Starting from Dongting

I don't understand why the protagonist keeps making money and running a business. Shouldn't the main thing be to improve his strength? I have been busy making money, but I haven't touched the cultivation aspect at all. The book is full of human feelings and sophistication. Is this still a fantasy novel?

This book is based on the traditional Taoist classical cultivation system. The four major realms are: Refining Qi to transform Qi-->Refining Qi to transform into Spirit-->Refining Spirit to return emptiness-->Refining emptiness to combine with Tao. The two major realms that are currently emerging are refining gas and refining gas and refining gas and transforming spirit. Refining and transforming qi (Qi refining realm) is divided into five small realms: Shouzhuo realm, which can be called a Taoist boy, stores essence and nourishes qi, consolidates the foundation and cultivates the essence; Condensing yuan realm, can be called a condensing yuan Taoist: the essence is transformed into innate qi, and has the key to enter the Tao; The Dengtang realm can be called a Dengtang Taoist: he introduces Qi into the body and officially enters the Tao; The Tongxuan realm can be called a Tongxuan mage: the muscles and veins of the whole body are connected to the sky and connects with nature, and the mysterious method has begun to be understood; The foundation building realm can be called a Foundation-building mage: the foundation of the Tao is stable, the beginning of immortality. Refining Qi and Transforming God (Yin Shen Realm) is divided into three small realms: Xuanming Realm, which can be called Xuanming Zhenren: Yin Shen first condenses, and spiritual thoughts are guarded within; Night Tour Realm, can be called Night Tour Zhenren: Yin Shen travels at night, short-distance body; Manifestation Realm, can be called Manifestation Zhenjun: Yin Shen condenses, and manifests briefly.

After reading the beginning, I felt pretty good, but I didn't explain clearly where the white jade snail came from. I was just confused. I don't know how it got here, and I don't know how it left.

Starting from Dongting and never leaving Dongting Lake

Put yourself in his shoes, if you really want to practice Taoism, you must read it when your cousin takes out the book on basic Taoism. Instead of going to the Suppressing Evil Division to die without the strength to restrain a chicken, his eyes darkened.

I don't have any abilities, and even having food is a problem. I chose the most dangerous job among three jobs. It's such a classic beginning.

Overall, it's well written. The writing style is a little lacking, which leads to the feeling that it is missing a little detail and a little aura when reading it. Of course, it is harmless. Although the plot arrangement is a bit fast and hasty, it can be seen that it was carefully planned. The plot arrangement is also quite acceptable. However, the foreshadowing seems a bit confusing because of the lack of some pen and ink. In the beginning and the golden finger, in the dozens of scenes that follow, the role feels a bit small. It's not that it didn't work. It can be seen that the author arranged the plot taking into account the character setting of the protagonist [low-level little guy Gou Dao], but overall, there is a lack of advancement in the direction of high-level power systems such as spiritual practice and Taoism. You can be stubborn, or you can play a small role at the bottom, but you can't ignore it, and you can't help but be involved. After all, this is the current trend of the Internet literature environment. So, the plot at the beginning is a bit inconsistent with the subsequent development of the plot, and it is a bit unable to keep up. To put it bluntly, it's just a bit off topic. My personal feelings are superficial, please don't argue with me.

The progress was too slow, and by the time I reached Chapter 30, the writing was getting more and more biased, so I started investigating the case. It's really incomprehensible. Of the authors I know who write this kind of thing, none of them are as popular as they are later. Another starting point is now. I don't know when it started. People who write about this kind of martial arts. If they are good at martial arts, most of them are about investigating crimes, or about the sophistication of the world! The topic was all off-topic, and in the end I had no results and couldn't write. A few people would come out and say that the writing was good, the writing was not bad, etc., Haha.

In the first 80 chapters, I saw three words, Xu Qian

Okay, the protagonist is not stupid

Did the protagonist of the marriage fraud at the beginning kill the screw girl?

Don't write about the plot of the silly Fukujian Zhen and the protagonist. It was quite funny when it first appeared, but it always seemed cumbersome, vulgar, and bad taste, especially the one that talks about a man and a brother-in-law. The cold emotional scenes at the beginning are quite thin, and this plot comes out of nowhere in the back. Don't you think it's strange? Wouldn't it be possible to advance the plot without creating some trouble for the protagonist? Again, if you want to write about the protagonist playing a rogue role, but it turns out to be a mouthful, you can add some laughter, which is understandable, but the key and tense plot behind it keeps calling back, which makes people feel very annoying.

Dongting Lake? Got it, the story of hairy crab spirit cultivation.

Hey, it's another year, I can't find a book to read at the starting point, it's so painfulpain

I just saw the published chapters, and I don't know what to do next. I thought the chapters before they were published were very interesting, and the characters were not broken. I feel they are much better than many novels on those lists. The author keeps the pace and writes well, don't rush, come on!

I told you so. You are so mean, Lu Changge is not cool, you are cool, I am a bookworm

In the future, should the platform develop a mechanism where eunuch articles can be unsubscribed?

Is the author still considering writing books full-time? I really like this book, it's a shame.

This book, although it was a lost dog in the early stage, it was a battle of wits and courage, which was quite enjoyable to read. Now I seem to be running amok, but I feel like a clown jumping up and down and accomplishing nothing. It's very frustrating. If I continue like this, this book will be useless.

Proving Yang Shen is quite exciting, but it has nothing to do with the awesome swordsmanship. The only function of this sword is to attach the Five Elements Law to it and split the sky. Proving Yang Shen relies on the Five Elements Law, dragon beads, and dragon scales. I don't see any connection with the swordsmanship. I also want to ask, does this swordsmanship prove Yang Shen successful or not? Let an experienced Taoist friend clarify the confusion.

I saw 2 monthly votes in other books this month and voted for you. I will keep them for now and save more to read together. Actually, what you wrote is not bad, but you don't have a good grasp of the heat, just like the state of a man's stuff, whether it's hard or soft.

Emotional details still need to be improved. For example, the little black snake before was so stupid, working hard for you, hooking up fish for you, and running errands without making any mistakes. The moment you first saw him manifesting the Yin God after proving the Yang God, shouldn't you feel happy, touch his head and pat his back, and then give him something useful?

It feels really average and doesn't suit my taste, so I'm withdrawing it~~

I don't like the setting of adding Ru into the mysterious power. Because Confucianism itself is opposed to these.

There is no water in this work, and there are delays. It is a rare masterpiece. It is a pity that it has not become popular; it also has its shortcomings. The details are not enough, and many exciting contents are not presented. For example, the royal family should have an ancestor of Yang Shen in the setting to enhance the strength of the royal family. Isn't it childish and ridiculous for a Yin God Emperor to compete with a group of Yang Shen Daomen for dragon eggs? The royal family wants to control the Daomen and obtain the Jiaolong eggs, and cooperates and intrigues with the Guoshi faction. This part could have been very exciting, but it is missing. Not majestic enough, a bit petty, like dragon eggs. Can't it be a dragon egg? The dragon gives the impression of a snake, and the dragon egg is obviously taller. There is no system in Kung Fu. Upgrading means automatically advancing after absorbing enough spiritual energy. There is no realm perception. The protagonist should be given an awesome Kung Fu. Swordsmanship is just a technique. The transformation and sublimation of the body depends on the Kung Fu. The improvement of realm perception and the improvement of swordsmanship perception will give readers a full sense of expectation. This part is missing. It's time to feel uncomfortable, blindly suppressing, pursuing the so-called reasonableness, the protagonist Du Yangshen holds the dragon ball in his hand, and attacks with infinite nuclear power. You insist on writing it all the time, and it feels aggrieved. Not everyone in the Taoist Yangshen is a great true king. It is easy to catch a few Yangshen who don't have a calamity-preventing magic weapon and kill two or three. If a Yangshen without a calamity-preventing magic weapon uses the power of the Yangshen in front of the protagonist, he will die, but if he doesn't use the power, he will still die. You kept jumping up and down but didn't get rid of any of them. Your so-called reasonableness is actually completely unreasonable. This part of the assassination and counter-hunt, which was originally a very exciting climax plot, is missing. There are many more. I feel a little tired after writing it here, so I won't go into details. I suggest you use this book as an outline and write another one in detail. Pay attention to the details and it will be popular in the future.

Have you ever thought that the relationship between the protagonist and Li Wan Bai came out of nowhere? The only time Li Wan Bai managed to save the protagonist was because he was worried that the protagonist would die, and his motive for repeatedly trying to tie Lu Changge up was to get a third-grade entry qualification from the protagonist. It was purely an exchange of interests. How can there be any feelings at all? I don't know what the so-called feelings are.