Dou Po: Xiao Yan, I Am Your Second Master

Xiao Yan, I am your second master. You have inherited my inheritance, but you must spend all 1 billion within a month.

When it's not about the emotional scenes between men and women, it's a top-notch work. When it's about the emotional scenes, it's just a piece of fun. I can't stand it anymore. When it comes to the emotional scenes, I want to abandon the book. Once I skip the emotional scenes, I feel like the writing is okay. If you don't understand this kind of thing between men and women, why not simply skip it? Let them be a vase. That's fine. Just prove that the protagonist is not gay. You really don't need to write anymore. It's too embarrassing and too difficult to stretch. It's so innocent. In order to keep up with the protagonist's cultivation progress, he just cultivated up casually. He even had a higher cultivation level than the protagonist without doing anything. Who did you write the book with as the main body? Who is the winner between the two? He is a person whose cultivation is much higher than that of the original work at the same time. The key point is that there is not much ups and downs. The male protagonist is exhausted and looks like a dog, but he is in a lower level. The writing of this part is really disgusting.

I was really looking forward to Xiao Yan's appearance, but now I'm working as a nanny for Xiao Yan.

Treasure-hunting dragon, gluttonous dragon, big loli

I'm invincible. I was bored recently. I read this Dou Po novel yesterday and it looked good. I bought it all. I also voted for the monthly and recommended votes because I liked Medusa a bit, so I sent it to accept or not to accept Medusa. But when I woke up today, I found out that the author said, "If you don't want to accept it, just accept it."

The dialogue between the characters feels really awkward, and it feels like everyone is startled when talking and communicating. 😅

It feels like it has deviated from the main plot. Too much time has been wasted on Yun Yun. Now it doesn't match the introduction at all. I really want to watch a single girl, two girls and multiple female protagonists. I can definitely watch urban or other types. I don't watch Dou Po just to watch the protagonist and Xiao Yan and the others. But you gave me this kind of alternative protection. Well, this is a waste of time, mainly because the writing is not good. These pictures are directly forced to be cheated by Yun Yun. From Dou Huang to Dou Zun, the protagonist is Dou Zong. I don't know what kind of mood I had to buy these pictures. I have been waiting for Xiao Yan's appearance and the protagonist's strength. I really don't want to pursue it anymore now, ugh.

"Getting acquainted", a fatal blow

The fake mainland's number one alchemist—Yao Lao The real "Dou Qi mainland's number one alchemist"—Hun Tiandi

I discovered a coincidence. The fanfics I looked at were mostly written by about 10 authors.

The biggest shortcoming of fan fiction is that they really like to be a nanny for the protagonist. As long as they don't act as a nanny for the protagonist, and then add a harem, they will basically attract most readers, because there are many old pornographic comments about fan fiction.

1. Yun Potian, the founder of the Yunlan Sect, is a servant of the Xiao clan like Ling Ying. After escorting the remnants of the Xiao clan to the Gama Empire, he lurked and was responsible for guarding the gate of the Xiao Realm 2. The Gate of Life and Death is a time and space tunnel, and the link behind it is the breached Xiao Realm. There are space and time turbulence everywhere inside, but the spiritual energy is n times that of the outside world. 3. Another story line: Xiao Yan thinks that he is not worthy of Naran Yanran and hopes that she will wait three years to prove herself. Three years later, she will defeat Yanran and be made things difficult for her by the great elder to expose the soul clan in him. Means, the Jie Jie monster appears, and Naran Yanran escapes into the Gate of Life and Death, Xiao Yan gets the Xiao clan gift package, and Naran Yanran gets the Yun Potian inheritance 4. The cave of the strong that Xiao Yan and the Little Medical Fairy explore is a The Douzong named Lord Reincarnation burned three treasure boxes together with strange fire to find the Six Paths of Samsara Fire 5. Yun Yun couldn't cook, so she used the charm potion as salt, and almost had sex with Xiao Yan 6. There was a netherworld swamp in the Scorpio Mountains that regularly erupted with tides of poisonous gas. There were emerald green butterflies deep in the swamp, which was the netherworld poisonous fire. The person was bewitched by the Soul Palace and stabbed his master because "I am a poisonous body of calamity and we are impossible". (It's a traditional art) After that, the poisonous body broke out and all life was devastated. He was killed by the strong man from Zhongzhou, and his body was cut in half and fell into the turbulent flow of space. , Half of which was restrained by the Ice Lord 8. The canyon between Fenglei Mountain and Fengqi Mountain is the forbidden area of Fenglei Pavilion. There is wind and thunder in it that requires three thousand thunders to obtain 9. In Ye The city dredged the Yanghuo Altar, and there was Xuanhuang Yan under the altar 10. Ancestor Fenyan and Xiao Xuan were brothers. In order to help the Xiao clan escape from injury, they also concealed the fact that the Three Mysterious Transformations of Skyfire could stimulate the Xiao clan's bloodline and promoted the idea that they were their own creation (the Three Mysterious Transformations of Skyfire in Fenyan Valley were not inherited from jade slips of information, but bamboo slips with text). In Yecheng, he helped the little fairy doctor to form elixirs, and that night the little fairy doctor helped Xiao Yan suck out the magic poison spots 12. While Xiao Yan obtained the three thousand flames, he missed the split of the Tianming Sect caused by the death of Xuan Mingzi, and the evil flower and evil king united with the Nine Heavens of the Soul Palace. Zun, stabbed Tian Mingzi on the back (according to unreliable unofficial history, the relationship between the two was master and apprentice) 13. There is a purple bamboo forest to the west of Huazong. The ancestor of the Alchemy Pagoda often sits on a stone turtle to admire flowers and bamboos. The stone turtle is the turtle's breath spiritual fire. (The ancestor is a pill. He also sat on the fire every day to bake, absolutely amazing) 14. Xiao Yan obtained the essence and blood of the Dragon King, obtained the Dragon Qi, returned to Xingyun Pavilion, took a break and went to the Sound Sect, and was able to obtain the advanced sonic fighting skills of the earth level. The dragon chanted, but he was beaten by the invitation letter from the ancient tribe. Breaking the journey 15. Everyone still doesn't know how Haibodong divided the remaining pictures of Pure Lotus 16. A beast tide occurred in the late Gama Empire, and the initiator was the Ten Thousand Beasts Spirit Fire 17. The corpse of the Sky Demon Phoenix that Xiao Yan encountered in the Black Corner Domain was the corpse that Zhu Kun conveniently crushed to death and placed next to the dragon egg Ziyan for food. He noticed space fluctuations when passing by somewhere, and it was gone forever. 18. The Heavenly Tomb created by the Emperor of Time can be moved at will just by clearing the soul body inside. The ancient clan killed it and moved it to the ancient world and threw Xiao Xuan into it to make a formation. Xiao Xuan had some control over the Heavenly Tomb 19. The Snake Tribe created by the combination of the Python Emperor and humans took away half of the bloodline power of the Nine Serenity Earth Python. The Snake Tribe needs to devour snake monsters because of genetic problems. God The bloodline will have a certain green three-flowered pupils (this means that the green three-flowered pupils cannot control the Sky-Swallowing Python but can catch the Nine Nether Pythons) 20 The Swallowing Spirit Clan is a native of Dou Po, and the Sword Emperor's specialty is targeting the Dou Emperor's blood Pulse (Fucking master of the civil war in the Hundred Emperors) 21. The ancient Emperor Shetuo knew how to practice with a hammer, Fen was definitely not created by him, he was the Fire Emperor's strange fire (=Xiao Yan's Xiaoyi)

The first comment section I looked at was the single chapter "Educating Readers". I won't talk about other questions. I also saw a lot of them in the comment section, but I have a question. Author, do you want to write a double-strength article? You say it is a fantasy upgrade flow, but I have never seen any upgrade to the point where the protagonist is equal to a bunch of people (the first chapter seems to imply that he is about the same strength as Xiao Yan in the end?). If you are going to write about the male and female protagonists being equally powerful, it would be better to say it in advance. As for the upgrade of supporting characters, I won't comment until I've watched it. I just want to ask first. Do you want to write about double strength? How strong? ?

Another licking dog😥

I originally wanted to watch it, but after reading that the author of the review asked the protagonist to arrange three harems for Xiao Yan, I thought about it and decided not to.

If the author doesn't know how to write multiple female protagonists, he doesn't have to write it. It feels awkward and a waste of words, but if you write it, just write it. There's not much to say about the early development stage of the plot. Just build up the relationship and strength. But after all, everyone wants to see the beginning of the plot, so it's better not to procrastinate too much in the early stage.

The writing style is a bit immature, and there are quite a few places in the book that are a little bit toxic, but I can barely read it. As I write it for a long time, my writing style will probably improve a bit. I hope it will get better as I write more in the future.

So why are there so many monthly tickets for this book?

No other comments, too many modal words, especially "ah", which makes me want to punch someone when listening to the book.

A two-star Dou Sage monster doesn't even have the soul power of Dou Zong.

Do you want to accept Gu Xun'er? If you don't accept it, the default is not to accept it.

The pace is relatively fast, but it is a bit deliberately suppressing the protagonist's combat power. It means that it is necessary and established for a while, but it doesn't work, and then it works again. In the fandom, it's okay. Later, Dou Dibie was compared to Di Zhizun, and Di Zhizun seemed to be rubbish. After ascending and converting spiritual power, you are almost the earth supreme. There is a big difference between the lower plane and the upper plane. Well, it can only be said that the low-quality planes can even use space to play against the fighting saints.

What kind of things does Xiao Lide have in his harem?

2 o'clock, what kind of stingy is this?

The setting of this book: Emperor Dou is equal to the supreme realm

I give you the pen. Please take a seat and let me appreciate your writing.

The author continues to code, but it's not enough to read 😐