When Blood Vine Went Berserk, the Mysterious Boss Was Sharpening His Knife.

I didn't read too much, just two chapters. Let me tell you about the existing problems. First, you have to determine why you wrote this novel. Do you want to become a god with a book, or do you want to make money? 1. I can't understand your title, it's not recognizable. Why do you say that fanfics are easy to write, because fanfics come with their own worldview, background, and characters. Why don't you change it to something commonly used on Sanjiang: starting from something, or in what world, I should know what you want to write about your title, right? 2. Introduction, two names, I thought you were going to write two male protagonists, so who is Li, the male protagonist, or Shen, the male protagonist? Did Shen appear as the male protagonist in Chapter 7? And the writing is so great. Can you write about what the male protagonist is like, and then add a few words from the awesome people in it to create a sense of anticipation. 3. In Chapters 1 and 2, there are too many characters and too many descriptive scenes. Originally, your description of the scenes contained many unfamiliar words, which is enough, but a bunch of characters appear again. I really don't want to read anymore. 4. The beginning is usually the beginning of a life and death crisis. Of course, some books can also be dull first and then have a sense of crisis, so that the tone can be controlled. To sum up, if you want to make money, read more about Sanjiang, read more about the high-quality books on your subject, copy the books, and scan the rankings. If you pursue your dream, you don't need to listen to the above suggestions.