Simultaneous Transmigration: Hell Mode from the Start

The idea is good, but the writing is a bit poor. The author needs to practice his writing.

The introduction of the Condor does not fit in with other worlds

From the perspective of cultivating immortality, everyone is in the Five Elements. Well, the essence of cultivation is to harmonize the Yin and Yang and the Five Elements in a person.

, It's just that he was wrongly accused and imprisoned. Of course he suffered a crime, but for what crime he suffered, I won't tell you. You can guess for yourself. In this case, the protagonist cutting grass will make readers feel that he lacks motivation. Because most of the readers are ordinary people, there are not many opportunities to be exposed to the darkness of society in real society. It is difficult to imagine how dark it is when facing an ancient public power organization. But if we change the background version, it would be much better to replace the government with the beggar gang. Is it the beggar gang? There are occasional stories of people being trafficked, harvesting and harvesting in modern society. The age of the protagonist can be changed a little younger. After being abducted by the beggar gang, his hands and feet were broken and his tongue was cut. The protagonist's subsequent cheating and killing will only make readers think that the protagonist is too kind and let the villain die too happily.

Shooting a vulture is worse than being a swordsman in the snow

Use the Hundred Meridians Treasure Refining Technique to refine the powerful magic weapon and integrate it into the body, turning the puppet into a cultivating version of the Ship Man! The deduction magic weapon serves as the quantum supercomputing brain. Countless micro-runes and magic circles are engraved and arranged everywhere in the body. Some provide defense, some provide beyond-visual-range strikes, there are recovery runes to provide battery life, and there are auxiliary intelligent machine spirits to provide computing power. In addition, you can also refine the emperor's armor into your own body using the Hundred Meridians Treasure Refining Technique, and transform yourself into a sun walking in the mortal world! You can even refine Gundam, Tianyuan Breakthrough's light-grade robots, Transformers Unicron, Marvel's Celestials, Water Drops, Neutron Battle Stars, EVA, Star Megastructure, Sentinel Robots, Celestial Computers, Hero Cores, Six Gems, Super Beast Arms, Ultraman Stone Statues, etc.

I'm still reading the beginning, but other than that, there's nothing sinister about it. As expected, the beginning of Hell is the most interesting, but there is nothing to say about taking off in the later stages.

Why is it so weak in the author's writing?

How can you threaten an assistant director? It will be terrible if you threaten the assistant director like this

Not even a harem, not having many children, not having many blessings