All Heavens: Starting from the Eight Condor Swords Flying Together

I'm really speechless. Combining the young Zhang Sanfeng with the Condor Shooting is sheer nonsense. The timeline is the biggest problem.

I don't like reading this kind of book. It mixes characters from several books. The author has no foundation at all. The writing is completely different and it's a mess. It's really a rubbish drama. I can't watch it!

There are a lot of typos, but I can't even change them.

This is no longer justified by the confusion of the timeline! What exactly did the author want to write about, martial arts? Fantasy? Or mixed martial arts? It's a complete hodgepodge, including the Shooting Condor, the Divine Condor, and the young Zhang Sanfeng before it was released! Martial arts novels are fairly clear. After it was put on the shelves, it was Buddhism, Confucianism, Taoism, and Tantra! Divine thoughts turn into swords, souls leave the body, etc., And they are also integrated into the swordsmanship in the snow! Either explain from the beginning that it's a mixed martial arts game and draw a big map, or you can ascend and travel through it. Now, what does it mean that Song Jinmeng is said to be a small country in a wilderness?

I said it at the beginning, you said that emotional impact, just say that! Your so-called sword moves have completely changed in the face of this kind of situation. Emotions control the body, control strength, martial arts, etc., Have completely changed. Facing the opponent seems to be a life and death enemy, fast, accurate and ruthless. It is completely supported by this emotion, just like the Sunflower Book. It is not that you have become more powerful, it is equivalent to Fengyun. All the extreme physical potential of the body is controlled by this emotion, fully exploded.

There is a question. In the plot timeline of Young Zhang Junbao, Zhang Junbao is considered to be 15 years old not long after Yue Fei's death. However, Yue Fei had been dead for more than 50 years when Qiu Chuji and Guo Yang met in Niujiacun, Zhang Junbao was at least over 60 years old, and the Condor Condor and the Divine Condor were at least 60 years old. Guo Jing and his son left Mongolia for 18 years. Yang Guo was less than 20 years old when he separated from Xiao Longnu and then waited for Xiao Longnu for 16 years. It adds up to 50 years. When Guo Xiang, who was less than 20 years old, met Zhang Junbao, he was over 100 years old! Yi Tian said at the beginning that Zhang Junbao was 3 years younger than Guo Xiang, and then Guo Xiang spent half his life looking for Yang to establish the Emei Sect, while Zhang Junbao waited for Guo Xiang for most of his life and became a spinster who is more than 100 years old! If you want to see the young Zhang Junbao and the Shooting Condor at the same time, you will have to harmonize the whole condor and directly enter the plot of Yitian. Otherwise, how can Zhang Junbao call his father-in-law when facing Guo Jing, who is younger than him? After all, Guo Jing was almost 50 years old when Guo Xiang was born!

What a messy feeling, a well-written martial arts story suddenly turned into fantasy, which is a bit outrageous 🙂

If you only write about the young Zhang Sanfeng, or a fanfic of The Condor Shooting, or simply write a new book by yourself, it would be better, but you would forcibly tie the plots of Zhang Sanfeng and The Condor Shooting together, and the sense of separation would be too severe.

Since the timeline can be messed up, it's better to just take a synthetic brigade. It doesn't matter whether the martial arts is high or not.

Deafening silence? Can you combine two opposite words like this? Is the author literate or uneducated?

It's very reasonable. Zhang Sanfeng and Huang Laoxie are the same generation. Later they met Guo Xiang, but Zhang Sanfeng took the other person's body 🙂

Single and long, no? If you don't reply, there will be a pitfall by default.

Recommend yourself "I Have Three Hundred Lifespans of Time Traveling and Shooting the Condor"

It's clearly well written in the beginning, but from the beginning of the plot with Li Xiuyuan, it seems like it was written by someone else. It's so mysterious that the more it's written, the uglier it gets.

It should start with a sperm and an egg

I suddenly realized that in Zhang Weijian's "The Year of Zhang Sanfeng", if Zhang Junbao and the seven disciples he recruited were turned into Wang Chongyang and the Quanzhen Seven Sons. It seems that there is absolutely nothing wrong with the historical background or their respective ages. It can be said that they completely overlap. Because in fact, many of the Quanzhen Seven Sons are either the same age as Wang Chongyang or older than Wang Chongyang. And in "Young Zhang Sanfeng", there are actually many Wudang Heroes who are older than Zhang Junbao. If Lin Xueyan's character is changed to Sun Buer, and Song Yuanqiao takes his wife Lin Xueyan, then the target will naturally be Ma Yu. Then there is Zhang Cuishan, the one who always causes trouble for Zhang Junbao, who is a perfect match for Qiu Chuji. Because Zhang Cuishan and Qiu Chuji happen to be the most talented in martial arts among the Wudang Seven Heroes and the Quanzhen Seven Sons respectively. Qin Sirong can compare with Lin Chaoying. After all, Wang Chongyang and Lin Chaoying are the real CP relationship, and the two were not together in the end. It can be compared with the final ending of Zhang Junbao and Qin Sirong in "Young Zhang Sanfeng". After all, Zhang Junbao and Guo Xiang really have little CP experience. I even feel that Su Youpeng's Yi Tianxing in the drama "Young Zhang Sanfeng" is more like Yang Guo, and then his predecessor Yan Ran is more like the little dragon girl who died young, and the relationship between Yitian Xingqin Velvet and Zhang Junbao is more like "The Condor" At the end of "The Romance", the relationship between Zhang Junbao, Guo Xiang and Yang Guo was reversed, which is equivalent to the fact that Yanran did not die, so Yi Tianxing and Yanran were separated for 20 years due to special reasons, and they still ended up together. And Qin Sirong met the elder brother Yi Tianxing and fell in love with Yi Tianxing, and then Zhang Junbao met Qin Sirong and fell in love with Qin Silong. But it is recognized that Lin Chaoying and Wang Chongyang are CPs, but they have not had the chance to get together yet.

The writing is good, and the plot is getting better and better, and since it's a mixed martial arts show, why not add Feng Yun and the like into it, and be chaotic and have your own style, haha. Come on, update quickly!