Warhammer 40,000: Shadows of Fenris

It's very ugly to write, I'm afraid of death and I'm jumping all over the place again and again.

The character design of the protagonist is not likable. The character shown in Chapters 3, 4, and 5 is like a person who would join the gang because he is afraid of death.

I didn't write the flavor of Warhammer.

Why does this Space Marine taste so wrong? Didn't you say that there was brainwashing during the transformation? The first few chapters were too cowardly.

The character of the protagonist is okay. I've seen it before. So far, the armor strength is too weak. Many things that appeared in the later stage are now in the early stage. There are no other problems.

Aren't you in the ice field of Terra? How come you are introduced as Fenris? The timeline should be just after the Unification War, and Fenris hasn't even returned yet, right?

After Chapter 30, the text and plot gradually get better. However, when the protagonist, as a time traveler, knows the nature of the emperor, he should not be obsessed with the proposition of whether he is a human being or whether he loves others. It is too cliché to rewrite this proposition.

I kind of know the template for the protagonist of this book. The official protagonist is Kaifas Kane, right?

It's like having hyperthyroidism, three-quarters of the punctuation marks are exclamation marks

It is completely impossible to survive in Warhammer. When facing the enemy, you have to kill the enemy and survive, instead of complaining. If he were not the protagonist, he would have died long ago.

After Chapter 32, I feel that the protagonist has changed or grown up. The protagonist is not so afraid of death. Then about Carlos Gorehowl, I thought the author would write about him, but he didn't appear in the chapters I saw. Will the author still write about him?

Dead, dead again, a waste of monthly tickets

The writing after chapter 32 is pretty good, come on

The war scenes and details are still good

The initial impression in the first few chapters was off, but it became much better after more than 30 chapters. That is, can we confirm the name of the protagonist? It is difficult to add brackets next to the name. The name of the original body is quite good and not abrupt (눈_눈)

So it's salted fish jumping again, is it broken?

According to the current level of writing, you can become a hit, but whether you can continue to do so is a question. I don't know if you can update it.

Is the company commander a commander or a top soldier? Do you have a thousand men under your command?

The author won't stop updating again