If You Have Anything to Say, Go and Say It in My Beast-Controlling Space!

The descendant of Emperor Beifeng has arrived.

Later, because of this idea, the Wanderer of All Realms was conceived, and the brain-dead second generation assassinated Pig's Foot's parents. . .

Hey, what do you think the protagonist's health value is? AUV, as high as 200 points, is really a cap.

Is there any such so-called temptation later? If I try again, I will delete the book directly. . .

Yes, the two women, Lin and Mo, should write less. They plan to keep a distance and not get involved all the time.

The idea is okay and the plot direction is okay But your narrative level really needs to be improved. So far, you have always emphasized how the protagonist follows his own path. You can write about the protagonist and have his own rhythm, but you cannot write a paragraph and just emphasize the protagonist. This results in little useful content in the article. Write more about the adventures of the protagonist on the battlefield, and capture monsters and study them as auxiliary content

I made some money in Daily Guide. I thought it was an ordinary beast-control novel, but I didn't expect it to be about a monster girl. The writing and plot are both good, Liangcao~Xiancao

How did it collapse? He fell in love with a human

It felt a bit confusing at the beginning. I didn't understand what the protagonist was doing at all. The protagonist was neither a time traveler nor a cheater.

After reading sixty chapters, it feels like the plot of two hundred chapters has been condensed into sixty chapters. There are a lot of details in the middle, but there are none. It feels impossible to write a long story like this.

There's something weird about growing up.

It seems to my liking.

Jin, the protagonist wants to rape all races in the world!

Have you done your research? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

After a bit of fun in the early stages, it became too depressing. There was nothing exciting and no sense of expectation. I couldn't keep up.