This Fairy Grass Is Too Cautious

Author, didn't you realize there was a big problem with what you wrote? The beginning is very good, the subject matter is novel, the protagonist fights wits and courage with human beings in order to survive, and writes his own characteristics and things! But after dozens of chapters, the protagonist disappears, and the space where he appears is basically gone. Even if the protagonist is deleted, it will have no impact on the development of the story. This is terrible. It is equivalent to you deviating from your own title, and the storyline you write is all old routines and sects. Men Xiaobi and Demonic Invasion are all terrible. Without the participation of the protagonist and no outstanding story, you are useless. You have to figure out what proportion of the protagonist should be in order to be inserted into the story. This is what you urgently need to correct now!

I can only say that other parts are okay. The author has written it very carefully. Anyone who likes group dramas can give it a look. The plot is relatively delicate. For example, Qian Er is still very impressive, but I feel that the person named Liu may be the heroine. Moreover, the author may be a little ambitious and want to do a big job, so the following situation is also possible. In the future, there may be a big reversal in the protagonist's behavior. The protagonist was pulled out at first and almost turned into an elixir. Fortunately, the alchemist took a second look and felt that the elixir was not strong enough to make the elixir. He didn't even throw it away, so he had someone plant it to survive. (The plot of the first few chapters) Later I looked specifically at the person who pulled him out, and she was actually one of the protagonists of the group drama. The second drop of the liquid condensed by the male protagonist was given to her. He said before that he would give it to her again at any time, and then he didn't see any changes in her psychology, so he gave the second drop of the essence to this woman. It's also possible that the author did it on purpose. Speaking of what I saw a long time ago, the heroine was a deer and she ate the hero every day, but she handled it well. The hero's life is not in danger, and he may even become a romantic interest later on. There is also a deer whose eldest father has been helping the male protagonist. I really don't agree with the male protagonist's decision. It was too abrupt. There is no detailed description of the male protagonist's mentality.

Encouragement

When I read Chapter 12, the characterization was great. I didn't expect that the plot of Chapter 14 had just begun. There was so much foreshadowing. I decided to follow the book and see what happens.

I've read a few chapters and it's pretty good so far. It seems to be a group portrait novel? The character description of the supporting characters is very good, but the number of words is too few and the world view is not clear yet. It can be cultivated.