Sai Peng Xiu Xian

It's too complicated. Readers can't understand what you want to write, and they don't have time to understand it. I suggest that the first chapter should only write about the protagonist, preferably no more than three characters. Try to keep the protagonist's perspective throughout. Just write about the protagonist's current situation and what the protagonist wants to do to change the status quo. Just write these two points. Come on, you can see that you are a complete novice. There is no other way but to write more and practice more. If you are publishing suspense, you can choose Ziliang's team. He is more patient with suspense than other editors.

Chapter 16, blocked, being revised

The updates are too slow, and even if you write well, you won't be able to get popular. It is recommended that you save a certain amount of outlines before writing.

I think the most written character in this track is Boss Foxtail.

Well, 0 points for level, 0 points for the title and introduction, the first chapter is too complicated, white flag, poisonous gas, Yanguo, the previous content is very similar to Daogui, Xian, do you want to write whatever you want or what the situation is 😅 If you want to write suspense, you can read the works of Scholar and Sleep Adviser for reference. The most important thing in writing a novel is to tell the story clearly.

This chapter, like cultivation, requires retreat from time to time.

Brother, you are such a puller, but you should be more up to date.

The advantage of new books compared to ordinary online articles is that if you can read them, you can read them. Although it may take some time to waste your brain, just because you want to know what you are writing, reading a good-looking book is really slow. Generally speaking, for online articles, you only need to read a few words in a chapter to know what you want. You flip through it quickly hoping to reach the climax directly. It is simply boring. The book is boring and terrible.

Not bad! With just over 10,000 words, there are over 400 recommendations. We will comment further when the number of words increases!

Dear family members, come and see my Zhetian fan!

Duan, buddy, no one is urging you, write well, and don't post short words for now.

Please continue to update. ♥(｡￫V￩｡)♥

I invited people to read your book, but it was put on the bookshelf and never updated.

Brother, you only have a few settings in just a few words.

Read it, support support support!

It's so beautiful and the writing is very good, keep it up!

Brother, let me not talk about your content for now. Can you update it more stably? Just looking at the introduction, I thought it was okay, but when I clicked on the catalog, I saw that the ones in August are already in January, which means you have updated ten pictures in four months. Even if I find it interesting, I can only keep it. Also, I thought who would reply to me, but it turned out that it was someone who recommended my own book.

The setting is copied from the mysterious resurrected Mirror Ghost without any changes. The plot is copied from the Tao Weird Fairy Tale, and it is copied mechanically. It has nothing of my own. Just change the name, change the setting, and it will be yours? Even if I signed the contract within two days, it would be taken down because of plagiarism.