Crown of the Abyss

I have read Chapter 22. The writing is good and the pace is good. But this protagonist has a strong sense of déjà vu. If there is another show of pretending and there are many people in a meeting, then there is no need to continue watching. Lord of Mysteries is very good, but I don't want to pay for a second tasting of similar content.

Scholars live and imitators die. The strong sense of déjà vu is a bit strange to me. Of course, for readers who have never read Mystery, the writing is quite good.

The progress of the plot feels a bit slow, and it doesn't feel too watery. The ability system and other information explained are also necessary. But there is no advancement in the big plot, and it is still dealing with the impact of the first incident. If this is a book with hundreds of chapters, and dozens of chapters are devoted to the beginning and end of an incident, the impact is okay, but you have spent 60 chapters to deal with the first incident at the beginning, and it is a bit slow. Wish you better and better

No offense intended. After reading the previous few pictures, I feel that the author's writing style is good. However, if you are a new author, it is best not to write a novel with a grand narrative and a lot of foreshadowing from the beginning, otherwise it may lead to a situation where the wine is good and the alley is deep. It's best to write some cool articles first and build a certain fan base.

It's okay to borrow the settings, but the plot is pretty much the same if you don't. The first part was pretty good, but the more I wrote, the more familiar it became, and I was convinced 🥵🥵

The secret and the whisper are sewn together 🙂

To mediocre people, we are mysterious and unpredictable. Fallen. Decay. It's chilling. You cannot understand where we came from or why we are what we are... Until you realize that we have not fallen, but have ascended. "

I thought it was Sauron from Middle-earth who traveled through time, but that would be more interesting

This Sauron is actually not the Son of Slaughter

It's up to you to judge whether it's good or not to learn from this kind of thing, but the level is still a bit high. Come on↖(^ω^)↗

Pig's trotter is a sick and dying man

The plot is too slow... A bit painful

What about the previous chapters?

What about the previous chapters