Whatever You Want to Say, Say It in My Beast Taming Space!

The successor of the Emperor of Sorrowful Wind has arrived.

Later, because of this concept, there was also the story of the Multiverse Traveler and the brain-dead second-generation heir assassinating the protagonist's parents.

With health points reaching hundreds of thousands or even millions at a time, guess how many health points the protagonist has? A whopping 200 points! That's incredible!

Are there going to be any more of these so-called tests? If it happens again, I'll just delete the book.

That's right, just write less about Lin and Mo, those two women. Since you're planning to keep your distance, don't keep getting involved.

The idea was alright, and the plot development was alright too. However, your narrative style definitely needs improvement. So far, you've been emphasizing how the protagonist follows their own path. While it's fine to write about the protagonist having their own rhythm, you can't keep emphasizing the protagonist in every paragraph. This results in a lack of substantial content.

The beginning felt a bit inexplicable; I had no idea what the protagonist was doing. The protagonist wasn't a transmigrator, nor was he some kind of cheat code.

After reading sixty chapters, it felt like two hundred chapters of plot were condensed into sixty chapters. There were so many details that could have been explored in more detail, but none of them were. It seems unlikely that this story could be written very long.

How did it collapse? He fell in love with a human.

I stumbled upon a gem in the daily guide to monster girls! I initially thought it was just a typical beast-taming story, but it turned out to be a monster girl tale. The writing and plot are both quite good—a decent read/a must-read!