
Swallowed Star: Simulating Life on a Slave Planet
吞噬星空:从奴隶星球开始模拟
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- Completed
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- 571k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 10mo ago
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- Qidian
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275Chapters
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Reader comments 30
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About Pansy
This is the original text. Being able to capture the slave planet with the ninth-level planet-level iron vine grass shows that the planet's defense is very weak. The original description of the iron vine grass is that it is a little stronger than humans at the same level, and even crossing the level is difficult You must know that Pansy is a slave, and the ninth-level apprentice level of Devouring Stars can be sold as a slave. In addition, the slave chip is not actually that precious, so Pansy's own strength is definitely not high. Then there is the issue of Locke Divine Water. In the same way, Pansy was born as a slave. Why would he cultivate the ninth-level iron vine grass if he didn't get the Locke Divine Water at the beginning? It is simply not worthwhile to give slaves too many resources. A ninth-level apprentice-level slave only costs 20 black dragon coins.
Anyway, I think it's suppressing the protagonist. . . , It's still planet-level now!
Is the author overpowering?
Now that I have read the latest chapter, let me share my thoughts. What I said before is nothing. It can still be said to be a divine book. When it came to the Domain Lord, it was obvious that the author wanted to suppress the combat power. Various suicide attempts in the simulation. He's going to die quickly anyway. According to the skills that the protagonist uses, he is definitely better than Luo Feng in the original work. After all, you can gain your future self's cultivation insights and abilities in advance. And you can also get the most precious or important treasures at will. It can be said that it is stubborn and does not care about the end. It is obvious from the front that the author has reached a new height in his writing. Then it collapsed again. I guess the author can tell now that the current results are probably not even 1/2 of the previous ones. I hope the author still pays attention to quality. Written recently. It's too watery and doesn't look like it.
The follow-up is about to start. I kidnap Luo Feng and develop independently. Don't liaise with the human race anymore. I saw it in one breath and the writing is great. I hope that the protagonist will either build an organization similar to the Ancestral God Cult or be a lone ranger to the end. As long as you have sex with the human race, I will feel pity. You are invincible and you don't need anything. I hope the author will stabilize the so-called background 😭, and don't follow the human race and immediately become a dog in the past as soon as they are attracted by the human race. You must know that others cannot trust you. You have to treat them as your father to escape the crisis of trust. Either the love has no boundaries and accepts all races, or you are selfish to the end 🪖
In reality, it is best not to become a disciple. If you have this problem, it will be unnecessary and completely irritating and very discouraging.
This book is not bad, but the simulation is a bit uncomfortable without God's perspective. The real-life plot is quite reasonable. I suggest the author make the protagonist smarter in the simulation so that readers can be retained in the early stage.
The protagonist lost his body early. To be honest, it will be difficult for you to write later. The protagonist has no relatives, and the protagonist has no wife or children after he has lost his body. After the protagonist rises, will he help the slave-owning cosmic people to cultivate true gods so that they can develop a family, and then cultivate geniuses in other families?
This book is really well written, and there is a chance it will be a fine product
To be honest, this book is quite interesting. It may be a good product.
The author, Pan Xi is also a Realm Lord, which means that Luo Feng will appear in at least hundreds of thousands of years and at most millions of years.
I have read all Chapter 58, let me know what you think after reading it.
1. The pace is okay, not too urgent and slow, and the reading is relatively smooth 2. The simulation content is severely repeated, accounting for at least 5% of the full text 3. The gap between the strength of reality and simulation is too big This article has some advantages. It is a careful simulation, with a good sense of substitution, and the rewards after the simulation are also very exciting. But the shortcoming is fatal. Author, have you ever thought about putting it on the shelves? If you are just a hobby, writing a short fan article worth hundreds of thousands to entertain yourself is no problem, but if you are doing it to make money, how many people do you think will read it?