Delusion of Immortality

Martial arts is indeed cold, and I have known from the beginning that the road to original martial arts is difficult. I have hesitated in the past two days. I saw an author cutting up books next door, and suddenly I feel like I am in a different category. But I write books for one original intention, to write about what I love. No matter what the ending is, I will never regret it. Friends, if you think it is okay, please add it to your favorites and read it when you have time. If you have any comments or suggestions, please feel free to submit them. A horse leaps forward, but it cannot take ten steps; a horse rides ten times, but it cannot give up its merits. I will keep going, even if it is only this book.

Write it according to your own ideas. It seems that there is no water at the moment.

All the characters are ruthless, and their plots are a bit brain-burning. It feels like being dragged into the dark world of the Tang Dynasty. The author's writing style is sophisticated and has a strong sense of imagery, such as the trafficker on a rainy night, the ice palm in the snake prison, the secret fight in the palace... It is cold and compelling. The protagonist Ling Yunying is quite sophisticated. He is not the kind of cool hero who cheats all the time. He carries the burden of his family and the suspicion of imperial power. The plot has a tight rhythm, with every step leading to pitfalls. From investigating the case in Yangzhou to being trapped in Chang'an, the lines of conspiracy, rivers and lakes, and revenge are intertwined. Sisters Ling Zhaoyi and Ling Yunxiang, one is ruthless and the other is sinister, and the schemes within the family are more terrifying than the external enemies. Qian Zhong is a character with so many buffs and so many mysteries. Why is he losing his memory? Where does internal strength come from? Why can't it be killed? Her life experience and abilities are buried deep, but she must not end up in an anticlimactic manner. The characters are well created, the protagonists and supporting characters are distinct, each has its own characteristics, and is complex. It is not a facial expression. However, sometimes there is too much information, with a lot of sects, forces, and historical backgrounds, and occasionally I feel a little dizzy. Overall, these two volumes are solid and emotional, with both the passion of martial arts and the coldness of the court. If Qian Zhong's plot can be dug deeper in the future, and the machinations don't overwhelm the characters, this book will definitely be better! By the way, let me complain, Lu, I have something important, but it has never been done, He Feng.

It's really well written, a rare masterpiece of martial arts. The poetry is easy to use, the characters are unique, and the fighting scenes are exciting. Very rare. It is also a grand scene of martial arts that combines martial arts with martial arts that I personally like. Pretty much the best I've seen in recent years. It can be said to be fairy grass.

But the last two chapters of the first volume are not suitable for reading late at night The author is not a newcomer, right?

If you like it, please collect and recommend it, and start commenting ~ I will read and refer to everyone's opinions, and send the flowers to my friends 🌹🌹🌹

Dear author, why don't you put it on the shelves after 410,000 words?

It's worth reading. The author has good literary skills.

Originality is better than time travel, the system is better

Internal investment has been passed, friends can invest with peace of mind ~

Please collect, recommend, and support my friends 😍

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking martial arts show, and it's so generous and satisfying. It's really good.

Come on, rewarded. I hope it's the two protagonists I like. Lu's role can be more 🙂🙂🙂 And the novel will be a long one, right? 😜😜😜

Come on bro, I'll write you a super long review when it's finished.

Which editor will put it on the shelves for you only with 570,000 words? You can put it on the shelves with at most 300,000 words.

Good reading, Chen Shang Jian Tu, please read it!

The book is quite good, but why are there so few people?