Desolate Era: Ji Yan

Ji Yan has an idea for his ultimate path: he will not follow the sword path of the protagonist in the original work, since the protagonist has never been shown to have sword talent. I hope someone with a brilliant mind can help me. I will combine everyone's suggestions to generate a new ultimate solution.

Here's a suggestion: Ji Ning should ideally be a background character, with minimal interaction with the main character. When traversing the spatial passages outside the Three Realms, the main character could be sent to other locations, thus deviating from the original story.

I spent four hours reading this far, and it's a shame. You can tell the author really wanted to write it well. The plot device is admittedly a bit overpowered, but it's still enjoyable to read. The writing style and character descriptions are decent, nothing special. However, it's obvious the author didn't draft an outline, or perhaps drafted one but didn't follow it.

The cultivation system of the Way of Time and Space The first level of the power of spacetime, 'Four Extremes' The second layer 'void' The third layer, 'eternity' The fourth layer, 'Heart of Time and Space' The fifth level, 'God of Time and Space' The sixth layer, the 'World of Time and Space'. If you have any better suggestions, please share them. If there are any more suitable ones, we will adopt them. We are almost finished writing this far.

This book is alright, but the outline is really too immature. The plot feels too predictable; you can guess what's going on. Also, I think there are some difficult aspects to handle now. For example, should the protagonist participate in the Myriad Manifestations True Man's conference? Where will that satisfying moment come from?

What I hate most is when the protagonist of a story is from the same family as the original protagonist, or follows the original protagonist without having any of their own ideas. They have to follow the original protagonist and can't have their own opportunities and main storyline.

When writing fan fiction, you can't revolve around the protagonist of the fan fiction. Otherwise, what about the protagonist of your own novel? You need to grasp the balance between the main and secondary elements. Fan fiction is about copying the setting, but creating your own plot. Setting up the world is the most difficult part, which is why fan fiction exists. Only this kind of fan fiction can be considered a masterpiece. If I just copy everything, I might as well read Desolate Era again.

To be honest, this book feels too contrived. Why does the world have to be in the same family as Ji Ning? And frankly, the system in the early part of the book also felt rather mediocre and forced. Also, there's no need to join the Black and White Academy. A fanfiction should indeed be faithful to the original work, but being too faithful to the original work is actually not good at all. Hopefully, we can get out of the Black and White Snow Palace before we defeat all of Ji Ning's monsters.

It's been four months since it was last updated, yet it's still included in the daily reading guide. Is there something seriously wrong with Qidian?

This dungeon is making my head spin. I really don't understand what the author's "cheat code" is supposed to do. Is it just about getting rewards for completing levels in a game? I'm sure many others are also confused. Please revise it quickly. I basically skip through most of your dungeons; it's a waste of your typing, author.