Hogwarts: Harry Potter of the Constantine Family

This Harry seems a bit weak. He's been with Constantine for five years and studied at the school for a month or so, yet he's having trouble even fighting a troll. Constantine's intelligence outweighs his magical abilities, but that doesn't mean his magical abilities are weak. He's been with his foster parents for years, and this is his actual strength? Having a persona without real power is basically nonsense.

This book was written by me in order to emulate Hach. All the settings and plots in this book serve to create Hach. So if you feel something is wrong, something doesn't conform to the original setting, or something doesn't fit the patches the author added after the novel ended, then you're right.

If Harry had been raised by Chris Connors, he'd probably have lived a dissolute life, since Connors himself was quite the playboy.

I completely gave up after hearing the end of chapter 22. Aside from the fact that Harry lived with Constantine for five years, it felt no different from the original book. I had no desire to continue reading. 😅

It's well-written, but the main plot is unclear and the setting is incorrect. 1. The issue of his character design: Kang is called "Zha Kang" because he would betray even his closest friends and family. For him, a sense of responsibility is something that only emerges when he is forced to.

His butt's crooked. Harry Potter's dad wasn't a good person.

This Hermione is acting way too much like a mother hen. This isn't how you ship a couple—sticking together every day, interfering with everything, even controlling what you buy. She's so self-centered. It's only because the author wanted to create a ship that Harry became a simp and fawned over Hermione. In the original books, Hermione didn't have many fans before the trolls.

Removing Constantine from your build won't make any difference. I came for the Mystic and Hellish Demons, but I didn't get them.

The protagonist lives with Constantine and even gives Hermione protective gear, but when they encounter a troll, the gear doesn't work and Hermione is almost killed. The protagonist also makes a pact with the demon, but in the end, he can't even kill the troll. He summons a fish to lure the troll away and then falls unconscious. Having read so many fanfics, this is the first time I've seen a protagonist who is even worse and more useless than the original book.

The beginning was quite engaging, but once inside the academy, the protagonist became completely robotic, and the plot became incredibly weak and bland. He seemed indifferent to everything, caring nothing, as long as nothing bothered him while he was reading. That was the protagonist's state—like a robot.