Love in Cthulhu

As the title says, it feels a bit fragmented. The author's early writing had a suspenseful atmosphere and a bit of horror. Logically speaking, if you want to maintain this atmosphere, you should write more content on the issue of who is who, but it exploded too fast. I think this explosion is not a problem of the author's writing ability, but the author seems to really want to bring the plot back to a daily life. If you want the romance content to be more scary in the early stage, you can pull it back to the daily content later, but it is pulled back too fast, and it is pulled back directly without saying too much suspense and horror content. It feels like the author is very anxious to bring this plot back. For many of the subsequent plots, I feel like I am patching the first few chapters, trying to weaken the atmosphere at the beginning, and even starting I have been weakening the atmosphere all the time, but the atmosphere itself cannot be weakened. The problem of swamp people can hardly be weakened in romance works. The resurrection part is even more of a collapse-like weakening. Why do I use the word collapse? Because all the previous atmospheres have collapsed, which is extremely fragmented. I find the part where the heroine's mother is also a monster very strange, because this The plot has almost no effect. The only function is to force the plot back to daily life. In order to bring the plot back to daily life, the part where the monster lady and the male protagonist guess each other, the part where the heroine is resurrected, and the rhythm of the plot of the dummy are sacrificed. Similarly, the heroine's body is left alone for the first three or four days just to make time for daily life. Why is it so strange? It's not that you can't live a daily life, but why do you have to sacrifice so much to live this daily life? Do you, the author, have any rules and weird stories that constrain you when you write novels? If you use Japanese animation as an example, the first three episodes of Puella Magi Madoka Magica were followed by the plot of Pretty Cure. It is very weird. , I was sweating very much when watching the daily part later, because the legacy of the previous atmosphere is still there, and the Swamp Man problem is still very conspicuous. It feels like there is a thorn in the daily part. There are many plots that can obviously be talked about more, but they are also mentioned briefly. Maybe it is foreshadowing. Having said so much, let's talk about something good. , The writing is not bad, the male protagonist has also grown up, not from the beginning to the end, many of the actions of the male protagonist in the early stage are quite logical and can be understood, the daily part and the daily life of Miss Monster are really good, the male protagonist has psychological struggles and psychological changes, and you can also see the charm of the male protagonist, and feel that Miss Monster is a person The character has also gradually become independent. I can only say that the plot after the resurrection is a bit too stiff. Maybe it can be better. The content related to the heroine and the character shaping are a bit too light. Generally speaking, it is okay. The above are my personal opinions. Just take a picture and enjoy it. If you have your own opinions, welcome to discuss.

This is the book with the most delicate emotional descriptions that I have read so far. I hope there will be 10,000 chapters to follow. I have 30,000 days left to live, and I hope there will be 30,000 chapters left 🙂

The first 15 chapters are recommended with 5 stars. I haven't seen the rest yet. There is Pure Love, NTR and Cthulhu. The IQ is online. It's delicious 😍

It looks good, I love reading it. It would be great if the author could update it twice a day.

Come to think of it, isn't this a question I asked a long time ago? If a slime kills and devours your wife and then has all your wife's memories, habits and appearance, then should you accept her or avenge your wife? The answer is to find another slime to kill your wife. If you think that the wife after swallowing is no longer her, it's okay, because this is the savior who avenges you. If you think that the slime that has the memory and habitual appearance of your wife after swallowing is your wife, then it's even better.

Tmd Just watch it, I will go directly to Alaya and beat Cthulhu to the ground hard c. I will go to the courtyard and knock down so many incarnations of Naija one by one to the ground hard c. If I am not happy, I will summon Gherroth's big alarm clock⏰ to wake up Azatos directly.

I don't know why, it feels like I'm watching two Lu Mingfei fall in love, both of them are masters of bad words.

Jian Xi and the male protagonist are really a team of hard-luck mandarin ducks. Monster: Do you remember everything in the past? Male protagonist: In the past, are you talking about the past? That was the past between Jian Xi and I. Nothing more to say, please hurry up

At the end of the fight, Jian Xi and the monster Jian Xi wore maid outfits. One had long hair and the other short hair. One wore black silk and the other wore white silk. It looked like a Shura field. She asked the male protagonist who he liked, but in fact the atmosphere was ambiguous. After paying the rent, the male protagonist did everything. The key was to start with the same face. As for how to pass the review, it depends on the author.

I understand that a harem will always open up in the end, but why do we have to let Jian Xi lose so rudely? She lost completely, and the entire emotional line seemed to be the highlight of Miss Monster. She was completely suppressed by Miss Monster. The closest she came to victory was actually relying on the advantage of being first to force the male protagonist to surrender. Why was there not even one plot where she defeated Miss Monster on her own? Zhou Nan, you are the same. World B has been suppressing people with justice throughout the whole process. No wonder Jianxi wants to break up with you. You made a principled mistake without even a single apology. You can't tell Jianxi that you feel too much guilt. You accused her of being indifferent to life, but have you ever thought about why she became like that? Aren't you thin-skinned? Aren't you inferior and sensitive? Why did you feel so at ease when you betrayed me? Your Jian Xi was humiliated by Miss Monster hanging from the ceiling. They were so angry that they didn't see you saying anything to help. Miss Monster forcefully kissed you and you didn't even resist. At that moment, people must have been so chilled. It was so heartbreaking that they couldn't even breathe. Author, you deserve to die. I understand those who want to start a harem, and I also know that Jian Xi will lose in the end, but you can't let someone lose like a loser, Jian Xi, my Jian Xi

Are there any other delicious twists? 😋

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Let me talk about the conclusion first. The book is a good book. If the book is compared to a barrel, the long board is very long, and it even feels a bit close to the top of the online article. I admit that I was short of books for a long time before I found this book in the recommendation column and read it all night. Ah, despite this, there is something inexplicably wrong in my heart. After thinking about it carefully, I thought it might be that the length of the book was too long, which could cover up some of the shortcomings - but not completely. What cannot be ignored is that today's small theaters and life lack a sense of stability. How should I put it, on the protagonist's side, there are normal people's schooling, flirting, party fights, delicate and twisted you like me and I like you, exceptions appear, and it is a bit fragmented. Besides these, what is missing? There is a lack of understanding and planning in certain aspects. There is a feeling of lack of subjective initiative and muddling through. A lot of words in this book are stacked on the psychology of young girls. It is good to know that the theme is love, but if it is stacked too much, it will be a bit redundant. The Dragon Clan is more famous, so let's use it as an example and comparison. It has always had an emotional dimension and occupied a lot of it - but what impressed me most about it now is that I read Dragon Clan when I was a child and had a beautiful fantasy about Kassel Academy, dragons and the outside world. Although Jiangnan's world view in his later period was a mess, he was smart and did not put his eggs in one basket. Although it sounds simple, in fact, it is not easy to coherently develop the world view, emotions, study and business trip life, etc. In one book, and write about each of them in an interesting way. Personally, I feel that a great book is often multi-dimensional. Just like a hodgepodge, people can pick out what they like to eat from a pot of hodgepodge, and then while chewing, they can taste the flavors from other dishes at the same time. Actually, the interesting thing is that if the writing of this book was half bad, I might have read it in one sitting with great interest. But the more thickness is written in the emotional dimension, the more one can feel the thinness and lack of other parts. How to say it? Come on, Cthulhu's father said that you should just be mortals and fall in love. I'll tell you all about the unusual things - this way I can read more at ease. The above is purely a personal subjective comment, or it may simply be that I am single and look at young couples who are unhappy and happy, but it is too embarrassing. Have you ever heard that Japanese literature pays too much attention to psychology, and in the end, people will become younger as they read it? (Laugh)

Have you ever picked up Cthulhu? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

Who are you? Please support the sound of fish!

The group exploded. It will take two days to appeal. We will see the result. If we can't come back, I will pull the local chat records and call people back one by one.

I didn't understand the last chapter, so did Gan Shang, Jian Xi, and Zhou Nan end up together?

I read it from beginning to end in one day. The author's writing skills are quite good and worthy of praise. I hope the author can continue to work hard in the future. The main advantage of this book is that the author has good writing skills, can control twisted emotions, and the writing is spiritual; the small town in the background of the author's writing is very spiritual, which is rare in online books. It's a pity that it feels like this book doesn't have an outline or that the outline has been significantly changed, and the plot still feels like it sometimes changes halfway through. For novels about weirdness and youth love, it is still necessary to grasp the proportion of love and weirdness. This article had a pretty good grasp of the first half of the campus chapter (sister, deputy monitor, literature club, etc.), But after the beta world line, it felt like it was obviously racing all the way, the weird side expanded too fast, and the love part was a bit underwritten. It would be better if I wrote one more generally weird chapter before returning to the current main line of pseudo-humans. Reading this kind of novel always reminds me of the Monogatari series (ky apologizes). I feel that this book still has a little flavor, both in terms of writing style and plot. I feel that the main disadvantage lies in the structure. Oops, it's all personal nonsense. Anyway, please work hard, the author, it will get better and better. I look forward to subsequent chapters and new works.

I don't know if you all have the same feeling as me, but I really like reading romance novels, but these kinds of novels are often divided into light novels, and many authors who write light novels use Japanese names emm. How can I put it, the writing style, names and settings are a bit like Japanese light novels. When I read them, I always feel that something is wrong. In China, this kind of setting is more enjoyable and has a stronger sense of substitution.

It's good to watch, but it's too short, and the dragon flavor is right. The author's writing is at the top of the starting point, but the plot is not very sure. The story of Winter Returns with two heroines is very good. Neither of the two heroines favors one over the other. It's better not to have obvious favoritism between the two heroines. Has the author considered opening a new book? You can try a single heroine. I personally like Lu Qinglian's kind, cold on the outside and hot on the inside, just like me It is a kind of candy that I ate when I was a child. It has a very sour coating on the outside. But as long as you keep drooling for a while and work hard to melt the coating, you can taste the sweet core. By then, she will accept everything from you unconditionally. Even if you ask a lot of strange things, she will only ask you with an expressionless face, "Are you sure you want this? ***Classmate" and then helplessly satisfy you. She can't stand it anymore. , I'm trembling just thinking about it, I'm about to go!

After finishing "Sahuahua", do you have any ideas about what to write in the next book 😏

I am very happy to have read this book in these two days, and I am very grateful to the friends who want me to recommend the book. I will recommend it to more people. I like the stories she tells, the characters she creates, and the feelings she brings to me First of all, I want to say a word of dissuasion. She is not perfect. The pace is obviously accelerated in the middle, there are some imperfect clues, and the ending can be called rushed, but I still highly recommend it, it is worth watching. Then, let me talk about her good points. Those who may be familiar with my hobbies know that I like twists and stomach medicine, because I like perfect character creation. This kind of writing will explode the conflicts and focus of the characters, and finally allow a three-dimensional character to appear. So I want to say that Lianzai wrote the three characters very well. Everyone started from different angles and intertwined the plots. The male protagonist was trapped and moved forward in the tangled relationship, Miss Monster was longing for love and also longed for independence because of love. True Jane was asking for and letting go in the face of a messy situation. It was so damn delicious my friend! The long and difficult sentence is so shocking and delicious, brother! ! ! Finally, it is the early morning of August 18th. I am very happy that I read this book.

Why is it only 800,000 words? Is it too late?

To be honest, I have always read Buddhist books, and I wouldn't say that I force the author to write a lot of good content, but the plot is too... I think of reading it all night long half a year ago, and now I am bored. The last dozen or so chapters should be quite exciting, but they have drained all the energy out of me to continue reading.

Jian Xi and Zhou Nan are both closely related to the Book of Songs. "Jianxi" is in "Beifeng", describing the feeling of yearning. "Zhou Nan" is the beginning of the fifteenth national style, and it mainly writes about love, such as "Guan Ju". Maybe I'm overthinking it, but from this perspective, isn't it also very romantic? (The author is a literary girl, right)

I was exhausted watching it. It's good to watch. The author's writing style is pretty good, but it's very tiring to watch. I don't know how to describe it.

As I watched, I realized that I am from the same country as the author.