Swallowed Star: Jia Yi

In the first few chapters, it was written that Jia Yi did not create his own exercises, which was too unreadable. Isn't it a joke that the top master in the Chinese government even learned his own exercises from the God of Thunder?

The back will collapse. Author, you don't have the strength to support the protagonist in making such a big move. It will either collapse or start to crush the pig's feet later. Within 300 pictures

It's a good idea, but if you go back the timeline to tens of billions of epochs, I'll watch it

It's too invincible and it doesn't feel good. With such a big hook, I guess the protagonist will have to write a nanny story again, and he will probably have to be Luo Feng and Hong's nanny again.

It's too exaggerated. In the original universe, 40% of the level 5 divine bodies can be killed with one knife. Why don't you just kill it with one knife? It's simpler.

Not even a harem, not having many children, not having many blessings

This is a cloud author who has perfected the understanding of the ten laws. You said that your world master cannot break through because the original nucleus is too strong, which is barely self-consistent. But as long as you break through the original universe, you will automatically become the master of the universe. In the end, you can actually brake? I also accepted it 🙂

Forget Luo Feng, you will also give 100 Hunyuan units to the other two? Your father, what is this? Nausea…

Isn't it okay to skip Swallowing Starry Sky and write about the Origin Continent directly? Do you have to fart in the room and then go to the bathroom to change clothes? Now that Devouring 12 has been completed, it can be played solo. There is no need to imitate other protagonists. The protagonist's damage is already greater than anyone else's. If you write from the earth, you should carefully correct the ragged path from small to large, from weak to strong. If it doesn't work, don't start the Earth chapter. For Devouring 2, you can find a native to write through it, or there will be a strong person from the original universe who can go through reincarnation and counterattack all the way.

The plug-in is so big that the author can't control it at all.