Yunxi Immortal Clan

No, bro, do you still want to use such an old trick? I listened to my brother's advice. Your ability to write about dead people is far different from that of the Xuanjian Immortal Clan. You only feel embarrassed and not touched at all. Don't do it again. It will expose your shortcomings.

Yes, but it's a pity that it's too young. The writing style is very sophisticated and has ancient meanings. However, the names of the two brothers are too similar and have no characteristics. I can't tell them apart after reading the whole story. It is recommended that the names of the characters who appear later should have characteristics. It is not easy to draw conclusions before the realm is developed. The geographical background of the ambush of the Han family should be properly explained. It has been more than ten chapters and it is still unclear where Yunxi is? I have no idea.

Although there are references, there are many who have learned from them and few who can write with some charm. I hope I can persevere.

Is it a group portrait? I hope it's not a group portrait 😭 The book next door is a group portrait and I didn't read it

The book is quite good. The world view, various settings and the character of the protagonist are very good. However, Yuxian can only be used by one person. Why should I start a family? Just come to the sect.

Cultivation system Qi refining → foundation building → Zifu → golden elixir. (Known speculation) Taoist tradition:

It's a mess, who is the protagonist? ?

Is it because the author has no common sense or is it a custom somewhere to call mother's cousins ​​uncle?

Let's pay attention to the following works: "Ancient Desolation: The Supreme Way of Heaven", the setting is reasonable, no wisdom, no hydrology, no conspiracy theory, no market. The perspective of a great practitioner, the perspective of a saint's heavenly mind. The updates are stable and there are many manuscripts saved~ https://magev6. If. Qidian. Com/h5/share/book? Channel=qidianapp&activityId=bookshare_03&tt=0&tc=0&nc=&nd=&spd t=14&spdid=109&ex1=1046018410&shareUserCode=IMs3D39j&bookId=1046018410&shareBookType=1&shareSource=3&_trace=qdappsfx

I will continue to read. Come on, the author. The writing is quite good. Xuanjian is not good enough. This is the author's opportunity. If you keep the current level, your grades will not be much worse.

The protagonist is made to disappear right after the game starts.

Personally, I think the writing style is better than Xuanjian, and the setting is more reasonable than Xuanjian.

The writing is very good. Although the plot is a bit cliche, the characters are well grasped. The world view is also well laid out. However, there are too few updates. It is updated at 11 o'clock in the middle of the night. This makes people have no confidence in you. It is too hellish. Even if you update it once a day, it would be better if the update time is during meal time.

After reading 3 chapters, the writing is okay, but the plot is not attractive enough. Slow heat? I hope it's a good work

Today's family cultivation literature imitates Xuanjian...

I think Tomato's The Supreme Immortal Tribe is also very good, even better than this one.