
In the Dragon Clan, Bound to the Naruto Comeback System
人在龙族,绑定火影逆袭系统
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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390Chapters
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8.8kRecs
24.5kFans
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What a lousy book, you actually start charging for it after it's put on the shelf. An author with a bad attitude like you doesn't care if you don't read the book, just throw it out of the bookshelf, never to be seen again!
😡Why hasn't it been updated yet? 😡I want to use a bean stick to beat my asshole to pieces
Is there any Dragon King Jinchuuriki who would be good as a battery?
It's right not to stress your fighting power
Anyway, the gap between the Dragon Clan's worldview and combat power is already huge.
A little suggestion
The protagonist's personality is too coy. Although the decisive side of the protagonist can be seen in system tasks, when communicating with others, the "classic" protagonist's behavior such as a wry smile appears. It is recommended that the author reset the protagonist's personality. A normal person can be crazy, stable, and can hide his clumsiness; but it is absolutely impossible to be coquettish. It is determined in the setting that the protagonist has the chuunin level in the system and has become a teacher at the ninja academy. Then the characteristics of this level must be written down, such as the ability to teach or guide, the affinity of the teacher, the tactical deployment ability at the team level, and the tactical execution ability of the chuunin [such as the ability to do things without being BB, the ability to have short but direct and effective dialogues, etc.] Otherwise, the Naruto background you set for the protagonist on that page will be meaningless. The writing of system access, sneak attacks, and frontal confrontation in the first few chapters is very good, but after this period, the communication with Angers/Caesar/Chu Zihang is very awkward.
Author, I guess there won't be many people reading the single heroine, so I'd better take more, especially Nono. I read a book on Tomatoes about Nono with good data, but it was a pity that it collapsed later.
Nowadays, a large number of studios write books, and their biggest feature is that they all have indirect features. What will happen after many years?
Write well, my friend
Write it carefully and this will come.
I feel the writing is good, why are there so few collections
Power generation for love
In this era where pure love for fan fiction is scolded as TJ fiction, if you want to continue writing, you still have to rely on persistence. If you, the author, want to make money, write about the harem in your next book. After reading this book, I feel that your emotional line is pretty good. Also, does Eri know the protagonist's real name?