Douluo: the Dark Lord of Wuhun Palace!

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I can no longer stand absorbing the Ice and Snow Emperor's soul ring. Let me talk about the advantages first 1. The writing is quite interesting, and the author said it is quite funny 2. The protagonist is quite annoying in how he handles some things, such as relying on perversity to gain benefits, and the author said What is the secret of an excellent drama? Master the timing. So what is courage? Stay graceful in the face of pressure. It's a classic line from the Joker, and I can see that it's quite thoughtful 3. The two chosen themes are the ones I liked to read when I was a kid, and they are quite reminiscent (subjective) Let's talk about the shortcomings 1. The hook is too strong The first soul skill directly enters the space, even the titled Douluo can sense it Less than that, resulting in not much use of subsequent soul skills Legilimency subtly changes the mind, and most of them can't even perceive. The super model is finished, and the emotional line is directly destroyed. Or maybe the author doesn't like to write emotional lines in the first place 2. Eat all the jelly grass directly, and then level up is not needed After being promoted, I don't even act anymore. The main improvement in strength has no corresponding difficulty increase, and I haven't added some self-created dungeons/puzzles or anything like that 3. The writing is a bit random, as I think about it as soon as I think about it. Some of the settings and actions in the front are not used later. It may be that the hang up is too fierce, which leads to the inconvenience. There are some dispensable things, such as divination, the kindergarten companions I met at the beginning (I even forgot about the plot later), Hu Liena, and the Eight Spider Spears, which made it a bit inexplicable. It didn't have the feeling of being dense and sparse at the end of a paragraph in more powerful books 4. Hanging up is so cruel and inexplicable What's wonderful is that Dugu Bo, who is invulnerable to all poisons and has no body, is just a lolita. He can directly consume the resources of the whole city, and he can just stop acting 5. The proportion of magic is too low, except for the supermodel Legilimency, which does not have that sense of convenience, and there is no expected scene 6. Later with Dugu Bo and his group After I went out, it was the same as the second game. I was very bored. I took a look at the chapter names. They were all soul beasts. It gave me a feeling that I was at my wits end. Afterwards, I felt like I had to grab all the opportunities mentioned in several books. Summary: If you are interested in the subject matter, just read it and practice it. The previous article is quite interesting. Yes, the back is a bit too padding {"Url":"https://qdreaderpic-1252317822. File. Myqcloud. Com/28961433/9 9be5903a6ea410d9f75d9b504560808_original. Jpg","Width":"2800","Height":"1260"}

When I saw the title of the book and didn't click on it, I thought it was The Dark Lord in Happy Star Cat.

The last book by this author was very bad. I don't know how this one will turn out.

I compared the figures with another novel published in Sanjiang, and it seems that the income is too low. The gap is 20 times. In fact, the two novels are almost the same in writing. How can there be such a big gap?

What do you think?

What happened? Come on, the brothers in the comment section are all talented, we are still waiting to read the novel

It feels like they are trying to get money, and it was put on the shelves too quickly.

Brother, please finish the last book first and then write something else.

Looking at the title, I thought it was the Dark Lord from Happy Star Cat

What are you doing? Eunuch again?

Author, do you know that "The Analects of Confucius" has been updated by you. Establishing at Thirty: It is necessary to update thirty chapters in order to gain a foothold in the online literary circle. Forty without Confusion: Forty chapters are updated every day. Only then can you continue to receive gratitude and praise from readers and no longer be confused about the meaning of writing. You know your destiny at fifty: 50 chapters are updated every day, you are the destiny, and the entire website praises you. Sixty and fluent: When you can update 60 chapters a day, everyone including readers will hear what you say will be fluent. At the age of seventy, do what you want and don't go beyond the rules: if you can update 70 chapters a day, you can do whatever you want! Update soon! ! ! At the first watch, the flaws are revealed, and the ridicule is like a tide; At the second watch, the sullen expression is slightly brighter, and the viewer listens attentively; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and an oath is secretly made; At the fifth watch, the righteous men and women are fighting, and the debates are coming; At the tenth watch, the Confucian scholars are invigorating the priests, and the streets are filled with praises;

It's kind of interesting, the cicadas chirp in the Spring and Autumn Period, and the youth returns, right?

Is this okay? Author, the updates are not stable.

Fortunately, writing Douluo has the basis of your previous book, so it would have been okay. The key is to choose Harry Potter Few people watch Harry Potter nowadays. For example, I watched Harry Potter when I was a kid and haven't watched it since I grew up. Leading to a strong division. You can also know what it's like if you choose to cultivate immortality. I can know what it's like to make elixirs, refine weapons, set up formations, and practice talismans. You choose Harry Potter, I don't even know what my ability is. As a result, the author basically stops writing for a while. Kavin is very stuck.

Dear author, when will your last novel be updated? Waiting for your update to catch up.

I feel like the main character is a psychopath.

I feel that this protagonist is a little more human-like than the previous one, and the previous protagonist Gu Yue Fang Yuan was even inferior to him.

Updates are unstable and I have no desire to follow them.

It feels too bumpy to sit on, but not upright enough. If others are righteous and evil, you are evil. The result is really a devil. You can have bad people punished, but not good people.

The author's previous Douluo 2 fanfic was the best on the Internet. He kept Shrek's character and let them explode collectively. When they died, they still remembered the good and joyful character of the protagonist. Unlike other authors who changed the character's character and bluntly created conflicts without thinking about the protagonist. The author's writing style is not to mention comparable to that of Gu Zhenren, and he has the ability to create original fantasy on his own.

Borrow the precious place to recommend the book "Douluo: Martial Soul Essence, I am the Master" The original Martial Soul is full of soul power, not brainless, reasonable and refreshing, exploring the Martial Soul Soul Ring is half original, half research