The Remaining Flowers of the Evil Soil

I don't know if the author can still see it, but this is my humble opinion and idea. I was not very interested in this book at first, because I felt that the contents of the first and second chapters were not very attractive to me. In my opinion, they were not impactful and eye-catching enough. This makes me feel like this story is like the beginning of an ordinary novel. But starting from the end of the third chapter, I think this supernatural story starts to get a little interesting. The perspective is not on the male protagonist, but on the female protagonist, which is different from my guess. So I read it with a little expectation. The writing style is very good (the writing style I am talking about here is the description of the text, your rhetorical techniques and narrative methods are very good), but the writing power is indeed a little weak, but it can make me calm down and read, which is not bad. The result that surprised me was the way the article was narrated. A two-line parallel description method is adopted. So I started to get a little impatient because I was just immersed in a chapter of the story when a change of perspective interrupted me. When I started reading, I also guessed the identity of "Valentina" and that this was a story four years ago. Because of this, I had the patience to read on, because I knew the general development of the story, and it was just as I thought. Chapter 11, I suddenly understood why it was written in a two-line parallel way, because it feels like a movie. The end of each chapter is a separation of sound and picture, which makes people feel the urgency and excitement of the story, and also has the feeling of shooting from multiple perspectives. But I think the number of switching perspectives is a little too much, which still affects reading. Overall, I like this story very much. The plot line is very well written. It is really great. I must praise this. Social changes, class disparities, the fate of individuals and families, realistic conflicts, and the progression of micro and macro plots are all very good. I can understand and accept the emotional line, but I'm not very cold about it, and it's pretty good. However, I think the story can be developed in more detail and better. The length is actually quite short. It would be great if there is a sequel or this story can be written in detail.