Pili: A Chat Group From the Start in the Bitter Realm
霹雳苦境开局有个聊天群
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 592k Words
- Genre
- Martial Arts
- Subgenre
- Wuxia Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 11mo ago
- English
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267Chapters
3.9kRecommendations
5.5kFans
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Uh, Thunderbolt vs. Qin's Moon? Why all the fuss? Just kill them in one move!
The writing is immature and the plot is dull.
The author's writing is poor, the plot feels formulaic and repetitive, lacking the dedication and carefree spirit of a demon, the focus of a martial arts seeker, and the imaginative thinking of a transmigrator. The attempts at showing off are forced, and the "golden finger" (advantage point) is glossed over without any detail. Despite having prior knowledge, it's completely misused, resulting in a terrible mess.
The protagonist's name is ridiculous!
Too many novel authors are terrible at naming their works and just follow the same old trends and formulas. Their names are all the same – "Mr. Fan" or "Mr. Bufan" – it's so annoying, I'm speechless. 😓
It failed. I had hoped to see it go on sale, but I couldn't hold on. Sigh, there are few Pili fanfics. In this niche genre, readers are actually quite forgiving. They can tolerate you writing a bunch of ideas unrelated to the current plot, they can see your various fan-made characters, and they can even see you interpreting the plot using conspiracy theories.
Poor writing, terrible naming skills, incapable of being a demon or a martial artist, and lifeless characters; a silver spear with a wax head.
He's neither a hypocrite nor a true villain, but he's lustful and cowardly.
This is written as an outline.
Pili practicing dual cultivation techniques is simply insane.
Even if you practice martial arts that absorb other people's life essence, such as Huangfu Xiaochan's Reverse Transformation Divine Skill, it's still better than practicing dual cultivation.
It's written like an essay, the whole thing is the author's narration; you're not suited for novels.
Here we go again. The author's problem remains unchanged. Why don't you all guess if he can even write more than a hundred chapters?
The Qin Dynasty storyline failed because of powerful figures and a group of others in a chat group, and they only spoke up in the chat group a second before they died. At this rate, only the Bitter Realm will remain in the end, and then the whole thing will end. Dude, don't be so pretentious, write in plain language, otherwise you're just wasting your time!