Mortal: with Supernatural Spiritual Roots, I Control Beasts and Become an Immortal

Take a look at it and say that points are rare. Don't give yourself the talents of the spiritual beast. Don't you know that mortals can cultivate spiritual beasts slower than humans? The most outstanding thing about spiritual beasts is that they live longer than humans

Feeling pretty good so far. I would like to give you a small suggestion. As long as it is not a major poisonous problem reported by most people, there is no need to worry about it. I often see people saying "another old slave nanny novel", which is really annoying. As long as you don't have bad relations with Han Li, you will be a nanny? Besides, this is a mortal fanfic. Do you like Han Li more or less? Don't most people just want their OC protagonist to enter Han Li's world and interact with Han Li and other characters, make up for regrets, etc.? Come up and kill Han Li, take the little green bottle, who are you looking at behind?

In fact, many mortals follow the timeline mainly for the sake of following the timeline. The plot is basically the same pattern, nothing new, and the plot is basically scattered. For example, if you are in the realm of cultivating the alien spirit root, you will have the same time as others with the miscellaneous spirit root. You basically go to the bloody realm. If you want to get things, you can't separate them, or the realm can't be opened once. Others have poor qualifications in skills. In order to increase the success rate of breakthrough, they only create a realm timeline. There is basically no need for the alien spirit root and the celestial spirit root.

Your trip to the Bloody Forbidden Land was not to acquire Nangong Wan, but to acquire a spiritual beast and resources. Does the protagonist lack that resource? Your big brother is injured or something, it's so bloody.

As long as you don't steal Nangong Wan's fans, it's still okay

Give it up, give it up, and treat it as a lesson to those who ordered it before. I am a fool to give some encouragement to a new author like this!

I understand why authors like to write about the protagonist Tiansha Lone Star. My family couldn't write well and they really tried to persuade me to quit.

At the age of 60, he formed the elixir and dared to be called the number one cultivation genius in Tiannan.

Haha, is this a break? It seems like it's time to give up!

There are too many little poisonous points, and things that were clearly written in the original work were changed randomly.

The author has indeed overstated his combat power. The body of Taiyin is said to be so strong, but it turns out that Han Li has been forming elixirs for more than a hundred years and you are only at the peak of the middle stage of elixir formation. Why should you have a baby before the Xutian Temple to increase your combat power? Otherwise, how can you show off in the next battle?

Is the introduction serious? Giving birth at 60? Then I won't watch it.

One physique can do so many things and forcefully set up contradictions

The protagonist has been comprehending the Little Green Bottle for three whole months, but Yuanying Ancestor didn't realize it at all? Even if you say that Master Qingyu is afraid of being discovered by old monster Linghu, it's okay not to enter Yellow Maple Valley.

Single and long, no? If you don't reply, there will be a pitfall by default.

Your update time is too messy. It used to be updated once after nine o'clock and once after six o'clock in the afternoon, but now it has become unclear when it is updated! Please, do you think this book is really good? Many book friends subscribed because they liked your creativity. You can kill people's enthusiasm by updating irregularly. Can you tell me how many times a day you will update and when? Can it be updated? Do you have the ability to write it down? (If you really have no inspiration, take a leave of absence. Don't squeeze out more toothpaste. Some of the plots are embarrassing.) I hope it can be completely decided, otherwise I believe no book friends will be willing to read it soon!

Let's put it this way, the author learned mathematics from a kindergarten teacher. There are thousands of people in a sect. The protagonist deliberately arranged large-scale special effects for emotional value. As a result, a few elders and a few related characters added a little emotional value, and the total score was 600. Among them, Yuanying and Jindan Patriarch gave the most 80 and 300. Han Li gave a few points. The other disciples added up to more than 100 points. A sect with thousands of people and tens of thousands of people gave hundreds of emotions. Who did you learn math from?

This book collapsed after the chaos in the sea of ​​​​stars began. The protagonist immediately became stupid and started all kinds of pressures. It was not fun at all. The various calculations were mediocre and the writing was stinky and long.

If you are a real eunuch, you will have to think carefully about your next book. This one should be used as a training book.

Are you a eunuch? Why don't you write it?

Nangong Wan didn't dare to cut off her beard, so what's the point? Lao Han only needs to maintain his Yuanyang body and practice well. Female sex is like a wolf or a tiger, which is the most draining of one's energy. Just let the protagonist do it.

I have been reading the comments, but I am still at work. Writing a book is completely part-time. It is almost 10 o'clock in the evening after I finish writing 4,000 words a day. Then most of the questions are just a few, let's all answer them together The first old question is about the Taiyin body and the alien spirit roots entering the Bloody Forbidden Land. (If you are careful in the Bloody Forbidden Land, it is really not dangerous!!! It is only dangerous for people like Old Demon who are weak, have no backstage, and are crazy and boundless like Duobaonu!!!) It has been laid out for so long, and I have written this, the only purpose of entering the Bloody Forbidden Land is to obtain the right to use the little green bottle in the future, otherwise how could Old Demon Han possibly trade elixirs with you. Why do you have to use the little green bottle of elixir? This is a foreshadowing. In order to benefit the people around you, if you don't want to be lonely on the road, help if you can. And in order to make it reasonable to enter the Bloody Forbidden Land, I also laid the groundwork. Brother Han was plotted by outsiders to find out whether Han Yunzhi's physique was true. Anyone who has read the original work knows that Yu Ling has Mu Lan as a spy, and it is impossible to watch Tian Nan's genius grow up (this is considered a spoiler in the later period) And the ancestor gave so many good things, Nangong Wan even put in a golden elixir. In the original work, he couldn't beat the Mo Jiao during the Qi training period, but he still treated the Mo Jiao like a 🐶. Second, why the Three Spiritual Roots could not pass the Immortal Ascension Conference, and why the brother and sister Han Yunzhi have the Three Spiritual Roots were written according to the animation and the original book. First of all, in the original book of the Immortal Ascension Conference, there is an arena competition specifically for casual cultivators. Unless you have the three spiritual roots of dual, different, and heaven, you can pass without taking the test and enter the sect directly. If you fail to pass the three spiritual roots, isn't it normal to go to the arena? The original book also states that Han Yunzhi's talent is not good, and it was Yuanying Ancestor who used a heaven-defying method to cleanse his marrow to obtain the golden elixir, so there is nothing wrong with his three spiritual roots. Then why did I not arrange double spiritual roots for Han Yunzhi in the Immortal Ascension Conference based on the anime? It was mainly to simplify the plot and highlight the protagonist. The third problem is the golden finger. The hook is too big and cannot be controlled. If you don't add points yourself, add points to the spirit beast. This also has restrictions, that is, every time you add points, you have to multiply them ten times, so you have to be careful. You must not add points to the same place on a person too many times, so you can only point at spiritual beasts, and the title of the book is considered a beast-controlling novel. The main reason is that I am not capable of writing the essence of a beast-controlling novel. The remaining problems are water, slow pace and poor writing. There's really no way around it. He's not a talented player, he's just a little loser. He can only write his first book slowly. After writing more than a million words for him, he should pay for his tuition, and then he should make some progress, probably🤔

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Ancestor Han Yunzhi is the Nascent Soul of the Yuling Sect, not the Spirit Beast Mountain. The basic settings are not clear. Just read the introduction and you will know that it is a rubbish novel.

You can exclude Nangong Wan, but I hate Han Li. Is the protagonist a filial son of Han Li? Shennong