Chinese Martial Arts Lead to Spirituality, I Cultivated Immortality in the Republic of China

The aborigines are not good-looking. In the Republic of China, the aborigines had no foresight. Not everyone is a great man. The aborigines can only slowly move in circles in a petty spirit.

Just write about your Chinese martial arts. What about politics? I'm speechless. You can't grasp it. Let's go.

It looked good at first, but when it comes to breaking the dark power, it's extremely rare. The second stage requires a thief to break through. What's the use of your hang? How to write the subsequent realm?

The rich man is poor but rich in martial arts. He is so miserable and wants to practice martial arts. Look at what happened to Jet Li. He only dared to overdraft and become a martial arts champion on the basis of eating well and drinking well. You man, you are just kidding me.

Aboriginals, if you force yourself to cheat, you will feel brought into the world if you write about time travel. Natives can easily get into trouble if they do inappropriate things.

What a garbage supporting role. This book could have been read with a score of 9, but with this stupid supporting character, it only got a score of 2. We just encountered something strange here, and before it was over, the sperm came to my head. There are also a lot of things that should be taken for granted and a lot of caution. After reading more than 20 chapters, several consecutive chapters are all about this stupid supporting character, give up.

After reading the latest chapter, I came here for the Chinese martial arts and fantasy, not for the doctrine.

The author's setting is totally different. A humble citizen has no eyesight at all. How did you become a concierge? ? But my heart is higher than the sky

Looking at the introduction, I thought they were fighting boxers during the Boxer Rebellion.

If you can't write, don't write. Ordinary reckless writing is suitable for you. Let's reopen.

The feeling of déjà vu at the beginning is so strong, the Chinese martial arts version of "The Demon God of the Universe"?

Martial arts and supernatural beings are both very good when written separately, but when mixed together, they become a mess.

First of all, this chapter title is really hard to read. During the Republic of China, were you engaged in Dream of Red Mansions? Secondly, you've been a ghost for so many chapters.

The writing is okay, but I want to say that I can't understand it at all.

The writing style and settings are very nice, and the plot is really completed.

Chinese martial arts framework, slow pace. However, the frontier boundary has not been clearly explained. The realms of the main supporting characters are not revealed, which makes it difficult to tell the minor realms every time. The protagonist is flying around like a rocket (it's a cool story, but it's not so cool, and of course it's just in case it's so cool that you can't write much content. It's like you're constantly controlling the protagonist, otherwise he'll really fly). In the early stage, the protagonist's master only said that he was a master but not about his realm. After reading nearly 200 chapters, the protagonist went to Tu to cure the master's old illness 😰. The master was in the realm of transformation (who knows that he is still a small character despite his high status. Many characters play like this. Since he is an experience monster, just write it down easily). The martial arts is detailed, but it feels like it supplements the thin plot and increases the number of words. Fortunately, the interesting plot is realistic, otherwise it would be a failure. Based on the background of the Republic of China, there is basically no such thing as the above, and it has begun to fail. The transformation setting is also not good enough for the gun. Later, as long as you don't level up to a higher level and become invincible, a bunch of monsters and other protagonists will appear to save the world. (Anyway, it's already in the later stage, so it's cool. Don't deliberately suppress it, because the setting of the book and the world background are incompatible except in the early and later stages.) All the characters currently appearing are not even dust in his profile setting. The description is too scientific and detailed. Anyway, he was shot down with one shot. Of course, based on time, less than a month has passed in Chapter 200, and the protagonist has already turned from bright to dark. In the third of the 9 levels, he has to gain experience to speed up the game, and the master can change his strength. When you write up to 300, you have to be innate. The master takes a back seat and starts to pass the timeline quickly. Later, I can write that before the 918 incident, I was basically invincible. I could just beat him up and do whatever I wanted in parallel. Don't have to follow the reality. It was pure torture. The protagonist of the cool novel just withered from the beginning to the end and became a eunuch.

The first 20-odd chapters are okay, but the latter chapters are probably not well written. They are stinky and long, pretentious and slap in the face. They are about urban immortals changing their skins, and they do not advance the plot at all.

Do you have the name Jingwu? Is it also homophonic to Chen Zhen? It's too dramatic. Is it true? Or the Jingwu Sect?

It's very well written, just write it down as you like, and I'll send you a monthly pass.

The beginning of a book of the same type that I read a few days ago is exactly the same. It also begins with a friend and I in a store, and a woman takes three coins to buy her life. It is also the protagonist of three brothers, who also learn martial arts and control corpses. I don't know who copied whom.

This month's votes are all for you!

The writing is okay, I will give you a monthly pass, please keep updating. But no matter how fast the pace is, it's time to change the map; it's better to write less about sensitive organizations, for fear of not being able to grasp the harmony of the book.

I hope the author can finish it and not end it.

The first person to write in Qidian dialect! Be the first of a generation! Other authors select readers based on style, but this author relies on geography. He is so good that he doesn't deserve readers.