Douluo: God Comes

Tianzun has also read the previous book, and has been following it since dozens of chapters. This one is purely a reply. It would be fine if you wrote hundreds of chapters and slowly added characters, but if you just start adding characters, the plot will not advance, and you will just leave it alone. Everyone is here to see the fan story, not to see where you want to obscenely destroy the character Kukushui plot. What's the use of writing these characters? They don't help advance the plot at all. It's reasonable to write one or two protagonists, but just add a Honkai character to the orphanage at the beginning. What's your intention? Isn't it good to advance the plot honestly? Look at your B score. Recently, I don't want to read the chapter titles. One character is hard to read in one chapter.

To be honest, there is no comparison between this novel and the author's last novel. It feels like the author is completely in a messed up state of mind, and the plot concept and character description are also perfunctory at a glance. The insertion of characters is also jarring. With the writing style of the author's previous novel, this novel could have been written better. Compared with the previous novel, this novel is a complete piece of "shit". But I still hope that the author can continue to create better. The author's last novel Dragon King Tianzun is really good-looking. Although the previous novel is also a clone flow, there is no disharmony in the insertion of the characters, and the plot is perfect. I really hope that the author can continue to create well. 😭😭After all, it was my only book that reached the level of Deacon. At that time, I subscribed to the novel just because the author created it. I basically gave the monthly pass to this novel. I hope the author will not mess up the work and create a good work.

Mijia's obscenity is as simple as that. It's not so much a Douluojia secret game as it is a Bengsan character collection game.

God is not like this and I don't accept it! First of all, you will spend six days creating the world and rest on the seventh day. Then you will expel Adam and Eve from the Garden of Eden because they ate the forbidden fruit. And because angels combined with humans and the world is immoral, you will launch a great flood to destroy all human beings except Noah's family. Destroy them all Secondly, you should first let your initial chosen people arrive in the pagan country and be treated as slaves there, and then send ten plagues because the Pharaoh is unwilling to let them go, so that they can leave, and let one of them become an adult. For the prophet, he then sent a miracle to open the sea, and then made a covenant because of the idolatry of his chosen people, and then deprived the prophet of his qualification to enter the promised land because of his pride Third, you wanted King David, who was a shepherd at that time, to spend five years Kill the giant Goliath with a stone, let his son Solomon become the king of Israel, let him build the temple, give him the Ten Commandments to give him wisdom, let him live in dissolute old age, worship other idols in your temple, let him return the Ten Commandments after his death, and then because of his life The previous actions did not cause Israel to be divided, but allowed it to be divided during the reign of Rehoboam and then destroyed by Babylon. Fourth, you are going to let Jesus Christ preach the idea of God's love for the world on earth, although he will be displeased by the Jewish secrets later. You were executed, then resurrected, performed miracles, and then left, while the new Christian church was severely persecuted, and then became the Orthodox Church and the state religion because of the victory of the Roman Emperor in the war Finally, you will be the same as your doctrine, existence, and essence because of the church. No matter, carry out long debates and accusations, the church will be divided because of this, it will be rebounded by humanism because of too much suppression, it will be divided again because of the Bible, and it will be declared dead by Nietzsche in 1882, and you will also declare Nietzsche's death in 1900. Finally, you will become a metaphysical, abstract philosophical God because of these people's long thinking, debate and criticism What is acting, what is sequence, what is uniqueness, God is not like this, I don't accept it!

0-01 Was axed. The protagonist's imagination and layout ability have absolutely no potential to become a sequence one writer. If he wants to solve the problem violently, 01 is simply buried in the hands of the protagonist😓

The protagonist has such a strong setting, why is his soul power awakening level so low? I thought it was the main character who was hiding, but it turned out that he wasn't? 😰Difficult to comment

Isn't this another torture of three and fifty? I want to see the wonderful chemical effect of the mysterious system in Douluo. Alas, I have watched too many anti-three-abuse-three movies, and I am tired of aesthetics. Is there anyone who is as tired of aesthetics as me? 😭

I can only say that I am worthy of studying at a certain station 🤔

Hello readers, I am a level 100 veteran in his group. If you haven't read it, but clicked on the comment area first, stop and take a look when you see my comment. This book is not as cool as the previous one, Laogui. In the early stage, I was frustrated and couldn't enter the main line. I was almost killed by the evil soul king with my unique 0-08, and I was still unwilling to use 008. Make money and pay off debts, saying that you have a bottom line. Sister, we have already started criticizing him in the group. He is still unwilling to change and has been immersed in his own fantasy. So if you read it, you have to wait until it is put on the shelves to see if my comments are good or not. It is clear at a glance. After all, he has learned from the past, and he has made a comeback at the front desk of the shelves, so I can only say to be cautious. Anyway, there are many poisonous thieves.

It's both mysterious and Honkai Impact. It's a bit confusing for those who have never played Honkai Impact. For those who have never played Honkai Impact, five main characters who are completely unknown to them suddenly appear out of thin air. It's a little bit incomprehensible.

It's hard to review this book. The title doesn't match the content. Just write Douluo and Mystery well. Is your grandma writing rice? ? This ingredient is too pure, it's better than the God King Tang, it's even better than the God King Shen. Look at you, Gaitu, you really can't hold it in any longer. Douluo is just Douluo. Why are you adding a lot of rice characters? I can't feel horny when I sleep at night, so I wrote a book to feel horny, which is in line with the impression of second-tier gamers.

It's the same as before, with no distinction between priorities and chaos. Douluo has no women, right? Do they have a sense of immersion in the original work? Writing a fan story is long-winded and rambling, but does not get to the point. You will not miss the same pitfalls that you have stepped on in this book. What kind of mystery, the original god, keeps stuffing it in, no matter whether it makes sense or not, is this a Douluo fanfic? The storyline is too disgusting if not handled well. It is hydrology at first glance😒😒

It starts off pretending to be naive, and then spends several chapters introducing past lives. This past life writing is okay, after all, it adds erotic elements. Then it's the daily life in the orphanage, and then there's the direct introduction to the five major departments, and then there's a bunch of sealed objects. Such a big thing, so many things, kept being explained and explained, and nothing else was looked at. I looked at the catalog and found that the time for awakening soul power was so late. I really don't know what to write. I'm just giving it as a reference for others.

Two questions, One is that I like not to see what bad things will happen to me in the next week. One is that the brain is filled with muscles, and the strength of the pen plummets. A large part of the strength of the pen comes from the way of laying foreshadowings, with several or even dozens of foreshadowings. One lever after another allows a person without power to plot the death of a god or even a group of gods by coincidence. Really, if the protagonist uses a good pen and writes one paragraph every day, Tang Dachui will probably be half dead or even fed to the will of the plane. A Yin will probably be too choked. The Poseidon family will have to break their bones, the whereabouts of Poseidon's artifact is unknown, and the Buddha in Tang 50 will probably lose his backhand several times.

The protagonist obviously takes the audience route and must walk to the stage like an actor. To be honest, the five paths of the Chaos Sea are not suitable for the protagonist. There are not many bottom lines in doing things. For example, the self-sacrifice of the Hanged Man and the justice of the sun are really not suitable for the protagonist. And the uniqueness and the sea of ​​chaos will affect the character of the old man. The protagonist's character is not affected by the path of the sun at all. This spirit is even more powerful than the old man.

The author of 2D game playing stupidly

The biggest problem is that there are too many characters outside the original plot, and these characters take up a lot of the plot. Especially having a bunch of broken characters is very disconnected from the plot. I'm here to see Douluo fandom, not Honkai Impact fandom. If you want to write about characters from other anime, why don't you just write a comprehensive manga? You can write as much as you want, and I won't complain about you. If you want to write about Douluo, then write about Douluo well. When writing about Douluo and other fans, you are afraid that the author will take it upon himself to fabricate some new characters and new forces. What's more, if you are addicted to fabricating, it will seriously deviate from the plot.

If you are going to write a Honkai fanfic, you should at least express it in the title and introduction

I can't help but ask whether I am watching Douluo or Honkai Impact. It's not that I can't accept the second game characters, but why do you add more and more the further you go?

I felt pretty good after reading this book. I specifically looked for the previous book where the author was banned. I couldn't stand it anymore. I copied it from the early stage. The Silver Dragon King was also given to 50

Mijia wanted to obscenity me and said goodbye. (Returned from stack armor version 4.8)

The hook is too small, the whole bunch of poor ghosts lack energy, the dragon god can open up the divine world, it can't satisfy my bloodthirsty audience, everyone below the god king level will be at the children's table

I sew Zhanshuang, and I also sew Honkai a little better, just like the Spiritual Year book. Don't go in any ditch. If you don't look at rice, I'm lying to you. You can't stand playing with rice either.

It's too obscene, and I also like to write about Honkai Impact. I won't say much about the last one. Before it was put on the shelves, it completely followed the original work. This one is about the same. There is a lot of shit in it. For example, the current one is about Tang Wulin being completely covered in shit. He can't wash it off for a year and a half. You engage in pornography. I don't care about you. Ah, every picture is intertwined. It's like you can't live without a woman.

Isn't the plot of the Mi family the product of self-impression and the interaction between the left and right brains? All this nonsense literature is meant to appear noble. No matter how bad the plot is, as long as you shout some slogans at the end, a lot of people will resonate with it.

Water floods the golden mountain😤

I'm still too young, I feel like I'm not as good as in Dou Er. I'd say block the birth points of the major god realms, form the Burning Legion to attack Douluo, and have a battle between good and evil. No matter what, the abyss plane is worthy of being a villain.

Author! Just write about Lord of Mysteries or Iron Breaker in your next book!

Stop writing about Mi family characters. Douluo should just play dragon characters. Otherwise, the sense of violation would be too strong.

I recognize the author, and actually put the previous book on that one 😁