I Want to Become a Master of Beast Control

The setting of this book is interesting and rich in thinking. Unfortunately, the author cannot grasp the combination of setting and plot. There are too many flat narratives and too few ups and downs. The setting takes over the center and the plot is dull. All in all, it's watchable, but hardly interesting. Probably a 6 points.

Come on, the rising star of beast-controlling literature!

I think you should talk about why the protagonist chose the undead type and whether there are any special personal feelings involved. Instead of saying this, you repeatedly mentioned that the undead system is very boring without a big environment. It feels like the protagonist is purely trying to invert the strength of a trash type, which is very shallow and deliberate.

Investigation report: "No." -693 Investigation target: "I Want to Become a Master of Beast Control" - Male Protagonist - [Chiming] Investigation Result: [Reincarnation] Judgment Basis: Abnormal Characteristics: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, is a profession that investigates and records the time-travel situations of time-travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know in advance the time-travel situations of time-travelers in this world, and volunteers to provide observers with quick time-travel information query services If there are any fallacies, I hope to correct them ——Wanling Feast Zhenjun Stay on July 3, 2026

The writing is quite good, the style is very relaxed, and it is quite interesting to concentrate on the evolution of beast control. I hope it can maintain this style. Don't be like the old timers who write about participating in beast control competitions or fighting monsters in secret realms to level up. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I don't know what the world is. I found that the readers who came to watch the evolution of beast control had their scores cut in half and became eunuchs. Come on.

To be honest, there is still a certain threshold for this book. If you don't understand these jokes and haven't played related games, it will be difficult for new readers to continue reading. There are too many settings in the early stage. There is a lack of space for the reader to take a breath. . . My eyes hurt when I read it😣

Nowadays, readers are very eager for quick success and quick success, and they hope for an intuitive sense of satisfaction and a clear story line when reading novels. You always want to hide something, and reversal for the sake of reversal is destined to discourage a large number of readers 🙂 Take your golden finger for example. I have read more than ten chapters and I don't know what effect you want to write, so I am definitely too lazy to pursue it anymore.

The Tindalos hound has nothing to do with dogs. It is something with no fixed shape. It is called a hound only because of its habit of chasing prey like a hound without stopping. Just like a crocodile is also called a swamp puppy. Can it change from a dog? The evolution of a dog into a Tindalos hound is the same as the evolution of a bug into a tiger. Can a "big bug" be the same as a bug? 😳

The author's experience is very interesting and beautiful.

It's this father-in-law. I don't know why I couldn't find him in Sanjiang. At that time, my grades in Sanjiang seemed to be very good, so I found him on Baidu.

For food and animal control, there has been little success recently, and many of the good beast-control articles have committed suicide. The stalks are too dense and the authorship is too complex, so there can be no need for so many stalks. Everything else is okay, Goldfinger is quite interesting.

It's a pity that I haven't watched Warlock, I can't stand it at all.

There are too many descriptions of concepts and world views, not enough in one day, it's too dry.

Single and more than nothing? Personally, I feel that the heroine of the beast-control novel is easy to overshadow the main role, mainly looking at various pets. This is purely a personal opinion without guidance. I just want to confirm.

The plot is a bit interesting but some of the descriptions are mediocre, so I can't accept that there are too many bad jokes. It's good to have a niche product in your writing. It should be fun to write and have something that readers can fantasize about. If a new author buries the story too deeply, readers will feel bored if they can't reach that point.

This style of misalignment system research and evolution, there was a book about the misalignment system of Pokemon in the past, but it disappeared after one or two chapters.

Author, I don't know most of these identification results, and I have lost motivation.

There are a lot of people writing misplaced systems in Qidian. Except for new books that don't have more than a hundred chapters, most of them have been cut. I hope the author can continue to write them.

I've read about ten chapters, and I have a few points I'd like to make. (Objective) First, even though the candle turkey has evolved, the protagonist is still doubting Gold Finger, doubting himself, and sighing. As a researcher, this mentality is very protective. There is neither the idea of ​​​​"bold assumptions and careful verification", nor the self-confidence after success and being watched by Chen Long, which is like Lu Mingfei. (Objective) Secondly, Candle Turkey hardly feels the role of the protagonist in the process of evolution. Except for the naming of the system (the purpose of the system is not clearly stated at all, allowing readers to guess by themselves), other materials are given by the instructor. I only need to feed them. Then I took the chicken for a walk in the dragon territory. The chicken was attacked by a dragon pet and then evolved by eating wood feed. Is this research? At first glance, it doesn't seem like much, but upon closer inspection, it doesn't stand up to scrutiny at all. It's too contrary to one's will. The chicken's own role accounts for at least 90% of it. (Subjective, with personal selfishness) Third, because I have read too many academic novels, in which talented and famous people are basically school beauties. This book is no exception. The one who is powerful in the fire department is the senior, the dragon is also the senior, the undead is still the senior, and the tutor is beautiful She seems to be a woman as well. I want to ask what kind of game world this is. The first male NPC of the same type did not appear until the evolution of Candle Turkey. The plot is only a hundred words. Since it is all about controlling beasts, let's not engage in such a plot that can easily overwhelm the guest. It's almost like changing the name to Yu Jie Master.

But you have chosen the subject of beast control, and confined the themes and settings within the scope of a specific semi-customized text form. If you tell the truth, you have narrowed your path. The theme of beast control is not that niche, but it is not that popular either. It all depends on the author's setting and strength. In the early stage of setting up, it would be very uncomfortable if the reading breath is not designed. It greatly affects the reading experience and retention rate. I wonder how the author plans to balance these aspects?

Although a bit abstract, the story is still good

Overall, it's quite good. Although there are many various settings, it's very comfortable to watch. The combination of memes and scientific research (spoofing) is also very interesting, and it can make people smile knowingly. The overall world view is kind-hearted, and the mentors and classmates are good. The character who appears most like a villain is only limited by his ability and has not completed evolutionary research, which has not caused any consequences. Moreover, there are many branches and foreshadowings. I look forward to the unfolding plot later.

The beast-controlling stories I have been reading for several months are all about jumping off the building... I hope you are not the same author🙏I am really at my wits end

I feel like there is no special description of the ability to switch back to the evolved form freely. And to be honest, even if there is a description, it would be weird. Generally speaking, evolution should be at the level of life transition. How come you can evolve and degenerate independently? Just write an entry (

The author has an old problem. He likes to come up with various concepts. He may have new ideas for a while but lacks real sense. Moreover, it is still a beast-control novel. If he does not write about battles, he will not be able to achieve good results.

Is there anything about ending the band? I feel cool when I see the cover

Skeleton, keel, sans Bone Dragon Fleet, Bone Gundam, Transformed Bone Mecha

The writing style is a bit poor and the fun is not enough, but these are not important! The important thing is to contract the Phoenix!

Dear author, I really like your book and I am currently following the progress. By the way, can I place a character in your book? 600 Points reward has been invested

Serious support! ✌️