A Dream of Jianghu Yuemanlou

Introduction is fine. First, the paragraph arrangement is not good, and readers read on their mobile phones. With this long string of words, you can try using your mobile phone to read the impressions of your own novel. Second, the first chapter of the novel is not attractive enough and too wordy. The protagonist's time travel and various settings are thrown out at the beginning. These settings must be thrown out step by step in an important order. And in the first chapter, words should be cherished like gold and should be streamlined and streamlined. Third, it's not cool enough. Fourth, my writing skills are not good enough. It's not a pile of rhetoric, but it needs to be appropriate.