Swallowed Star: Jia Yi

The previous chapters' description of Jia Yi not creating his own martial arts technique was really disappointing. How could the top expert of the Chinese government have to learn his own martial arts technique from Thor?

It's bound to fall apart later. Author, you don't have the ability to support the protagonist having such a huge power-up; it'll either fall apart later or start to overshadow the protagonist. (Around 300 pages)

The idea is good, but I would have watched it if you went back hundreds of billions of years in time.

If it's too invincible, there's no sense of satisfaction. With such a huge cheat code, the protagonist will probably end up in another nanny story, probably fawning over Luo Feng and Hong as their caretaker.

That's outrageous! In the primordial universe, one strike could take down a 40% level 5 divine body. Why don't you just one-shot it? Be even more decisive!

He had neither a harem nor the blessing of many children.

This is a cloud author. He's perfected all ten laws of enlightenment. You say your realm lord can't break through because the primordial core is too strong, which is barely plausible. But once you break through, the primordial universe will automatically transform you into a universe lord. And yet you can still stop yourself? I'm speechless. 🙂

Forget about Luo Feng, you're giving the other two 100 Mixed Yuan Units too? Are you kidding me? Disgusting…

Why not skip Swallowing the Starry Sky and go straight to the Origin Continent? Why did you have to fart in the room and then go to the toilet to change clothes? Now that Swallowing the Starry Sky 1 and 2 are finished, you can totally write a standalone story. You don't need to imitate other protagonists; the protagonist's cheat codes are already bigger than anyone else's.

The cheat code is too powerful; the author can't control it at all.