Pili: A Chat Group From the Start in the Bitter Realm

Um, during the thunderbolt attack on Qin? Why are there so many ink marks? Just do it in one move.

The author's writing is very poor, and the plot is an assembly line of tasks. Being a demon does not have the persistence and freedom of a demon, practicing martial arts does not have the focus of a seeker, and time travel does not have the imagination of a time traveler. The pretense is also very stiff, and Golden Finger is just a quick summary without going into detail. Although there was advance knowledge, it was not used properly at all, and it was a complete mess.

Too many novel authors choose names that are useless and follow the old stereotypes of romance. The names are all about someone or something extraordinary. It's really annoying and speechless when I see this. 😓

It failed. I originally wanted to see it put on the shelves, but I didn't hold on. Alas, there are few Pili fans, and readers in this niche field are actually very tolerant. I can tolerate you writing a bunch of ideas that have nothing to do with the current plot. I can see you creating various secondary characters, and I can also see you using conspiracy theories to interpret the plot. Even your meaningless blackness doesn't matter. However, the protagonist can't scold Brother Baiyun for being a dog licker and at the same time kneel down and lick the love letter. While scolding Su Huan for really not caring about the life and death of ordinary people, he went to Qin Shi Mingyue to kill everyone without considering the innocent. While scolding Yuyang Jun for being a scumbag and throwing away women after use, you can do similar things at the same time. I read this book for a long time and thought about it for a long time. I still don't understand how the author used the protagonist's mouth to repeatedly criticize Su Haozhen from the "highest moral point". Then let the protagonist do all kinds of things that have nothing to do with morality.

The writing is bad, the names are bad, the devil is invincible, the military is incompetent, the characters are rigid, and the silver gun has a wax head.

He is lustful and afraid of evil. He is a standard hypocrite. He is not even a real villain.

Even if you practice martial arts that absorb people's essence, such as Huangfu Xiaochan's reverse transformation magic technique, it will be better than practicing dual cultivation.

The content written here is like an outline.

It is written like a prose, and the whole story is narrated by the author. You are not suitable for novels.

Qin Shi was able to overturn the car. We all had thighs and chat groups, but we only spoke in the chat group one second before he died. According to this way of writing, there is only one miserable state left in the end, and then the whole situation ends. Brother, don't be so literary and write in vernacular, otherwise you're just wasting your own time! ! !

Eat turtles like crazy and keep eating turtles. In short, it's just a pile of books.

To tell a joke, the innateness in the misery is divided into the first level of innateness, the second level of innateness, and the third level of innateness.

Write some prophetic poems and throw yourself into misery, and you will slowly become a master.

I have a feeling that I write whatever comes to my mind.

The writing is poor and the writing is not smooth.

Why does the protagonist look like a funny masochist?

In the first few chapters, the protagonist is written like a loser, which makes me speechless.

Everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables Perak novels are inherently niche, and not many people write about them I think they are quite to my liking. Come on, author, you must finish them

I didn't read it, but after looking at the table of contents, I felt something wasn't right. Also, the protagonist's name seemed inconsistent with the predicament 🤔

When did the author go to other worlds to cause trouble?

Hmm, I feel like what I'm writing now is a bit confusing.

You can collect Su Huan Zhen from different time periods in various parallel time and space Come to a battle royale and the prize is Feng Cai Ling

It's very interesting. I also wrote a book. Please review it. Sorry for the trouble.

There are a lot of thunderbolts, it's better to be a man in black

Let's all dream together

The beginning is okay, but later on it feels like a drama.

The main character doesn't even have the aura of the Lord of a Realm... DarkGreymon can't stand what he's writing!

The entire Xenoverse was created by Emperor Qi Tian using the Xenodragon. Including Zhu Wu and Hanba are both Xenodragons. It is known that the demon world uses the power of the evil soldiers to repair the Xenomons. The evil soldiers may be related to the Xenodragons Considering that the protagonist is a demon, either abandon the Celestial Emperor route or follow the evil soldiers route. It is most suitable for the alien dragon to form a demonic body. Otherwise, it will be the plot of the original creation ball turning into a dragon, the magic dragon route. You can have promiscuous sex, which is the most enjoyable, but you need to compete with the new drama Zize.