they will have to move it within two chapters, because ordinary people will see such a scary scene. He should have retreated long ago, including the protagonist, a third-level warrior. To spread the news and purchase things. Including teaching martial arts and finding wooden guns. You can go to the mountains to do it! There is no need to put it off again and again. Especially when the Dali branch line is inserted in the middle, you have to understand that the current main line is moving. If you don't complete the main plot, what branch plot will you do? Besides, the main plot is not difficult to complete, but the branch plots are very difficult, such as finding out information. These all take time! There is absolutely no need to wait in the village. If it weren't for your writing skills and reading ability, I think many people would have withdrawn.

To be honest, when I read the follow-up, I realized that it was starting to look a bit weird, and I couldn't stand it anymore. Just like the previous books that wrote weird things, I just decided to write horror stories. I was still thinking about finding a good book, but you are starting to talk nonsense.

I want to improve the style, but I don't have the writing style. The settings and plots are really good. You can see three rooms and one living room with your feet. Ke Qiyuan does this very well, and the details in every aspect make the style full. Although his settings are a bit rough, there are basically no major flaws. You have too many flaws.

We knew clearly that war and disaster were coming, but all the food was in the mountains. If you don't hurry up, pack your things and head to the mountains. They also left almost everyone in the village to wait and see. If you want to say that the protagonist is strong enough not to be afraid of all dangers, there is no need to move away at all. But it is clear from the lines that the protagonist is very capable and can only protect himself. He is also thinking about renovating all the houses and moving. You are fleeing disaster. It's not like I'm moving to my own home. The blade is almost on the back of your neck, and you are still thinking about cleaning up the house. If it wasn't to advance the plot, would we be planning to build a city in the mountain? We are going in to open up thousands of acres of land.

As a result, the protagonist was promoted to the Fairy Queen and was so low that he exploded.

I mentioned earlier that I only know one type of boxing - Bajiquan. Within a few chapters, I already know Xingyiquan and Yi Jingjin! Also, these levels of warriors are too dramatic. Can't you think of a good physical training realm and then subdivide it into several realms, such as strengthening muscles, exchanging blood, internal training, etc.?

Let's build a forum for ideas and opinions. If you have any ideas or opinions, you can post them below. Opinions from outside will be deleted...

The writing is very long-winded and the plot is boring.

Ten realms of inner alchemy: Refining oneself and keeping sincerity, building the foundation and cultivating medicine, Kanlijiaojing Gathering medicine and returning it to the cauldron, Zhou Tianhuo, Qiankunjiaojing Raising the fetus in ten months, moving the gods to change the cauldron. Ni Wan Nurturing Compassion Refining Oneself and Keeping Sincerity The key points are to punish anger and suffocate desires, to maintain emptiness and sincerity; to eliminate acquired habits and expose the innate true body; to abdicate the conscious spirit and reveal the original spirit; to break away from the worldly relationship and hide in the secret. The Dan family cleans up their body and mind, concentrates on their thoughts, and then returns to the ancestral aperture in the middle palace to cultivate their original aura. They should always be quiet for two or three years. Over time, they will get better and better, and promote the opening of a mysterious aperture. Building foundation and cultivating medicine The technique is to choose a place to enter the circle, keep the body, mind and mind still, collect the three treasures of essence, energy and spirit and return them to the central palace. Always be aware of them. Carve out the rules at all times. Use false cultivation to cultivate the truth, use a hole in the xuanguan to establish the foundation to collect the divine energy, and practice the secret of holding the Yuan and keeping one. If you are proficient in this method, sit down again and forget to look inside, and perform the technique of concentrating your mind into the Qi point. When you are alive, when the Yuanyang is born, you will be full of energy. In the trance, the innate Qi will come from nothingness. The dragon is born in Li, and the tiger is born in Kan. When the emptiness is extremely quiet, sink the soul in the Lamb's Cave. Listen to its natural breathing and self-inhalation, collect the Qi-free Ren Shui (True Yang in Kan), take it into the Zhonggong with true intention, and meet the True Yin in Li. Kanli Jiaojing The technique requires the heart and breath to be interdependent, the body and mind to be immobile, the spirit lamb to condense, in the extreme silence of the void, suddenly feel the seabed moving and light shining through, like the new moon on the third day of the lunar month. Or like millet or beads, shining on the abdomen, which is the sign of the first appearance of the golden energy. Then use the true intention to introduce the medicine through the tail, pass through the Jiaji, penetrate the jade pillow, enter the mud pill, travel to the Nine Palaces, drip from the upper cheek to the Magpie Bridge, like nectar from awakening alcohol, return along the equator to the Qi point, perform the return method, and start the Kung Fu for the fetal breath. Gathering medicine and returning to the tripod In the midst of silence and chaos, the Dan family suddenly heard thunder like cracking silk, the Dantian was hot, and the two kidneys were boiled in soup. The medicine was gathered on the seabed, and the true meaning was used to guide it to the end. The thunder rumbled through the three passes, and Weng gathered in the Niwan Palace. At this time, the wind is blowing in the Moon Cave, the moon is bright in the Jiang Palace, and a round light emerges between the eyebrows. The medicine unknowingly flows down from the magpie bridge and down the heavy building. It is as cold as borneol and mint, refreshing the heart and spleen, and is sent back to the earthen cauldron. This is the method of refining the God of Grains and the power of filling up obstacles. Zhoutian Huohou The Dan family has been appointed as the supervisor to refine the medicine in Xiao Zhoutian. From Zi Shi to Si Shi, Yang Huo enters. There are 216 strategies that should be done, except for the 36 strategies of bathing at Mao Shi, which are not used, and one hundred and eighty breaths are implemented. From noon to Hai hour, the yin retreating talisman is used. One hundred and forty-four countermeasures should be used in response to Kun. The twenty-four countermeasures for bathing at You hour are not used, and one hundred and twenty breaths are implemented. Together with the sixty breaths of bathing and the remaining twenty-four breaths, the total is 384 breaths, so the number of breaths per day and week is only a few. The alchemist must adjust the medicine accurately at ordinary times. When refining medicine in the furnace, as long as the mind and breath depend on each other, use it naturally, and do not use it to measure the sand and pursue it deliberately. Xiao Zhoutian succeeded and obtained the jade liquid to restore the elixir, making up for the acquired leakage and loss, and returned to his childlike body. The interplay of heaven and earth Danshi traveled around the world and filled up the place of the innate universe. In the great concentration of concentration, he suddenly became inspired. The entrance was wide open, and he suddenly felt empty and empty. He entered the realm where heaven and earth are combined, people and self are eliminated, and the world is mixed. At this time, the innate Qi was restored and condensed into a great medicine. A little bit fell into the Huangting, and the whole body was soft and smooth. I only felt the round tutu and the bright light, like beads on a jade plate, returning the elixir to the gold liquid exposed alone in the ethereal spirit. Ten months of raising a fetus The divine energy is condensed into a holy fetus, also known as a baby. It must wash away the mind and worries, maintain a dense silence, and be constantly awake. It is like a dragon raising a pearl, like a chicken holding an egg, and the warmth is continuous, so that the spiritual fetus can become stronger day by day. Ten months of raising the fetus is a skill of refining Qi and transforming into the spirit during the Great Zhou Dynasty. The fire should be warmed by itself in the furnace, and the whole day should be played in a vacuum. Thoughts cannot arise, and thoughts cannot be dispersed. Ten months are like one day, and only then can the spirit be fully transformed into the fetus. The tenth month of pregnancy is a period of meditation. If the Dantian is hot, you can imagine a black ball as big as a bowl between the eyebrows. Take it into the divine chamber and the heat will subside on its own. Shifting Gods to Changing Ding Tou Niwan Palace, also known as Tiangu, is the main palace of Yang God. The spiritual fetus is purely an innate condensation of the yang spirit, which is the Dharma body of the human being. The baby's appearance must come out of its uterus and move from the Xiatian Qi point to the Niwan Palace to perform the exercises of refining one's nature. Yang Shen can transcend the barriers of time and space, penetrate gold and stone, and appear as he pleases. After moving to the Heavenly Valley of the Gods, the alchemist should hold his head high and do nothing, position himself in an upright position, calm it with tranquility, control it with wisdom, and then proceed to enter the sexual power of concentration. Niwan nourishes kindness Niwan is the place where the whole body is pure and spiritual. It corresponds to the star of the space. The Dan family teaches the sky and the earth, and unites the heart of heaven with the true heart. To live in the dust and emerge from the dust, one must enter the dust to temper, be still to cultivate wisdom, and move to refine wisdom. The secret of Dharma is the calmness of the mind. The secret is the word "sincerity". Sincerity in silence makes the spirit self-clarifying, and sincerity in movement makes the nature self-clarifying. There is no ordinary emotion in the world that cannot be left behind, and there is no physical knowledge that cannot be broken. It is the nature of nature that is made clear by sincerity. At this time, the Dan family is extremely still and vivid, and extremely concentrated produces wisdom. It develops the potential of the human body and obtains great wisdom and great supernatural powers. Huanxuhedao In the inner alchemy practice, until the Yang Shen is released from the body, it has not yet reached the end. The body is still there, and it is difficult to escape from life and death. After possessing magical powers, the alchemist should not be constantly in motion and not be tired of using his wisdom. Instead, he should be in the midst of group activities. He can enjoy the contentment of quiet contemplation alone, just like catching a fish and forgetting about it. Then go one step further, smash the void, forget both truth and illusion, combine the Tao with nature, realize the emptiness of the gods, and cycle together with the heaven and earth, become blurred and boundless, move with the sky, and remain still with the sky, this is the achievement of the immortals.

Author, if you are not suitable for writing fighting plots, just write crushing sentence patterns. Don't write fighting plots. Don't disgust me, okay? Tiantian Funa deliberately hides her strength and pretends to be a pig to eat the tiger.

I have seen more than 200 and 300 authors fight scenes with no climax at all. If you advance or not, it is just like that. There is nothing new. Listening to these 200 chapters is good, but the subsequent chapters are simply boring. There are no ups and downs at all. The early stage is okay. There is no blessing in the middle and late stages. The writing of various plots is very poor. Forget it, quit.

Before these 130 chapters, I felt that they were quite powerful. After reading a few more chapters, I competed with the three major families, and I felt like I was back before liberation.

I've read more than 100 chapters. I'm still in the village and haven't gone out. And I'm basically either practicing or planting grass. I'm going to introduce the exercises again. It's so boring. Goodbye...

Don't accept female leads? Shopkeeper Zhu is okay, but I feel bored later and it's a pity to throw it away because it tastes tasteless.