Shouyi

The theme is very good and rare to see. A few suggestions: increase the detailed description of the important role of skills in life in the past and the rich emotional culture carried; lengthen the timeline and add details, such as describing light and shadow, expressions, changes in scenery on the way, describing the psychological details of the characters, and describing the diversity of social opinions to add depth; create characters. Good characters can make readers empathize. ✊✊✊

After looking through the new library for a long time, I still feel that articles with this kind of theme are rare 😭